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So I am up late and tired and haven't writeen something in FOREVER, so I felt like creating a short descriptive piece, which may very well end up being the beggining of a short story based on a larger idea I have in mind.

This is a rough draft and I am tired so there are probably some spelling and grammar mistakes and whatnot. But could you please read this passage and tell me what you think?If you guys like it, I might post the whole short story once it is done.
Here it goes. I have named this passge as an idipendant piece:


The Thinker.


The earth, is many different colors. The ground, the sky, the very air have been every shade imaginable time and time again. Have you ever seen the water bathed in a sparkling gold, or the sky filled with wisps of pink adrift a purple sea?
Well, on one one particular day, in one particular hour, at one particular time, the sky was black. Deep and thick, stars studded a blueish sky, almost like a raven's snow covered down. And through the trees which glowed silver and over the grass that reflected a dewy irridesance, trotted a young man, a man with Turkish hair and a Russian nose, wide shoulders, and an even wider imagination.
What was such a handsome lad doing out on a night like this, all alone, you may ask. Some would say he was hunting, looking for some secret adventure. Some would say that he was sneeking of to see some sinful mysterious lover, waiting lovely in a pavillion. And other parties still would argue that this you man with the hair and the nose and the wide set shoulders was of flaunting through to paths of the forest where which he knew young maidens convene. And with all of these wide accusasions you must allso guess that one is true. But on nights like these, where the moon is so bright the birds still sing, the young man does nothing. Nothing but walk allong deserted paths, past rives and nests and and abandoned lodges, and think.

Oh yeah i guess you're right... I didn't even see that subforum, i was exausted when i posted this and kinda put it in the first subforum from the top that might be appropriate sweatdrop