http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/7178/lastscan40.jpgalright, I finished the lineart. its not as good as I wanted it to be, but I'm still not that good with my tablet XP
Anyways, here are the notes that are labeld on it ((ignore the key, I forgot to erase that))
1A: Even if you are shadowing most of the face with hair, it is still good to indicate that there is a face there in the areas not coverd by hair
1B: The elbow intersects around where the waist is. you had it really close, but I thought I should point it out.
1C: Twisting the foot to face upward like that looks like it would really hurt XD Try out the pose beforehand and try stuff out before drawing too indepth.
2A: The shoulders on this Figure should be a bit wider. You are ussually good at that, but i thought I should point that out anyways.
2B: Here is where it gets a little hard for me to explain. In this figure (and I think others of yours, I can't remember...) the legs look close to perfect cilinders. This is ok for rough drawing, I guess, but the reality is that they look a bit more like elipses ((although, that gets hidden when you add pants... I'm not sure if the person is wearing any or not...)
you can see that really well in this pose (I tried to draw it, but its hard on my tablet ;P):
http://www.posemaniacs.com/?p=400I think you can do it if you give it some time, you have potential. I can't wait to see the finished products ^^
my usual reference dump XD
Heads:
http://www.posemaniacs.com/?p=346http://www.posemaniacs.com/?p=345just for those downward facing heads
wink Good luck ^^
