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 Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 1:50 pm
a Poem with no defined meaning to it
Last Night
I Had a dream
Of Light and Love
It made it seem so real
I Was On A Cliff high above
The Rain and wind and ocean revealed
No light no love high above the clouds
And Cast It away Into the deep shrouds
I Fell with no thought no memory
Nothing left only to merely die
I Felt the rain wash over my falling body
The Wind Whip my hair out of my eyes
Nothing but the deep blue ocean lies below
The Clouds Above
Roared with approval
For I Do not deserve any love
The Roaring thunder and flashing lighting
Cried out with dismissal
Of The Body Falling Below
A Picture of a man sunk so low
Fell Far Below to the deep shroud
With Nothing To Loose Nothing to Gain
A Man No More Sane Then You Or I
Ready to fall
Ready to Die
He Opened
For The First time
His Blind Eyes
And Realized It Was
To Late
God Hath no Mercy
For It Takes a Mortal Man
To Open Is Own Eyes
To See all His Error
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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 10:33 am
I think its a good poem. I makes me think of how often we don't realise the mistakes we make that could ruin our lives until its too late
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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 10:42 am
Chu hit it right on the dot smile
i hate the smiley face emote, cant i just get a normal [ smile without having that damn emote come up?
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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 1:05 pm
i think you can.......at least i think..... let me try some thing > smile .... smile sad
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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 1:06 pm
..........damn it...............................
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