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Joy007

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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 8:26 am

This is the story of a sims, Jhon, who had the money aspiration but was so poor that the Repoman always paid him a visit and took the only things he had in his poor house.
One day he was visited by one of his neighbour Mary, Mary was herself a poor sim but she was happy with her life and she lived a platinum mood because her aspiration was family.She lived next to Jhon's place along with her big family that kept her happy. Her visits became more and more and the two were getting along really well joking, apreciating one another, hanging out for hours...
In the same neighbourhood, but far far away from Jhon cottage lived Mr. Smith who had a good fortune inherited from his late wife. He lived in this big house with swiming pool and luxuriace cars and palm trees, with his only doughter Ana.Ana was the only relative he got and despite of that she was an enemy for him without her will..that happened when Ana was born and caused her mother's death her father hated Ana for that, for taking away the only person he had ever loved.

Hey guys, should I continue? I don't wanna bore you, really so just tell me if you want me to continue my story ans I'll be happy to go on.

Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 10:51 am

I'd be interested in more, but it would be easier to read if you separated that large paragraph into seperate ones. That way we can tell which Sims are connected etc.

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Joy007

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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 4:14 am

thank you for your replay here goes part two

Ana, single doughter of Mr. Smith had a family aspiration and her lifetime fufillment was to have her own family and get away from her father's anger because he was making her miserable rejecting everything she did.

Back to Jhon's place, Mary started renovating like getting a double bed and also a table with two chairs.It seemed like she was moving in with Jhon.All that hanging out and good time that they had made them best friends and it was a short of time before they fell in love.
All the changes made Jhon think more about his future and that he didn't feel comfotable with the double bed he was affarid to get engaged with Mary, that became his worse fear. His lifetime fufillment was to become rich and Mary couldn't be the answer to that.

He was torn and started to reject Mary because of his great fear, now he didn't know what to do because Mary was his best friend and didn't want to hurt her feeling also he felt in love with her but that didn't changed his great fear of marring Mary.

Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:33 pm

are these your actual sims?

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Joy007

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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 11:22 am

they were my first sims from sims2..why?

part three

As Jhon became more and more obssesed with his fortune aspiration Mary was giving up her plans of marrying and build a family with Jhon.

In the meantime Ana, during her jogging hours, met Jhon and felt a big attarction for him. On the other side Jhon was turned so off by Ana's looks. She greeted Jhon and they start talking and so Jhon found out about Ana's great fortune and it was then when he realised he was watching his dream come true.

Jhon was now sure about his plans and thought of a way to marry Ana and join the Smith family, he totally forgot about Mary. So one day he sold most of everything from his house and got a car just to ask Ana on a date downtown and then he would sell it back and get the money back.

Ana was so happy to go out on adate with Jhon he accepted and tried to make it a dream date.Everything Jhon said Ana laughed, everything Jhon did Ana followed their date was going well till came to a dream date and eventually had to finish..Time was running out for Jhons plan, so he asked ana to sit in the car and he'll drive her home...ofcourse that wasn't in his mind.

Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 1:52 am

ok i'm moving this into the "your sims" subforum then. wink

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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 3:42 am

hey for a moment I thought my story bugged everyone so bad that you decided to delete it crying
Thanks you amanda for telling me where to find my first story..so may I continue with part four:

Jhon had Ana in his car and he started making out with her till love struck Ana and eventually she woohoo with Jhon..but what she didn't know was that Jhon was trying for a baby not just woohoo.
Few days after that Ana realised that she was pregnant.That was the key for Jhon to enter the Smith family, all he had to do now was to marry Ana.

Ana's father almost had a heart attack when he realised that Ana was pregnant with the poorest of the neighbourhood, so he said to Ana that she should leave his house and never come back.

But things were about to change for Ana, she would finally have her own family and she was ready to do anything to acieve that..even killing her dad.