I like writing, I do well in school, but uh... I can't bring myself to write down the more uh... intimate scenes in public school... That would be asking for a trip to the counselors... Anyways, here's a story, hope you enjoy it, if not please comment on how to fix it. I want honest opinions because honestly, I see many flaws in my writing, but they only people who have time to read it are family and friends, and I KNOW they sugarcoat it so... here's the story (next post)