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 Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 6:44 pm
Name: James Yakuza
Nicknames: The Psychopath
Height: 6'4
Weight: 251
Alinement: Face
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Strait
Size: Heavyweight
Race: White
Nationality: American
Home town: Death Valley
Cassification: Psychopath
Pic: Avid
Entrance music: So cold
Entrance description: Walk out spotlight hits
I slide into the ring and lights go back to normal
Finisher & Sig:
Power bomb
Choke slam
Spine buster
Performance: Crazy
Personality: Ruthless
Personal:
Smoke 2%
Drugs 0%
Steroids 0%
Law problums 90%
Religon 10%
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 6:56 pm
Explain a 450 Splash RKO and how 7'4 person would hit an RKO
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 6:58 pm
We're going to help you out with moves in the Dojo buddy. I suggest making him smaller as well.
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 7:03 pm
That is were the 450 splash comes in I go to the top rope 450 splash past the opponent grabbing there head into a RKO and tall makes it all the fun with the power
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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 7:09 pm
this makes no sense, it can't work, because a 450 splash is a flip and a half then a frog splash(essentially like belly, on belly) do you can't go over him then into RKo, I agree with beta, pick a more realistic and better move. plus your size makes it worse.
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 2:30 am
Don't take any of this as criticism, we're here to help. Just toning up your character is always a good idea; you're never going to make a new character and have him as World Champion in his first match, so you want to use someone who you'll have some fun with.
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 8:06 am
Trust me I can tone him up a lot but I put the basics of what I am and no one wants to mess with a psychopath.... plus in a match he's not just going to go crazy when the bell rings it's more like a randy orton thing when he gets a chance he goes crazy
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 10:36 am
Read my feud with Disciple. Trust me. People mess with monsters and psychopaths all the time. Your character is a dime a dozen. You aren't the first person we've seen try to make a giant do impossible high risk moves. They don't last long.
Id get rid of any siggys or finishers already used by WWE superstars. Especially the RKO. Chokeslam is fine because if you're a giant, you pretty much HAVE to use it. A giant isn't supposed to move much. Look at Big Show and Khali. They either pick people apart slowly, or they force their opponents to come to them. They've mastered it. You're trying to be exciting like a cruiserweight while having the instant legitimacy and power of a heavyweight with moves people already have seen over and over again.
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 10:39 am
Oh and don't let people bust your nuts about the 450 RKO. Its a good idea, just not for your character. Except renme it to avoid confusion like the Flying Diamond Dust or the Inverted Over Castle. That's all it is really when you think about it. Rename it and give it to a cruiserweighht character. I'm actually sad I never thought of it.
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 4:57 pm
Word... If your characters is suppose to be a monster, powerhouse, giant. Like what Mike said take a look at the Disciple and Landry feud. Their are plenty of classic example of what a giant should and can do.
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 4:59 pm
How about Nuke deletes this s**t, and has him start over!
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 5:06 pm
i don't think he should delete it, just edit.
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 5:21 pm
Draze666 How about Nuke deletes this s**t, and has him start over! How about you shut the hell up and let me edit
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 5:22 pm
Draze666 How about Nuke deletes this s**t, and has him start over! Chill out Draze, it was too long ago you were new to.
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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:05 pm
Draze, chill man, we're all looking to help out and get this kid rolling. For all we know, he's going to turn out to be a future Champion!
surprised
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