Welcome to Gaia! ::

Areas I think are majorly wrong: (Done before I updated picture)
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/Untitled-1.png
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-39.jpg
areas I think are majorly wrong:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/Untitled.png

Ive already gotten some critique on this, havent fixed it all yet, but if yous see anything that needs to be changed then please let me know ^^

I;m working on clothing folds too

Other pictures:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-21.jpg
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-23.jpg
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-32-25-1.jpg

Eventually i'm redrawing some old oc's and some fan art. When I get those done I will post them here ^^

and also I'm working on this one too now:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-40.jpg
Areas i think are major problems:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/Untitled-1.png

Thanks ^^
Yeah, I kinda know where to improve, how is another question though XD
and thats all right, I love just hearing comments about my art xd

I know the picture ended up really small, but I was hoping the arrows would at least help XD

Actually, I havent really started to much on the clothing, trying to get the bodies right before I go to detailed on the clothing.
Thanks ^^
I know, his arm in front ended up huge XD