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chiickadee

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 9:56 pm


Sable's Door <3

Sailor Draconis | Lt. Heulandite
PostPosted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 9:58 pm


Name: Natalia Clarice Sable

Nickname: Please call her Sable. She will rage quit if you don't. :C
Most people don't even know her name is Natalia- save for those who have seen her official records. She goes by Sable with everyone, and some call her Clarice as well.

Age: 15

Birthday: November 2nd

Sign: Scorpio

Gemstone: Ruby

Blood Type: AB

Fav. Food: Sweets of any sorts. She especially likes petit fours, cupcakes, and other dainty looking snacks.

Hated Food: Anything with an "icky" color.

School: St. Magdalena's

Hobbies:

Dolls: Of course, like most girls, Sable was given your stereotypical barbie and porcelain dolls when she was young. However, her love of dolls did not stop there. While she moved on past barbies and bratz dolls, she kept her passion for dolls as a whole. Eventually, it developed into a love of ball-jointed dolls. She has three dolls, and loves setting them up in various sceneries, clothing, settings, etc. As such, she is a very accomplished seamstress- she sews all of her dolls' clothing and accessories. She can often be seen running to the craft store to purchase more fabric and thread, or in the town square setting her dolls up near that oh-so-perfect fountain for the perfect shot.

Violin: While she isn't very good at it, Sable owns a very basic, simplistic and polished violin. She has been practicing for only a year or two now, and can play simple songs like jingle bells and happy birthday. Regardless, she is very proud of her abilities, and can often be seen polishing the violin and its case, or playing her violin outside, by a park or a cafe. She has an instructor who teaches her once a week, but Sable does most of her learning outside of classes. She enjoys making up stupidly simple melodies and just humming along to it. Sable began her journey with the violin after she watched a man perform a violin piece at the local mall. Of course, she had seen violins before, but watching the man play captured her heart, and she immediately begged her mom for a violin (she promptly said no, course). Sable searched around her school for some connection to a violin, and is now loaning "her" violin from the band teacher. She takes exceptional care of the violin though, so the teacher doesn't complain much.

Fencing: Sable's first encounter with fencing was in a fitness class, which her mother insisted she take (the old "you're not doing anything active, go play outside!" routine). She fell in love very quickly with it though- she adored the combination of etiquette and conflict. The sport allows Sable to channel her sadism, while keeping it in a safe, and controlled environment. She enjoys hustling others using a simple, common strategy. A simple "oh I am soooo bad at fencing, could I maybe possibly play with you?" is usually all it takes. She then goes all out to the best of her ability, leaving the opponent completely bewildered. However, she does not use this technique all the time. Obviously it no longer works on classmates and friends. Instead she chooses to use this technique when applicable. Due to her happiness and excercise, her parents support her very much, and often come to her tournaments to watch her fence.

Baking: Sable isn't necessarily good at baking- by definition. She can't make elaborate cakes that tower a gajillion feet high. She can't make rose petals out of frosting, nor can she make chocolate shaped like reptar. But what Sable can do is bake a lot. She loves to bake, especially with her mother. They create what you would find in most households- brownies, chocolate chip cookies, the occasional birthday cake and more. She loves decorating the cookies with creatively placed sprinkles and homemade frosting. While its no professional work of art, she enjoys having the ability to manipulate decorations. She often takes her baked sweets to school, just because she has such a surplus at home. You can bet if you're friends with Sable, you'll have tasted her cookies at least once.

Virtues:

Sweet As Sugar: Sable has a ridiculously sweet attitude. She is constantly smiling or laughing, and enjoys using this to the best of her abilities. She constantly makes up nicknames for people, even if they don't necessarily want them. Is your name Francessa? Say hello to Franny. In her secret arsenal she has a pair of those puppy dog eyes that say, "I'm so cute, how could you do this to me?" However, unlike most would think, she is sincere in her sweetest. She doesn't do it simply for the purpose of manipulation or satire (though that is a bonus), it is a trait she merely has an utilizes.

Cover it up- Quick!: When you need something to look pretty or, at least, cover something up, Sable is your girl. She is skilled at decorations, or rather, application of decor. Not only does this win her A+'s on school art projects, she can also hide something perfectly. Don't ever try to search for her diary, you'll end up searching forever. In this way, she can cover her tracks, or others' tracks lickety split. She's very specific about what needs to go where, in order to make the perfect disguise. In this way, she can also create disguises for herself, in order to sneak around and steal star seeds. Reminds you of a certain iron mouse, doesn't it?

My Little Box of Sadness: Sable is a tough girl, mentally that is. Call her ugly? She doesn't mind. Tell her about how much she fails in life. Not a problem. It's not like the comments don't hurt her after piling up- she isn't simply saying "your comments don't affect me!" It's more like she can appear blatantly unaffected by your twitters, even if the comments hurt her quite a bit. She will simply brush it off, and move the conversation along. Metaphorically, she puts all of this anger and sadness into a box, in order to focus on her school life and work. Of course, this results in a lot of pent up sadness, but she often just cries it out at home, or in random locations when no one is around.

Flaws:

Sour as a Lemon: Through her sweet demeanor, Sable has a dark, dark inner self. Secretly, and perhaps a bit unconsciously, Sable is very sadistic. She enjoys the pain of others (save for her friends and loved ones), but tries not to completely cause it. It's not so much that she's running and stabbing people just to watch them bleed. It's simply that she enjoys watching a stranger trip, looking at a child frightened of a clown or gazing on the nerd getting beat up at school. She is not happy about this fascination with hurting though. It's like when you stare at a puppy, you feel happy. You don't know why, you just do. It's the same way for Sable, she just feels it. Of course, all of this is very, very underwraps. She will present herself as a sweet little girl, but it's more like how Ladon keeps his love of cute things underwraps- it keeps slipping out in little bits and pieces. She's currently trying to fight it from coming out; she feels like her sadism is slowly poisoning her from the inside out, and she definitely does not like it.

The Remote Control: While her attitude is very cute, Sable's demeanor is also very controlling. She has what you might call a "superiority" complex. She doesn't necessarily feel above the person, or better than them, she just wants to be in control of the situation, no matter what. If she's losing in a game, you can bet your bottom dollar she's upset about it. She'll use her puppy dog look to get you to pick up that bottle, simply because she doesn't want to get up. Sable hasn't necessarily noticed how controlling she is, she just thinks that everyone sort of strangely bends to her will. When not in control, she throws a fit and becomes very pouty.

We do this MY way: It's not like Sable has no morals at all; she just has her own personal set of morals. Letting someone die by stealing their starseed is perfectly fine- they went to a better use. Pushing someone down who is in your way is completely normal. While others might not understand her system, because of her superiority complex, she believes that no one has the right to tell her she's wrong. She literally only answers to beryl and those ordered to be her masters (ie; her parents, teachers, people she respects, etc.) Anyone below her has to play by her rules. It's Sable's way or the highway. If someone disobeys this, her personality flips and she becomes very rude and demeaning, until they finally relent. If they don't relent, she simply pouts and storms off, and will hold a grudge for the rest of time. (It's a bit hilarious to watch, but you certainly don't want to tell her that).

Little Box Explosion: All of that pent up sadness has to go somewhere. All of those comments get brushed aside, but they slowly pile up. Eventually she just has mini eruptions. When no one is around she'll just burst into tears. When she's having "one of those days" she might snap at anyone and everyone just for existing. Underneath all her polite smiles and conversation segues, there's a lot of hurt and denial that comes out drop by drop to poison her daily life.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: #32D496, bright. not necessarily shiny desu ovals. should hold a bit of knowledge in them, like sailor calypso

Hair: a sort of miku hatsune style, except it only goes down to her hips, not down to her knees.
another reference?
as for color, it should be light cotton candy pink- girl on the left, obviously xD
for accessories- perhaps bows to tie each ponytail? maybe with little star trinkets in the center? artist's choice c:

Face: oval, mostly artist's choice.

Clothes: school uniform~

Stature: Sable is small compared to most people. She is often confused for a middle school student, even though she's in high school.

chiickadee

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chiickadee

Princess Hoarder

PostPosted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 9:59 pm


Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant Heulandite

Challenge: tba

Uniform: Completely artist's choice. Inspiration from these pictures and my input?
xxx
Basically a cute military type. Preferably something she could move around in.

Top -- artist's choice
Bottoms -- must be a skirt, but artist's choice. maybe with belts hanging off either side and crisscrossing in the back, like the boy twin's in this image?
Gloves -- artist's choice
Belt -- artist's choice
Shoes -- artist's choice. preferably sensible shoes. legwarmers? or maybe just saggy boots? <3
Shoulders -- artist's choice
Accessories - if possible a sort of chain key holder that would dangle from her waist? other than that, artist's choice c:

Weapon:

Stage one : Key
As stated, keys, like you might unlock a door with. Not a modern key, but a sort of old fashioned key. Colored a polished, shining silver, her key looks pretty much like the image reference. Useful for chucking, and that's about it.

Stage two : Bigger Key
Now the key has grown about the length from fingertip to elbow (a foot or two). It has a handle in the middle of the key head, and looks a bit like the princess' kaleidoscopes in terms of size and shape. The head is heart shaped, whereas the end still has two prongs, like a normal key. Still colored bright silver, but has a sort of pinkish hue to it now. Does nothing except work exceptionally well for whacking others.

Stage Three : Keyblade
Yes, yes, "just like kingdom hearts!" Moving on, the key has now become about as long as an arm. The head, where the handle is, has grown more intricate like so (referring to the bottom key). The key is still blantantly silver, but the head/handle is now noticeably pinker. Leaving it up to the artist to determine what they want to do with this stage c:

personal youma?: not quite sure on the requirements or whatever for this, but just in case sable does get a youma, it would be a pinkish sort of leopard, but a bit more mutated looking. Would be large enough that she could ride it?

main uniform color: artist's choice
piping color: artist's choice o 3o
PostPosted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 10:00 pm


More Interesting traits:

Falcon PAWNCH: For her small stature, Sable has a ridiculous amount of strength. She can bust down doors and lift people twice her size. This isn't to say she is THE WORLD'S STRONGEST GIRL DESU (for that would be mary-sue-ish, now wouldn't it?). It's simply that she has the strength of a football jock, which is surprising for how small she is. Coupling this, for some odd reason, Sable also weighs a ton. She's not fat, she's just hard to move or pick up. Honestly, just think of a really small, but dense and heavy stone. She's the one you want to ask for help with that pickle jar you can't open.

Too much PAWNCH: Unfortunately, Sable does not know her own strength. When she's angry, she often smashes things on accident (not like, SHE SMASHES WINDOWS AND TABLES, I mean more like she smashes soda cans and notebooks). She also hugs WAY too tightly, and sometimes high fives so strongly it stings. This has led to a few incidents of destroyed property, though she almost always gets away with it. However, once or twice she's been caught, so she was sent to Magdalena's Academy for "reform."

((overall, she's proportionally stronger than average, and weighs a ton. its odd, and sticks out, but i mean it to be that way. if you'd like an example, just ask <3))

Love interest? So far, I have a planned love interest for her and Sailor Elpis. It's just something that syu and I have been talking over. xD Just writing it here for further reference and what not.

Why the negaverse?: In simple terms, it allows her to vent her strength and sadism in what she believes (or rather, she has been convinced) is a good method. Plus, with her fencing skills and strength, she is quite the opponent to mess with. While both of her parents love her, they both work late into the night, so she has plenty of spare time to use sneaking out and stealing starseeds for her "worthy cause." She worships the very ground Beryl walks on, and wants nothing more to please her.

While in the negaverse?: Once Sable is corrupted, she would be a useful front line sort of opponent. She doesn't particularly have a fear of killing people- what with her sadism, and her desire to rise higher within the ranks (as she believes that in doing so, she is doing good). She's quite a strong adversary, and would be exceedingly loyal to Queen Beryl/various general-kings. She would willingly due about any task that a higher rank sets her out to do, even if its something sort of painful for her- something very useful in a minion.

Pose Ideas:
Just a few pose ideas for the negas. Just for fun!
xxx ooo xxx

Possessions:
Stella: The first of Sable's three dolls, Stella is very special to her. She is limited edition, so Sable had to save up a lot of money to get her. She loves brushing Stella's long hair, though she really doesn't know why.

Stella Reference

Hyorin: The second of Sable's three dolls. Sable is exceedingly protective of Hyorin, because she was Sable's first doll, gifted to her by her father. Hyorin is probably her most used doll.

Hyorin Reference

Chase: The third of Sable's three dolls. Chase is the only one of Sable's dolls where she kept the original, company given name. Chase is secretly her favorite doll to take pictures of, just because he fits so many different situations.

Chase Reference

Foils: Sable has been fencing for a while now, and as such, she has her own set of foils. They are simple, and aren't customized in any way. She prefers using one until it breaks though, as she thinks of her foils as a simple extension of her arm. You wouldn't switch arms, would you?

chiickadee

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chiickadee

Princess Hoarder

PostPosted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:01 pm


okey dokey, open for crits ! 8D
PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:14 pm


Fencing: A couple quick questions:
Is she actually still capable of hustling other fencers like this? Especially those in her class? I'd kind of wonder if most of them didn't already know by now that she's a skilled opponent.

Also at tournaments, since she's going to be matched up according to her skill levels I think, I'd have to wonder if the attempts to hustle didn't wring a little false.

What kind of techniques would she have adapted since then? Does she still enjoy the fights if she can't catch her opponent quite as off guard? Also does she cheat or consider trying to do moves that would be considered 'illegal' during fencing, if she thinks she can get away with it?


My little Box of Sadness: Does her 'little box' fuel her sadism? And does she realize that the things that hurt her are some of the same behaviors she enjoys doing to others, since you've marked her as having a sadistic streak. Does she care if she does realize the irony in this?

Keyblades: Fencing Blades and Keyblades are designed for different fighting styles, this may present some interesting challenges for her, since a Fencing sword is technically a stabbing weapon, and Keyblades... well. They're not. How do you think she'll react to this challenge and change to what she's used to?

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chiickadee

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:29 pm


Xaotl
Fencing: A couple quick questions:
Is she actually still capable of hustling other fencers like this? Especially those in her class? I'd kind of wonder if most of them didn't already know by now that she's a skilled opponent.

Excellent point. I suppose it would be more like she hustles kids who are new in the class. Her other classmates probably already know and fear her abilities. will edit in o 3o
Xaotl

Also at tournaments, since she's going to be matched up according to her skill levels I think, I'd have to wonder if the attempts to hustle didn't wring a little false.

well in tournaments she obviously wouldnt be hustling, she would just be doing her best. its not like she uses hustling all the time, its like she uses it when applicable. will make that a bit clearer !

Xaotl

What kind of techniques would she have adapted since then?

im afraid i dont know what you mean by this sentence xD;; OTL

Xaotl
Does she still enjoy the fights if she can't catch her opponent quite as off guard? Also does she cheat or consider trying to do moves that would be considered 'illegal' during fencing, if she thinks she can get away with it?

yup. she likes fencing through and through. i think if it was really open to her, she would cheat. but fencing matches have refs watching you like a hawk, so i dont think she would be able to get much past. she really does try to play fairly in most cases xD

Xaotl

My little Box of Sadness: Does her 'little box' fuel her sadism? And does she realize that the things that hurt her are some of the same behaviors she enjoys doing to others, since you've marked her as having a sadistic streak. Does she care if she does realize the irony in this?

my little box of sadness is supposed to be more like ... she pents up her sadness and then lets it explode all at once. so yes, i suppose it could fuel some of her sadism, but its not necessarily meant that way. perhaps they could be connected, but for right now they are two seperate traits ...
and i suppose their could be irony, but she's a bit ... dumb. she wouldnt really realize it xD

Xaotl

Keyblades: Fencing Blades and Keyblades are designed for different fighting styles, this may present some interesting challenges for her, since a Fencing sword is technically a stabbing weapon, and Keyblades... well. They're not. How do you think she'll react to this challenge and change to what she's used to?


well one point id like to make is that her keyblade doesnt come until general stage, so it would be a while before this problem even occurs

but yes, she would have trouble adjusting. she would definitely try to fence with it at first, and gradually grow used to using it different. in turn, this would also alter her fencing style. i think it'll be a very interesting mix and RP situation ouo

thanks so much for the crit <333
PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:40 pm


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Xaotl Wrote:

What kind of techniques would she have adapted since then?


I'm afraid I don't know what you mean by this sentence xD;; OTL



I meant: Since she seems to have a taste for deception, has she developed any other techniques for trying to draw people in? Does she favor feints, false injury... tricks that might make for an interesting cross over into her nega stage. smile

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chiickadee

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 12:07 pm


Xaotl

I meant: Since she seems to have a taste for deception, has she developed any other techniques for trying to draw people in? Does she favor feints, false injury... tricks that might make for an interesting cross over into her nega stage. smile


ohhh. no not really. she doesn't have any "special" moves, she simply follows basic class instruction. of course, all of those basics would carry over to her nega side, and it could offer some interesting rp. o v o

also ! updated a few things, like possessions and what not.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 10:37 am


redid her uniform a bit. am dropping the loli-tasticness and just gonna make it uniformly cute 3nodding

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:01 pm


Well, first off, I really like how well rounded your character is! Her flaws and virtues work well together! I just have a couple questions.

I noticed there is no family section. Was this intentional?

Also, where does Sable get her sadism? Has it always been there, since she was kid, or did something happen that bring it about?

Where did she learn to decorate?

You mention in a couple places that her parents were the "lock you out of the house, go be active!" types. Has this affected her relationship with her family? Do they give her grief about all the baking she does?


Sorry, I know this isn't a super awesome crit, just a couple questions that I thought when reading through an already well thought out character profile.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:58 pm


Blue Eyed Melloon
Well, first off, I really like how well rounded your character is! Her flaws and virtues work well together! I just have a couple questions.

goood good. i always like compliments 8D
/strokes her ego
Blue Eyed Melloon

I noticed there is no family section. Was this intentional?

nope im just lazy. will get on it OTL <3
Blue Eyed Melloon

Also, where does Sable get her sadism? Has it always been there, since she was kid, or did something happen that bring it about?

ah, thats sort of like asking where optimism comes from
she just sort of ... has it ?
its like when you see a cute puppy, you get all happy and fuzzy, right?
well sable giggles and smiles at pain o u o ...
well no. its just like ... "im really cute and adorable, but i want to see you squirm"
i hope that makes sense?

Blue Eyed Melloon

Where did she learn to decorate?

hmmm. i suppose just various birthday parties and school projects?

Blue Eyed Melloon

You mention in a couple places that her parents were the "lock you out of the house, go be active!" types. Has this affected her relationship with her family? Do they give her grief about all the baking she does?

its not like they're really strict about it, its sort of like her mom is just like "go play outside, its nice!" and she's not horribly rebellious to her parents, so she listened most of the time
i mean, parents always get irritated at weird things, and staying inside just happens to be her parents' thing.
i suppose from time to time it gets annoying for her and she will say "i dont want to!" but it would be very situational i think
they definitely love and support her baking. who doesnt like baked goods?

Blue Eyed Melloon

Sorry, I know this isn't a super awesome crit, just a couple questions that I thought when reading through an already well thought out character profile.

no no, i love ANY questions, they totally help!
thanks so much for the crit <3

chiickadee

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Akina Tokuwa

PostPosted: Fri Apr 29, 2011 7:17 am


ON THE CIVILIAN:

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The sport allows Sable to channel her sadism, while keeping it in a safe, and controlled environment.


Even though we play murderers in this shop a lot of times, we tend to ask people NOT to make their characters these sadistic people right from the start. It is a very hard thing to pull off – is it possible? Yes! But the general rule of thumb is NOT to write a sociopath. She is super, genuinely sweet… but also a totally sadist? Again, this CAN be done well, but I don’t really think it is working in this profile. So I would delete the above line.

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Sour as a Lemon: Through her sweet demeanor, Sable has a dark, dark inner self. Secretly, and perhaps a bit unconsciously, Sable is very sadistic. She enjoys the pain of others (save for her friends and loved ones), but tries not to completely cause it. It's not so much that she's running and stabbing people just to watch them bleed. It's simply that she enjoys watching a stranger trip, looking at a child frightened of a clown or gazing on the nerd getting beat up at school. As such, she loves horror and gorey movies- Saw is her favorite movie series. Of course, all of this is very, very underwraps. She will present herself as a sweet little girl, but it's more like how Ladon keeps his love of cute things underwraps- it slips out in little bits and pieces.


In this post, you are essentially saying that Sable is an undercover psycho. I do think it’s good that you point out that she isn’t trying to actually kill people, but it should still be toned down. You make her this squeaky clean, super sweet girl, but inside, she is this sadistic mini-monster waiting to break free. That dichotomy is too rough. If you want her to be the sort of person that takes pleasure in other people’s pain, then you can’t have it be entirely separate from her virtues. She can’t ALWAYS seem sweet and kind to people, but then turn around and cackle maniacally (when no one is looking!) about a baby hitting its head on the table. This entire trait should be revised.

Basiscally, you say this about her:

Quote:
Pushing someone down who is in your way is completely normal.


But also this:

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She is constantly smiling or laughing, and enjoys using this to the best of her abilities. However, unlike most would think, she is sincere in her sweetest.


These two these contradict each other and will need to be fixed in your revisions!

The COVER IT UP QUICK virtue needs a little work. I like the spirit of it – she is really good at fixing/covering things, be it an ugly hole in your wall, a stain on your shirt, or that D you received on your report card. The bit about making the perfect disguise to steal starseeds should be revised. I would simply mention that she enjoys coming up with elaborate disguises in general. Even though you are questing her as a Nega, you want to make sure that her civilian side can stand alone!

Also, I think you need to add a flaw to support the LITTLE BOX OF SADNESS virtue. She holds things together really well for people – but what happens when she swallows down too many of her feelings?

Why St. Magdalena’s? This is the female-equivalent of Hillworth. So what exactly did she do to get sent there?

ON THE NEGA:

Personally, I think a Keyblade the way that you are describing it is too close to a cosplay (what with a heart-shaped part). Try to finesse it in a way that doesn’t just make me think of Kingdom Hearts. Also, fourth stage should not be on the form, as it is not a stage that everyone gets. In fact, very, very few people will actually get there!

Hope this helps~
PostPosted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 10:27 am


ooh long crit! thanks akina <3333

Well ... how do I put it. She's not a sadist to the point where she likes to watch mangled people and cats getting hit by cars. It's just that when she sees someone trip in the hall she doesn't think "oh poor kid" she thinks "ahaha that sucks."

Also, her sadism is really really underwraps. Like she's trying to fight it from coming out.

I'll try to reword things so it makes sense, cause I agree that my wording is really dumb.

And by genuinely I meant it FEELS genuine, but most certainly is not. Will definitely reword that, cause I agree, it makes no sense. o 3o

Will revise it so she doesn't sound crazy o u o

Sure, I'll work on making it not so nega oriented!

Uhhh, I think I mentioned in the extras post (oops!) that she's prone to breaking things. She got in trouble for breaking some public property xDD

Will try to revise it so its not quite so kingdom hearts-y. I tried to make it as non-cosplay as possible, but it looks like it could use some work xD
I saw the fourth stage on some applicants, so I was sure xD
thank you ! <3

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zippedsiren

Dapper Spirit

PostPosted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 11:56 am


I think the solution to your keyblade problem is something like this?

A nice sharp pointy edge thing. So you could keep the intricate handle like a key and have the top of it / the prongs grow into an axe or halberd like shape? Instead of the heart (it could always be heart-like). So really it's an oversized key with an actual blade part. (The thing about Kingdom keyblades that always stuck me was their magical-ness, so I would suggesting walking away from that and emphasize the real-weapon like-ness of your "keyblade")
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