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Vanna1994

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 8:14 am


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Areas I think are majorly wrong: (Done before I updated picture)
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/Untitled-1.png
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-39.jpg
areas I think are majorly wrong:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/Untitled.png

Ive already gotten some critique on this, havent fixed it all yet, but if yous see anything that needs to be changed then please let me know ^^

I;m working on clothing folds too

Other pictures:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-21.jpg
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-23.jpg
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-32-25-1.jpg

Eventually i'm redrawing some old oc's and some fan art. When I get those done I will post them here ^^

and also I'm working on this one too now:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-40.jpg
Areas i think are major problems:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/Untitled-1.png
PostPosted: Fri Dec 31, 2010 11:51 pm


They're good. And I'm glad you know where to improve.
I would elaborate if I could, but I can't.
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Vanna1994

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 4:00 pm


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They're good. And I'm glad you know where to improve.
I would elaborate if I could, but I can't.
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Thanks ^^
Yeah, I kinda know where to improve, how is another question though XD
and thats all right, I love just hearing comments about my art xd
PostPosted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 7:25 pm


Vanna1994
User Image

Areas I think are majorly wrong: (Done before I updated picture)
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/Untitled-1.png
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-39.jpg
areas I think are majorly wrong:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/Untitled.png

Ive already gotten some critique on this, havent fixed it all yet, but if yous see anything that needs to be changed then please let me know ^^

I;m working on clothing folds too

Other pictures:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-21.jpg
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-23.jpg
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-32-25-1.jpg

Eventually i'm redrawing some old oc's and some fan art. When I get those done I will post them here ^^

and also I'm working on this one too now:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-40.jpg
Areas i think are major problems:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/Untitled-1.png


I'd love to help but... I can't read what you wrote on the links. sweatdrop

Overall, the forms are pretty solid. Just try making the arms on the standing man slimmer (it looks like he's all gorilla arms) and his torso less curvy. Woman are curves, and men are typically drawn with hard lines. The torso especially resembles two pentagons.

With the pants, have them hang off him a little, unless they're skinny jeans they won't cling to his skin so quickly, especially a guy's clothing. You're a good sketch artist though keep it up!

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 8:41 am


I know the picture ended up really small, but I was hoping the arrows would at least help XD

Actually, I havent really started to much on the clothing, trying to get the bodies right before I go to detailed on the clothing.
Thanks ^^
I know, his arm in front ended up huge XD
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