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PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2010 5:50 pm


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Quarria Reikis.User Image

Nicknames: Nene (She's not sure how this happened. Seriously.) Reikis. (Occationally goes by her last name.)
Gender: Female.
Age: In human/dragon age proportioning, she'd be about sixteen-seventeen years old. (Dragonially, still not fully matured, between adult and flight-capable hatchling.)
Faction/Race: Monster / Feathered Amphithere (Draco Americanus)

Please Note: Amphitheres are not Feathered Serpents/Quetzalcoatls. They are, in fact, usually, dragons. Well, dragons that don't have any legs. >u>;; (She might be referred to as a serpent, but that because I'm usually too lazy to type out "feathered dragon that doesn't have any legs and looks like a serpent". ^^; )

(Image to right done by Nekoluch, quickly colored by Trira. ^^; There are a few appearance differences, so refer also to written information.)

Personality:

-- "Well, aren't you a curious little serpent? I bet you'd never bite..." (AKA CURIOUS AND KIND)

Quarria has always been a curious little hatchling. She often would follow her parents around, badgering them with questions or concerns. She always wanted to know everything, from the average weight of the llama or buffalo they were eating for dinner to the rate of solar eclipses in comparison to meteor showers. While she seems so carefree and blissfully unaware sometimes (to the average person that doesn't know her), Quarria is actually quite concerned and intelligent when you get her attention (which isn't that hard, since she's almost always paying attention to everything, even if she doesn't seem like it.) She doesn't mean to, but her true personality tends to make people feel as if she's been decieving them; They expect her to be a simple girl, when she's genuinely intelligent and kind. Call it her natural serpent's deception. She usually does care, sincerely, and she tends to express herself much like a curious serpent once you get to know her. For that is what she is; an ever-curious Amphithere. Although...she tends to get extremely interested when she likes something (and she likes some pretty weird things). She tends to get easily enthralled, but she rarely obsesses unless she is truely intrigued. She also tends to hoard things. (Hey, she's a dragon/serpent. What did you expect?)

-- "You only get so much warning before a serpent strikes." (AKA RAGEFACE.)

She's got a long memory, and she doesn't appreciate deception (ironic, no?) or anyone lying to her, or doing anything she considered unjustified from her intellectual snake view. She'll leave you with a reptilians' stare, unhuman and unreadable. If the offenses are repeated though, or you further antagonize her, don't be surprised to find her mouth starting to spark with the held-back flames of her anger. (No, seriously, she's gonna smash you in the face with a fireball if you don't leave her be.) She's not quick to forgive, and you're going to really have to make it up to her if you want to be put back in her good graces. Even then, she's going to be very suspitious or paranoid of you, and don't expect forgiveness for a long time. While she is a dragon, she acts more like a serpent, and that ranges all the way into her rage. She might bite your hand if it gets to close to her and she doesn't like you, and those teeth aren't just for show.

-- "Personal bubble? What's that?" (AKA Very little awareness of personal space.)

Quarria doesn't like people pulling her wing feathers, but she'll certainly shield you with her wings if she wants. (She had a tramatic experience when she was younger involving her feathers and someone who apparently needed a very big quill. It wasn't a pretty sight, and the feather-stealer apparently has never recoved from some of the panicked third-degree burns she launched.) She's not afraid to get up in your face though. And she will, if she sees something that interests her there. The idea of a personal bubble doesn't really exist for other people in her mind, as it's not really possible for a serpent to have much of a personal bubble. It's likely she'll constrict another student into passing out in a battle as her true form, so personal space has never really been a problem for her. So, for better clarification, she's willing to get close to someone and examine their face, arm, hand, head, whatever, if she feels like it, and if another person does something similar to her, as long as it's nothing she would consider bad, she'd generally think this was normal. Just don't pull at her wings or feathers and you'll be good.

-- "Well, if you want her to be nice to you, you should just throw her out in some snow and make sure you're the only source of warmth around." (AKA Survival by any means necessary. (Also, Reptilian Blood.))

As an Amphithere dragon, her body functions much more like a serpent or reptile then much of a normal dragon. That means, she's got to regulate her body temperature. Is it roasting outside? She's probably under a rock somewhere. Is it freezing outside? She's probably hugging someone for dear warmth. (Or, in a certain snowy wasteland, functioning as a living train.) As such, her emotions or mindset can be changed or determined by the temperature wherever she is. While she tries to be kind in general, if you want her to hang out on a steamingly warm summer night, she's going to sound either lethargic or be pouring a cooler out on her head, or give some sharp reply and run off to find a nice, cold cave. She might seem a little more friendly if it's freezing outside, as she's probably going to be making a friendship for survival; She's going to need someone to snuggle up against for their body warmth. Survival by any means necessary, right?

--"THIS IS MY JUSTICE." (Partial continuation of "You only get so much warning..." part. AKA EXTREME RAGEFACE.)

Quarria Reikis might be a monster, but she has a very strong sense of justice when it has to rear it's head. A very strong, logical sense of justice. You stole her box of crayons? Too bad; now she's going to take them back and something for compensation. Your grandfather got sick and you needed one of her scales to make a magical cure? Tough luck, unless you REALLY prove to her that it was worth it, or she's in one of her compassionate moods. Were you bullying on of her friends? Prepare for a revenge-exacting Amphithere on your tail. Actions tend to speak louder then motives, but motives do speak on your behalf, and on occation, change her mind about her fury. (You better speak to her snakey logic, too, or you're not talking your way out of her 'justice.') Some people think that she might be two-halves of the same person, or that she's bipolar or something, if they see her exacting her justice after you were just talking to the usually kind girl. What they're seeing is actually just the personality of Quarria as a person and her inner serpent's instincts conflicting. (Hopefully people won't have to see her true serpent mind-set. It's not pretty.)

--"LOGIC." (There is no AKA for this. (Although it ties in with her "Justice" part.))

Quarria's mind functions in a very peculiar way. It formulates logical analysis above all else, and places the result of this logic as the correct anything. If her logic deems something necessary, even if it goes against her own happiness, she'll most likely follow her logic unless it required her to die or something (Since, if she died, she could no longer be an asset to anyone, and thus it would be more logical for her to remain alive and continue to help in the second-best way). (An example of this was in the Christmas event, where she talked herself ("logic'd her" as she'd call it) into choosing the coldest path possible, knowing that she herself would have a harder time as she is a reptile. Why? Her mind connected that since it was cold, she could provide warmth with her feathers, and carry people who needed carrying, and thus was needed more in the harshest enviroment than in the warmer ones. Even though she had a chance of freezing to death by choosing that path, she chose it because she was needed more there, and her own feelings do not apply.) She has a tendancy to remove herself, her own feelings and safety, from the logical equation. What she wants is not important, her logic would tell her, if there is a better result or benefit from removing her own stand from play. (Thus, as in the Christmas event, she placed the needs of others as a whole above her own comfort.) If the result of her bearing some hardship will cause a better result in general for others, she will generally gladly bear that hardship.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?
Always the curious hatchling, the youngest of the nest, Quarria often was seen trailing after her brother and sisters, or parents, and soon was the only child at home. Her parents, clever, planning Amphitheres of a high enough standing, managed to gather enough wealth (Again, they're dragons; they hoard. What did you expect?) that they have been able to send all of their hatchlings off to the best schools. Namely, Amityville Academy.

Quarria's parents had always encouraged her to explore her intelligence and curious-ness. She seemed like such a good model of an young amphithere, curious and yet possessing a snake's logic. They supported her in her questions and her obsessions, although sometimes they started to get a little dubious of her enthrallment. Like, with her current obsession, an obsession that's existed since she was just hatched, and always been there throughout her life, in the back fo her head. Her obsession with limbs.

That's right, limbs. Hands, toes, digits, feet, legs, arms, whatever. She's absolutely, positively obsessed with limbs. (That's why it wouldn't be weird to see her run up to another student and grab their hand to look at it or something.) This has always worried her parents, since, you know, THEY DON'T HAVE ANY. They're Amphitheres. Dragons without limbs. 'Winged Serpents'. For a young amphithere to obsess over such a thing was not normal, not normal at all. The Reikis line didn't tamper with such silly things. They didn't need limbs, and limbs were simply things that were no longer necessary for their survival. Why care about limbs then?

So, when her parents, trying to get her to a place that could better grow/fill her thirst for knowledge and feed her curiousity -- and perhaps stifle this abnormal obsession --, suggested to her that they could afford for her to attend Amityville Academy, they were relieved when she lit up at the idea and coiled around them in a make-shift hug of pure joy. She'd mentioned to them that she was interested in most of the classes there, too. Anything that could feed her thirst for knowledge. Of course, one thing had slipped through their plan to send her away to stunt this crazed obsession.

Academy students had to shift into a different form when at class. A more-humanoid form.

A form with limbs.

FEAR: "Lethal Lantern."

-- Quarria's, like most Amphitheres', flaming breath comes from a substance they develop and secrete into/is-already in their mouth. Some say it's a gas, others say it's venom, and there are many more theories floating around, and for the sake of common knowledge, they've decided to just call it a venom. (Since Amphithere's look like winged snakes anyway, right?) Well, this venom is extremely flammable, and an Amphithere can spark this venom using a flint-like tooth in their mouth. Thus, by breathing it out, they can 'breathe' fire.

It wouldn't be unusual to see a lantern fueled by this flammable venom, as it burns off and leaves no trace. It also will just burn until there is no venom left (and it burns at a relatively slower pace then most candles), and then self-extinguishes. Some people use Amphithere venom instead of oil, or candles, or any other substance that can be lit, for that matter, in their lamps and lanterns.

As such, Quarria's FEAR is actually saving up this venom and then spewing it over herself or into the air. (Which she then flies up into it or something to that extent.) She then lights the venom that is on her body, and catches fire. (Think of 'How to Train Your Dragon: Monsterous Nightmare'-style.) Which can be quite terrifying for her opponents, on top of everything else. (Think about it: A roughly twenty to thirty-five foot winged snake/dragon that just suddenly CAUGHT ON FIRE.) For as long as venom is on her, she's going to stay on fire without getting burned. Thus, if she manages to constrict you, not only might she crush your ribcage, but also give you burns too. :'D

There's actually quite a few downsides to this FEAR. For one thing, if she manages NOT to get the venom all over her, she's going to be the one with some burns, as the flames usually sustain themselves on the venom, instead of her. No venom, it'll just burn out, and give her some burns before sputtering out. Which brings up another point. Quarria can only make so much venom at one time. Thus, if she runs out of venom because she used this, she can't use her FIREPOWAH anymore. (AKA can't breathe fire after this, if she's already used a lot of venom before.) No venom, no fire. Period. And if she doesn't get all the venom out, or accidently breathes in while firing, she's going to get a mouth-burn, too. Also, while the venom burns rather well, it's still just fire. It can be put out. Soak her after she's lit herself up in flames, and guess what? No more fire. (And she probably can't fly to well, but that's beside the point.) So, if she's already used this, and is out of venom / you soaked her down / etc. you're pretty much just fighting a huge, angry, winged snake.

Also, no matter how accurate or perfect her spewing is, as a first year, she can only cover roughly thirty-three percent of her body. (Second year is sixty-six, roughly. Third year, it's all of her.)

In Pokemon terms:

Roll two six-sided dice. As a first year, these two numbers are the sections of her body that got lit on fire. (If they're the same number, uh...re-roll. Or something.) They go, Head, Torso, Right Wing, Left Wing, Body, Tailtip. Every time Quarria attacks after that, she must roll the two dice. If she doesn't roll one of those two numbers, she does normal damage. (Aka attacked with a non-flaming body part.) If she rolls one of those numbers, or both of them, attack does double damage because she's ON FIRE. (She stays on fire for a few turns as the vemon burns off, or until someone puts the fire out physically. (Like, dumps water on her.)) Generate a number between 1-10. If I roll/generate a 1-3, she missed part of her body, and thus she takes some flame-damage too. (Can still attack, but she's taken some damage too.) Roll/generate a 4-9, she's successfully lit herself on fire. Good for her. Also, if she's used to much venom already (Already launched 3-4 flame-breath attacks), and then uses this, she's out of venom for the rest of the battle, or at least a few posts of the battle. If you roll a 10, who knows?(Aka It's a mystery number. It might just be a dud, or she might just burn out really fast. Or she gets a critical hit or something. I have no idea for 10, actually. XD;; )(Please note: All of these numbers are probably going to change for the worse as I get a fuller understanding of the battle system to make this FEAR more fail / first-year-like.)

Physical Description:

Eye Colour: Sea blue. (See reference.)

Hair Colour/Style: Around the same color of her feather crest, and slowly changes to follow the colors of her wings.
STYLE ONE: Long normal hair, that has a few feathers sticking out of it in random places.
STYLE TWO: Feathered hair (and yes, I mean hair that is made out of feathers).
Both styles reach to around her upper thigh. (Somehow, she managed to make it not interfere with her flight capabilities.) She does have bangs in both styles, although sometimes she'll brush them back. (I put two different types of hair because I'm tied between both, so I'm just going to let the artists choose which one they want to do. ^^; )
Skin Colour: A lighter then dark Blue. (See Amphithere Reference. Artist could use her chest-plate colors, or her scale colors.)

Build: Long, thin, and tall. (Think about it, she's a serpent-body-type turned humanoid.)

Clothing Style/Colours: Snake-skin leather. Something more tribal then not, and she generally covers herself, so she's pretty modest. (Think modest mesoamerican? o u o;; (FAIL, TRIRA. FAIL.)) And she's not a punk. She's probably barefoot, too, or wearing hiking boots. (She likes getting to look at her toes, if she can. (Of if the artist wants, they can give her dragon-y feet. Artistic License and all that.) Probably wearing what would be considered the tee-shirt of tribal clothing, and a pair of pants. Probably earthy-colors or the light blue of her frontal-plates, or darker colors to match Halloween (like blacks or the dark blue on her wings) or the dark colors of the fabric strip that hangs off her tail band. (I almost want to see if someone could involve snake-skin in somehow. XD; Again, Artistic License allowed, for the most part.) Since my description is apparently fail-tastic, here's a better one: Modest tee-shirt with tribal designs on it. A pair of pants. Colors can be her colors, the color of that piece of fabric that hangs from her tail, earthy/darker colors, or Halloween colors. Barefoot or in hiking boots. (Artist can pretty much do whatever with her clothes, besides putting her in a dress/skirt. Kay? Kay. o u o Artistic License and what not. ^^)

Extra: Even in humanoid form, she still carries over many amphithere traits, namely:

-Her ivory colored horns still poke out of her skull, although their sprouting point is now covered by hair.

-Her feather crest pushes out of her like-wise colored hair, and rises and lowers depending on how she's feeling. (Threatened, excited, etc.)

-Her huge feathered wings. They're just as proportionally huge (okay, maybe not completely proportionally; they retain their hugeness, even in her 'short' (humanoid) form) in her humanoid form as they are in her true form. Thus, the wings connect on the body in the same proportion, and slits must be cut in her clothing. (They would be attached to her body from her shoulder-blades, and all the way down to around her hip-bone.) And they have a proportional wingspan so she can still fly. (So, they're pretty much huge. Because there is no word to better describe them than huge.o u o;; Luckily, she can usually cram them close enough to her body to avoid bothering people with them.)

-She has a thick (at it's very base, anyway), long, tapering tail, which has some 'cuffs' (jewelry of sorts; see reference. And yes, it's real gold that her family once plundered from a certain earth ruin...) and such around the tip. Not shown in her ampithere reference, her tail has a long feather-plume on the end, which range from being colored like her crest at the base to the colors of her wings.

-Whatever else the artist wants to include from the Amphithere reference. (I don't think there's anything left, actually. ^^; )

References: Amphithere Reference. (Lineart by Neondragonart. Colored by Trira.) Chibi by Nekoluch Hair Style Two shown in chibi. (Tail plume not shown in this example. ^^; )



Anyone who wants to draw her, feel free! :'D I'd love that actually, since I can't draw her for anything.
And art is nice. It's always nice. :"D
PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2010 5:52 pm


Species Information --Amphithere Dragons


Quote:

Amphithere- Draco Americanus

"In addition to the well-known feathered Amphithere, there is a furry northern variety that primarily hunts buffalo and has sometimes been mistaken for a gigantic moth. The prominent features of an Amphithere are it's hypersensitive eyesight, a feathery frill around the head, a legless and serpentine body, very large wings, and a feathered tail.

Lair or Nest- Among the reeds on lakesides or offshore islands.
Dimensions [Adult] - Forty-five feet long, five to ten feet high. Nearly thirty feet wingspan, and can grow longer if needed to compensate for the length of body; so their wingspan can grow over thirty feet, some even recorded as over forty feet when necessary. (Most wing feathers are over four feet long. Their tongues can reach up to six feet in length.)
Forms of Attack- Flaming 'venom' breath, tail lashing, constriction, and biting.
Food- All the large indigenous mammals of the area, typically llamas in the south or buffalo in the north. "


-Dragonology, Field Book of Dragon Study, and (compiled) Companion Notes on the Subject.

Amphitheres are the large 'winged serpents' that for a long time were believed to be somehow related to the Quetzalcoatl species, and not too recently it was realized that they were actually a species of dragon.

As mentioned in Quarria's FEAR, Amphithere venom is extremely flammable, and is often used to light lanterns and other such objects, as it's similar to oil, only much more useful. They create sparks on a kind of flint-like substance in their mouth, and blow outward to create a flamethrower of sorts. This allows them to use their flames in almost any sort of situation, as the venom is just as naturally occuring as saliva to them.

Amphitheres of almost all ages can fly, and they generally mature very fast. A hatchling can be anywhere between five to ten feet long, a reasonable flier up to twenty-three or so feet, a 'teenager' of sorts reaching anywhere from hatchling length up to around thirty-five feet, and an adult reaching around forty-five feet. Their wingspans grow at an amazingly proportional rate, so they can start flying from quite a young age.

More information coming soon. (AKA as soon as I dig some more up. ^^; )

Natural Ability: (I put two since the general-dragon one was implied from her FEAR and her species information...but I wasn't sure if that would be regarded. So that's why I put two natural abilities. ^^;;; )

Broad/General Dragon Ability: Fire-breathing. Almost every basic type of dragon can breathe fire. If a dragon is of a specific element, they would control that instead, but in most unelemental dragons, the basic breathe attack would be fire-breath. (As Quarria is from a basic Amphithere bloodline, she can breath fire. Since she is an Ampithere, she has the ability below. Just to clarify.)

Amphithere Ability: Treasure Storage - Amphitheres' have a knack for hoarding things, much like their other dragon cousins. As such, they're very good at spying treasure ( be it gems, food, people, or anything else they like) and finding it, but this is just a natural instinct to them. (Less focus on this, more on what's below, please. (AKA Natural ability is below. Above was just setting up the circumstances.)) A weird point, though, is that Amphitheres usually don't have hands to pick up such things, so they have a bit of a different way of getting the object. They tend to eat the object in question. (Well, not people, but anything else they can fit in their mouths. And, in their true form, they have some very big mouths.) Sometimes, if it's gems or such, they choose to actually eat it, so that the minerals can help keep their mouth's flint-growth in top condition. Otherwise, it goes in a seperate strong/scaled chamber of their body, for safe keeping until they can drop it off back at their lair. (Although, it wouldn't be unusual for an Amphithere to keep something they found useful in the chamber so they would always have it on hand. (Psh, who needs backpacks?)) So, don't be suprised if an Amphithere -- even in human form -- coughs up some odd object, jewel or otherwise, in front of you, or if they seem to eat something that they definitely shouldn't be eating. It's natural, okay?

Trira


Trira

PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2010 5:53 pm


Crits and Questions


(Questions in Quotes, Answers under them.)

Quote:
- You said she loves to touch hands, feet, whatever - does she also like to touch skin, or just limbs? And how would she react to Marosa's natural ability of skin-on-skin contact with how her mindset is?


-- She'd probably just go for the limbs, although if there's something interesting about your skin, she probably would be like, "Can I look at your stomach? :'D " And think nothing of it. About things like Marosa's ability would make her think a lot of things at once. Like, curiousity to see how a limb can produce such a odd ability, sadness for him since he can't touch anyone, and probably some frustration since he'd probably never let her look at him hands up-close, and since she's curious about it, she probably would really WANT to touch him, just to see what would happen so she can add it to her mental catalog of limb-information. So, curious, sad (for both of them, since he can't touch people, and she can't inspect his arm or something), and frustrated would probably be how she'd react to him or anyone like him.

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- Is the inner serpent another personality of hers, or is she just trying to stifle her natural instincts/urgings for the most part? Is there any other emotion other than anger where the instinct comes out?


-- Ah yes, her inner serpent mind-set. It's actually not another personality, but as you said, her natural instincts and urges that she is trying to block out. I hadn't really thought about emotions, but now that I'm thinking aobut it, I could see it coming out when she's really frustrated with something, or is stressed, or hungry. (Luckily for most students, she usually doesn't attempt to eat anything smaller then a llama or buffalo.) For example, you know how some people get a bit snappy when they're stressed? She gets SNAPPY when she's way stressed. Snake/dragon bites aren't very pretty, either. Oh, and she's going to feel really bad about it if you were some innocent she happened to turn on in her rage, since she is a genuinely nice person. So, she doesn't have a split personality, she's just trying to stifle her inner, calculating, serpenty-dragon instincts.

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LOOOOVE. Is she looking for anyone, or is she just a touchy-feely person sometimes? XD


-- LOOOVE? I could see her falling for someone, although they might not realize it, since she's so kind to everyone in general (if she likes you.) She's probably not purposely looking for anyone, but it definitely could happen. She'd probably LOGICALLY think that the person was trying to do something else if a boy came up and tried to woo her. She'd probably think he was just trying to get and stay on her good side so she'd give him favors or something. Although, she really isn't that hard to get on the good side of. Just be nice, and she'll probably like you. So, if a guy wanted to get her to be his girlfriend, he'd probably have to tell her as much, or imply it somehow, so she stopped over-analysing the situation. But she is a touchy-feeling person when she wants to see a limb. (And she can be determined, sometimes. ) So, in answer to your question, she could be both. XD;;

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Anyway, I'm curious about her curiosity. =3 How does she interact with outgoing or introverted types?


--Her curiosity? With an outgoing type, she'd probably respond much in the same manner, excitedly responding with a smile and enthusiastic question about a person's limb, or just on their interests in general. Since she's a nice person, she tends to get along with most. If she was to talk to someone shy (or purposely a social outcast), she'd probably (logically) try to either figure out why they were shy or a loner, or how she could help them. After all, someone shy might just be someone who's too quiet to make friends. She'd start a conversation, and try to keep them comfortable so she could get aquainted with them, and probably make a new friend. :'D

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Do you think she is more likely to become curious with a thing and drag others to investigate it with her, or would she rather tag along and see the fascinating sights as she goes?


-- I could see her doing both, actually. It would depend on how curious she was about something. If she was very much so enthralled, she's probably trail after it for a second, and then charge after it with great interest, making calling out to her friends to come assist her in her chase, or ask if they'd want to see her newest obsession. :'D If she was simply interested, she's probably tag around and follow, seeing what she could see, and trying to make any friends along the way. (She'd probably offer to act like a train if the trip was long.) She's always up for finding out pretty much ANYTHING that mildly amuses her. (Be it pinatas, llamas, or astrological inquiries.)
PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 9:14 pm


Post to bump this to the front page. Can work as a 'reserved' if necessary.

Crits? o u o;

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:23 am


I absolutely LOVE Quarria. heart

Now for my turn for the 20ish questions. xp

- You said she loves to touch hands, feet, whatever - does she also like to touch skin, or just limbs? And how would she react to Marosa's natural ability of skin-on-skin contact with how her mindset is?

- Is the inner serpent another personality of hers, or is she just trying to stifle her natural instincts/urgings for the most part? Is there any other emotion other than anger where the instinct comes out?

-LOOOOVE. Is she looking for anyone, or is she just a touchy-feely person sometimes? XD

I really hope you get her, she sounds SO fun to play with. I would LOVE an rp or few with her and Marosa. XD You're right, it would make some ridiculous awesome roleplays. heart Hope I helped with my questions whee
PostPosted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:20 am


Awhh, thank you so much~ (I love Twenty Questions style crits. XD;; )

And most of these are things that I was wondering about, since she sometimes comes off as paradoxical, so, answer time!

-- She'd probably just go for the limbs, although if there's something interesting about your skin, she probably would be like, "Can I look at your stomach? :'D " And think nothing of it. About things like Marosa's ability would make her think a lot of things at once. Like, curiousity to see how a limb can produce such a odd ability, sadness for him since he can't touch anyone, and probably some frustration since he'd probably never let her look at him hands up-close, and since she's curious about it, she probably would really WANT to touch him, just to see what would happen so she can add it to her mental catalog of limb-information. So, curious, sad (for both of them, since he can't touch people, and she can't inspect his arm or something), and frustrated would probably be how she'd react to him or anyone like him.

-- Ah yes, her inner serpent mind-set. It's actually not another personality, but as you said, her natural instincts and urges that she is trying to block out. I hadn't really thought about emotions, but now that I'm thinking aobut it, I could see it coming out when she's really frustrated with something, or is stressed, or hungry. (Luckily for most students, she usually doesn't attempt to eat anything smaller then a llama or buffalo.) For example, you know how some people get a bit snappy when they're stressed? She gets SNAPPY when she's way stressed. Snake/dragon bites aren't very pretty, either. Oh, and she's going to feel really bad about it if you were some innocent she happened to turn on in her rage, since she is a genuinely nice person. So, she doesn't have a split personality, she's just trying to stifle her inner, calculating, serpenty-dragon instincts.

-- LOOOVE? I could see her falling for someone, although they might not realize it, since she's so kind to everyone in general (if she likes you.) She's probably not purposely looking for anyone, but it definitely could happen. She'd probably LOGICALLY think that the person was trying to do something else if a boy came up and tried to woo her. She'd probably think he was just trying to get and stay on her good side so she'd give him favors or something. Although, she really isn't that hard to get on the good side of. Just be nice, and she'll probably like you. So, if a guy wanted to get her to be his girlfriend, he'd probably have to tell her as much, or imply it somehow, so she stopped over-analysing the situation. But she is a touchy-feeling person when she wants to see a limb. (And she can be determined, sometimes. ) So, in answer to your question, she could be both. XD;;

Awahh, thank you~ I hope you get Marosa too, so we can do 'personal bubble vs no personal bubble' roleplays. They would make for some funny times~ Thank you so much, by the way. You really helped me pick out points that needed clarification, and in general! Thank you~! :'D


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Trira


Grey Dragon
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 7:26 pm


I have to say, your line about smashing one's face with a fireball brought up a rather amusing mental image. Good way win an argument, eh? XD

Anyway, I'm curious about her curiosity. =3 How does she interact with outgoing or introverted types? Do you think she is more likely to become curious with a thing and drag others to investigate it with her, or would she rather tag along and see the fascinating sights as she goes?
PostPosted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:11 pm


Yes, very good way to win an arguement. XD; As one of my friends would say,"QUARRIA SMASH." Fireball to Face = Two points! :'D;

--Her curiosity? With an outgoing type, she'd probably respond much in the same manner, excitedly responding with a smile and enthusiastic question about a person's limb, or just on their interests in general. Since she's a nice person, she tends to get along with most. If she was to talk to someone shy (or purposely a social outcast), she'd probably (logically) try to either figure out why they were shy or a loner, or how she could help them. After all, someone shy might just be someone who's too quiet to make friends. She'd start a conversation, and try to keep them comfortable so she could get aquainted with them, and probably make a new friend. :'D

(Broke the question up, since the first answer was long. XD;; )
-- I could see her doing both, actually. It would depend on how curious she was about something. If she was very much so enthralled, she's probably trail after it for a second, and then charge after it with great interest, making calling out to her friends to come assist her in her chase, or ask if they'd want to see her newest obsession. :'D If she was simply interested, she's probably tag around and follow, seeing what she could see, and trying to make any friends along the way. (She'd probably offer to act like a train if the trip was long.) She's always up for finding out pretty much ANYTHING that mildly amuses her. (Be it pinatas, llamas, or astrological inquiries.)

I hope those made sense. Thank you so much for the critic, by the way~! :'D


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Trira


Trira

PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:47 pm


Bumping this up~
PostPosted: Sun Feb 20, 2011 7:59 pm


Nudging this back to the front page. (Go on Quarria, go make some friends!)

Trira


nekoluch

Tricky Pants

PostPosted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 10:52 pm


ah- another serpentine-ish creature :3 I don't have much to include/crit here... you've covered alot of bases... but I'll give it a go?

- In the case of her FEAR, what kind of progression could be expected as the years pass? You mention you may change the rolling numbers to make her more fail as a first year. Perhaps writing her progression will help you decide on the lowest and highest expectations? Like, what kind of things can she do at first compared to when she's a 2nd or 3rd year? 1st years start pretty small so they have more to work on as a student. Maybe she lights a part of her body only at first and works her way to fully on fire...? idk xD it's just an example of what I mean

gl with Quarria :3 hopefully Levi will meet her on campus one day! <3
PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 3:29 pm


Thanks for the crit! ^^

I was wondering about this myself, actually. And your example was actually something I was thinking of doing. ^^; I think I'll change it to maybe she can only light like, the tops of her wings/back whatever (aka only a third of her body. (Like she actually has aiming skills to light a particular place anyway. XD) ) Second year she'd light sixty six percent, like most of wings, back, head. And third year is all of her. ALL OF HER. :'D

Thank you~ ^^ I would very much enjoy RP with you someday! ^^

Trira


Trira

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 10:16 am


AHFSAHKAHDAFFEAEEEEE~~~

Got art from Nekoluch~! :'D


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 10:29 pm


oooh, she sounds like a lot of fun 8D
i think her and carmine would be good friends ♥
i don't really have anything to crit on cause you covered everything so well *A*

Naked Satan


Trira

PostPosted: Wed Mar 02, 2011 5:03 pm


Yayyy, a crit! :'D
They probably would. Quarria likes helping people. And snuggling for warmth. XDD She'd probably insist on carrying him around everywhere she went in her true-form. XDD Be like, "You can sit right here. :'D" And sit him on her wing-shoulder-joint or something. XD
Yayyyy~ * w * I like having everything covered.

Although now I'm debating if I need to add something about how she can breath fire. (Like to her natural ability section, as like the general species dealieo, then having her Amphithere dealieo under it.) Or does her fear imply well enough that she can normally?
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