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 Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 2:00 am
It's a simple thing. Add onto the story using 5 words. Do not post twice in a row. You'll have to wait until someone else adds to the story before you may post again. These end up being pretty interesting. biggrin
This is the story this far...
arrow arrow arrow One night, in Las Vegas, the sky is crimson red and somewhere in the city a woman with stainted labcoat was rumaging for a pen. Suddenly, a black car appears and a man got out with a big black gun, and a mask covering his nose like a bandit on his face. Meanwhile, the woman continued writing, unaware of the impending threat in the shadows untill it was too late, and the woman was visciously attacked. She struggled to get away but the killer got the upper hand, and proceeded to grab the chloroform covered cloth and place it directly over her mouth, causing her to suffocate momentarily, but was still conscious. The man stepped over her semiconsious body, the gun pointed at the woman's head.
Taking her last breath, she closed her eyes, wanting to tell her daughter that she needed to flee the country. Her mistake too large to forgive and forget, she began to pray for a hero and then suddenly there was a sound of breaking glass. They both turned and saw a young boy with a smile on his face. He stopped smiling when he realized there was a noise coming from the ticking time bomb, strapped to a table nearby the door. Was this boy here because he set up the bomb? The boy pressed a button the girl closed her eyes knowing that she was going to die. Taking her last breath she whispered "Tell her i'm sorry."
In another lab, in Vegas Rebecca put her pen down and reached to scratch her
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 4:38 am
...the sky is crimson red...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 4:46 am
...and somewhere in the city...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 6:42 am
...a woman with stainted labcoat...
ps sorry about my loudsy english.. i know the words but i dont know how to type it correctly, so i change alots of my orginal idea what i what to put here... sorry sorry.. it is just english is no tmy 2nd language,, it is my 3rd i think.. first is chinese, second dutch, 3rd english, 4th jp/fr/de
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 6:44 am
...was rumaging for a pen...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 6:49 am
... suddenly a black car appears...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:01 am
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 12:12 pm
...with a big black gun...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 1:05 pm
...and a mask covering his...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 1:41 pm
...nose like a bandit on...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 1:53 pm
...his face. Meanwhile, the woman...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 7:59 pm
...continued writing, unaware of the...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:23 pm
...impending threat in the shadows...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:54 pm
The intruder watched patiently as...
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:55 pm
...untill it was too late,...
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