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Life
By: knerd27

The air we breath
The spine- tingling quests
Our burdens we heave and heave
And the timeless beuaty we all see

An opportunity
A never-forgiving moment
A chance for intuitions and ambition to thrive
Life

The paths of misfortunes & sucess we must grasp
And as reality hits us
We all watch all the times flow by
And pass, and pass
Life

Romance and Love
Grudges and Envy
Life or Death
Heart or Mind
Escalator or Steps
Life

We fall down
But we get up
My mind is telling me to stop and forget it
But my heart is telling me to push forward
Life

Along the road to glory
Temptations we make you stop
And you will fall......................
But that doesn't mean sit in your desperation
Life

Running Through Thunder
Sprinting Towards Glory
Crawling To Pity
And to live holy and holy
Life

Mind- Provoking, Illusions
Greed, Success
Confusions
Pride and Faith
Let's get a taste
Life

Life......................
Life......................
Life......................
What's your story to tell
Is it melancholy or mythical
Over- Exaggerated Or Cries Of Desperation
Honor and Strength
Or Living With Purpose

Life.......................
The air we breath
The spine- tingling quests
Our burdens we heave and heave
And the timeless beuaty we all see
Life