( XD I hope the title is alright~ and I'll post the log first, then do a second post for the continuation *nods*)

HateroftheMSN says (8:57 PM):
The young foal stood to stare out across the lake. Many a time she got near it only to stumble away in fear. Fear of what she did not know. This didn't keep her from bathing as one of the rivers that took from it was shallow enough for her to dare it a little each day. But the lake itself... there was just too much unknown about it and it's depth. Softly she hooved at the grass debating getting
close to it once again.

Nilo says (9:24 PM):
The stallion was tired, so very tired. It had been about a week sence he had landed on the mainland, to escape the slaughter of his heard. it was the only thing they could do, to dirve into the rushing tide of the sea and try to make it to the paper thin coast line of the mainland. Most of them had died. He had been with the first wave to leave, the old protector of his heard, his own father,
chargeing him with the safety of those to young to make the swim unasisted. And all of them had survived. but a horrific storm had broken out just as he was helping the last foal to the shore, then waves whipped up by the wind smashing him against the rocks and sweeping him down shore. He hadent found his herd yet, but he traveled slowly, his body bruised, but his mind happy with the surival. He
came down a gentle rise, to spot a lake, with what appeared to be a very young foal standing at its banks stareing with a tremble running up her tiny back. He twitched his ears as he watched her, cuirouse about her stareing at the scerene lake.

HateroftheMSN says (9:38 PM):
Steeling up her nerves, she charged at the lake with her eyes frimly shut. Today she decided would be the day she conquer her fear. Sadly just before she reach the lake, the foal stumbled and fell into the water. This instantly caused her to not only yelp but also to panic. Her once closed eyes were wide open with fear. It didn't matter to her that the water was rather shallow, all she cared
about was reaching the shoar once again. So instead of thinking things through she scrambled her legs frantically about, splashing water into the air. Which only made her panic more. To make things worse, the bank was slick causing her to keep sliding back.

Nilo says (9:58 PM):
Nymphs ears went back flat against his head as he saw the little foal charge into the water like it was an enemy, and then the panic that insued promptly after. " H-hey!! ' He said, stunned by her actions and charged down the hill, his neck streaching out forward, he didnt even slow as he plowed right into the water beside the little foal. He skidded down on the rockey-shore, way passed the foal
haveing to turn around and come up behind her, He took a breath and carefully pushed little foal twords the shore, grunting as he flailing legs kicked him with a force that would make her parents proud. He managed to scoot her onto the shore, still stunned by her flailing in such shallow water nad her panic. His eyes were wide as he lowered his head down to her, his pruple pair drenched flat
against his face, wich was a mask of concern " You alright little one? "