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 Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 10:14 am
Feal free to share poetry here. All forms of it allowed. So umm have fun?(x
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:32 pm
I worte it when i was half asleep... so yea, it sucks biggrin
Isnt life dandy?
it's what brings out the brandy.
in your mouth is my name
makes me feal this pain
your lies; they cut
cut like a blade
"i like you" you say
but you treat me this way.
so, what to do?
i tell you off.
and you let me go.
so go ahead.
date that hoe.
so go ahead; put me to shame.
besides, i have noone else to blame
but myself you say, oh please spare me
the pitty of another day.
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:34 pm
It starts out fine
It gets better
No more for you
No time left
You are dead inside
You are dead outside
There gos your life
There gos you soul
something i just thought of about how depression might happen in how i think
of it
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:40 pm
nice x) xX dieing souls Xx It starts out fine It gets better No more for you No time left You are dead inside You are dead outside There gos your life There gos you soul something i just thought of about how depression might happen in how i think of it
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:40 pm
your born
you live
you die
here comes another live
just as good just as bad
no one cares
no one loves
hatred and war
its pointless
theirs no love
theirs no ending
a happy ending
doesn't exist
im not sure if this is poetry but i try XD
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:43 pm
yes it is. poetry is expressing your self and your fealings. there is no right and no wrong. xX dieing souls Xx your born you live you die here comes another live just as good just as bad no one cares no one loves hatred and war its pointless theirs no love theirs no ending a happy ending doesn't exist im not sure if this is poetry but i try XD
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:44 pm
Natalie_The_Randomest yes it is. poetry is expressing your self and your fealings. there is no right and no wrong. xX dieing souls Xx your born you live you die here comes another live just as good just as bad no one cares no one loves hatred and war its pointless theirs no love theirs no ending a happy ending doesn't exist im not sure if this is poetry but i try XD oh ok surprised
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:44 pm
Natalie_The_Randomest I worte it when i was half asleep... so yea, it sucks biggrin Isnt life dandy? it's what brings out the brandy. in your mouth is my name makes me feal this pain your lies; they cut cut like a blade "i like you" you say but you treat me this way. so, what to do? i tell you off. and you let me go. so go ahead. date that hoe. so go ahead; put me to shame. besides, i have noone else to blame but myself you say, oh please spare me the pitty of another day. this is good biggrin
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:48 pm
thanks(: actually the first and last stanzas go together, and the two middle go together. you can read it that was as two diferent isues or read it as a whole. x) xX dieing souls Xx Natalie_The_Randomest I worte it when i was half asleep... so yea, it sucks biggrin Isnt life dandy? it's what brings out the brandy. in your mouth is my name makes me feal this pain your lies; they cut cut like a blade "i like you" you say but you treat me this way. so, what to do? i tell you off. and you let me go. so go ahead. date that hoe. so go ahead; put me to shame. besides, i have noone else to blame but myself you say, oh please spare me the pitty of another day. this is good biggrin
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:49 pm
this poem got me an a+ in english last year. My gaurdian angel, who once belonged to me
flew up into the sky and flew away from me
She flew on past heaven on past the stars
far past the moon far past mars
far from the land
far from the sea
this is where she wanted to be
She sat upon a cloud and cried away
It seamed to take forever and a day
Untill her teardrops fell upon my face
And i did not feal grace
I fealt her sorrow, her sad remorse
And in the form of rain it came, in fat heavy drops
Oh how i wonder how sutch a beautiful thing could be so sad
So angry, So mad
The whole world felt her pain
And on it rained for days and nights
her teardrops continue to fall upon my face
And nowi pray that i may someday stop the angel's teardrops
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:50 pm
Dying burning_eyes
Empty emo
Around arrow
The exclaim
Heart heart
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:52 pm
Natalie_The_Randomest this poem got me an a+ in english last year. My gaurdian angel, who once belonged to me
flew up into the sky and flew away from me
She flew on past heaven on past the stars
far past the moon far past mars
far from the land
far from the sea
this is where she wanted to be
She sat upon a cloud and cried away
It seamed to take forever and a day
Untill her teardrops fell upon my face
And i did not feal grace
I fealt her sorrow, her sad remorse
And in the form of rain it came, in fat heavy drops
Oh how i wonder how sutch a beautiful thing could be so sad
So angry, So mad
The whole world felt her pain
And on it rained for days and nights
her teardrops continue to fall upon my face
And nowi pray that i may someday stop the angel's teardrops of course u would get an a+ for that it was really good surprised
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:56 pm
Natalie_The_Randomest thanks(: actually the first and last stanzas go together, and the two middle go together. you can read it that was as two diferent isues or read it as a whole. x) xX dieing souls Xx Natalie_The_Randomest I worte it when i was half asleep... so yea, it sucks biggrin Isnt life dandy? it's what brings out the brandy. in your mouth is my name makes me feal this pain your lies; they cut cut like a blade "i like you" you say but you treat me this way. so, what to do? i tell you off. and you let me go. so go ahead. date that hoe. so go ahead; put me to shame. besides, i have noone else to blame but myself you say, oh please spare me the pitty of another day. this is good biggrin i read it as a whole wen i first started razz
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:10 pm
thankies x) xX dieing souls Xx Natalie_The_Randomest this poem got me an a+ in english last year. My gaurdian angel, who once belonged to me
flew up into the sky and flew away from me
She flew on past heaven on past the stars
far past the moon far past mars
far from the land
far from the sea
this is where she wanted to be
She sat upon a cloud and cried away
It seamed to take forever and a day
Untill her teardrops fell upon my face
And i did not feal grace
I fealt her sorrow, her sad remorse
And in the form of rain it came, in fat heavy drops
Oh how i wonder how sutch a beautiful thing could be so sad
So angry, So mad
The whole world felt her pain
And on it rained for days and nights
her teardrops continue to fall upon my face
And nowi pray that i may someday stop the angel's teardrops of course u would get an a+ for that it was really good surprised
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