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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:06 pm
This is a simulated area of a field surrounded by willow and cherry blossom trees. The weather is clear and it is dusk.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:08 pm
Alucai Hatake Al  
Age: 17 Birth date: Sept. 24 Birthplace: Sunagakure Gender: Male Height: 5'8 Weight: 146 Ilbs
Original Eye Color: Yellow Personality: Numb, Gloomy, Stoic Nindo: "Death is only another journey"
Village: Suna Rank: Chunnin Class: Bukijutsu ◤ Battle Data Bloodline / Clan: Hatake Bloodline Stage: 1
Chakra Pool: [230] Chakra Color: White Chakra Elements: Lightning & Fire Strengths: • Close Combat • Fast Feet Weaknesses: • Long Distance Fighting • Performing Genjtsu Fears: • Losing the ones he loves • Drowning
Attributes: • Fast Swordsmanship • Good Chakra Manipulation Class Attribute:
• C. Attribute - Accomplished Skill: Able to wield weapons with advanced prowess • Learn Bukijutsu [2] Posts Faster ◤ Shinobi Data Whisper Weapon Type: Short Sword Weapon Range: 3 Feet Weapon Weight: 5 Ilb. Weapon Properties: Fast Headband Location | Color On Shoulder/ Black Flack Jacket Style | Color Around the shoulders is like a T-Shirt Backpack Style | Color On the belt/ Gray Accessory Clothing | Color Silent Chain on the pants
Other Items -Rarely Used Katana -Blue Hilt Katana -Red Hilt Katana Summoning Type: • Dogs Pacts: • Dogs
Completed Missions: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
 ◤ Technique List Ninjutsu ◤ Non-Elemental
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release] •Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique) Training • • •
◤Lightning
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◤Fire
•Katon: Houka Hira no Jutsu (Fire Release: Flaming Palm Technique) Training • Phoenix Swallow "Custom" • • • • • •
◤Bloodline
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Taijutsu
{Tame Za Kyokudo } • Stage 1 Complete -Resu Tame Taibu -Rosutoai Training • Stage 2 Complete -Tsuyoi Senkou Training 1 Training 2 Training 3 •Stage 3 Complete -Kire Ono Training •Stage 4 [3/8] -
Bukijutsu
{Descending Greatness - Shigure Soen } • Stage 1 / -Sakamaku No Ame [ Rolling Rain ] Training -Shajiku No Ame [ Axle Of Rain ] Training • Stage 2 / - Gofuu Juu [ May Wind, October Rain ] - Yarazu No Ame [ Last Minute Rain ] Training • Stage 3 / -Shibuke Ame [Splashing Rain] Training -Samidare [ Summer Rain ] Training • Stage 4 / -Mujitsu Ame [ Innocent Rain ] -Ganshiki Ame [ Insight Rain ] Training for Innocent and Insight • Stage 5 / - -
{Tetsu no Ryu} •Techniques -Iaidō -Turning Swallow Cut -Chakra Scabbard
◤ History Al's Father fell in love with a woman from a different village during the Great Shinobi War. This was called forbidden by some cases yet it had happened. It was very unusual to have seen a Red haired Hatake roaming around the streets but with being different comes a great responsibility. Alucai and his Father trained every night so that Alucai could defend himself if need be. He started to carry his family Tanto on the left hand side of his back for if he was ever threatened he would be able to defend himself. Al never once got into a fight by his own doing other kids would make fun and pick at how Red his hair was or for the markings on his face Alucai hated his classmates for this and is now training to further his skills not as a Shinobi but to prove to his so called "peers" that he is just as good as anyone. Gennin Working and training hard Alucai became very strong and powerful. He was practicing to much that he collapsed and had to be brought to the hospital by Braith Dridrika. But all was well, Alucai made the Chunnin exams where he fought his first opponent Sypher. The battle was long and tough but Alucai came out the victor by crushing Sypher's hand and Sypher forfeiting the match. Alucai was hard pressed in the second round going off against his friend San Satetsu from his fellow Sand village. Alucai lost this battle due to a Genjutsu and collapsed but the day after he fully recovered and graduated into a Chunnin.
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[color=OrangeRed][b]☆★☆★"Died For All the Wrong Reasons"☆★☆★[/b]
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[b]☆★☆★"Never Die"☆★☆★[/b][/color]
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:15 pm
Satoshi Hatake Sato 
Age:23 Birth date:09/10 Gender:Male Height: 6 feet Weight: 178 pounds (Without Armor)
Personality: Serious, quiet, calm, analytical. Nindo: "Cut and take"
Village: Kirigakure Rank: Jounin Class:Ninjutsu ◤ Battle Data Bloodline / Clan: Hatake
Chakra Pool: 435 Chakra Color: Yellow Chakra Elements: Lightning, Earth
Strengths: • Close Range Combat • Mid Range Combat Weaknesses: • Long Range Attacks • Female Charm Fears: • Growing old • Critical mistakes
Attributes: • Steel Greaves • Steel Gauntlets Class Attribute: • Spastic Hands: Jutsu performance speed sharply increased Bloodline Attributes • Raiton techniques performed are increased by 1 rank in their power, up to rank A. Example (D becomes C, C becomes B, B becomes A, etc) • The Hatake have an affinity for “Lightning Jutsu” thus take one less post to learn it. • The Lightning Release (Raiton) these Ninja do can be shaped or colored white if they so choose (no real effect, looks awesome.) • The Hatake have an affinity for “Summon Jutsu” of the Dog type.
◤ Shinobi Data Raijin Weapon Type: Katana Weapon Range: 45 inches Weapon Weight: 20 pounds Weapon Properties: Durable
Fujin Weapon Type: Katana Weapon Range: 45 inches Weapon Weight: 20 pounds Weapon Properties: Durable
Right arm | Black Longcoat | Brown
Summoning Type: • Canine Sage
Completed Missions: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 1 A Rank :: 1 S Rank :: 0
◤ Technique List Ninjutsu ◤ Non-Elemental • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release] • Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique) Rank: D • Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique) Rank: D • Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Multiple Shadow Clone Technique A • Zatoichi's Senses Custom • Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Technique) B • Bunshin Bakuha (Shadow Clone Explosion) Chakra cost: A Rank:S • • • • • ◤ Raiton
•Raiden no Moui (Raiden's Fury) Rank: S •Raiton no Yoroi (Lightning Armor) Rank: (null rank) •Clap of lightning (Inadzuma) Rank:A •Chidori Senbon (Thousand Birds Needles) Rank: A •Kyuutai Tate no Jutsu (Sphere Shield Technique) Rank: B •Yobigoe no Raikou no Jutsu (Call of Lightning Technique) Rank: B •Junsei Raikou Kunai no Jutsu (Pure Lightning Kunai Technique) Rank: B •Raiton: Raikou Kousen no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Beam Technique) Rank: C •Raiton: Raikou Shunshin (Lightning Release: Lightning Instantaneous) Rank: C •Nagare Isou no Jutsu (Current Transfer Skill) Rank: D •Raikou Henge no Jutsu (Lightning Transformation Technique) Rank: D •Teikou no Kuntou (Electricity Resistance Training) Rank: E •Shinkou Arashi no Jutsu (Rising Storm Technique) Rank: B
◤ Doton
•Doton: Doroku Gaeshi (Earth Release: Rock Shield) Rank: D •Doton: Ishi Yoroi no Ude (Earth Release: Stone Bracers) - Rank: E •Doton: Sekkai Koutetsuban (Earth Release: Stone Breast Plate) Rank: D •Iwagakure: Shunshin no Jutsu (Hidden Earth: Instantaneous Body Skill) Rank: D •Moguragakure no Jutsu (Mole Hiding Technique) Rank: C • Rank: C •Doton Kekai • Dorou Doumu - Earth Barrier • Earth Dome Prison Rank: B •Doton: Karyoku Bunshin no Jutsu (Earth Release: Volcanic Earth Clone Skill) Rank: B •Iwa no Yoroi (Shield of Stone) Rank: B •Pulsating Earth Rank: B •Doton: Wareme Souzou (Earth Release: Chasm Creation) Rank: A •Doton: Iwa Guntai Tate (Earth Release: Rock Army Shield) Rank: A •Doton: Iwa Finaru (Earth Release: Rock Finale) Rank: S+ ◤Hatake Clan Techniques
•Chidori Tatsumaki (One Thousand Birds Tornado) Rank - A •Shiroi Chidori (White One Thousand Birds) Rank - A •Chidori Sai (One Thousand Birds Cut) Rank - B •Raiton: Hatake (Lightning Release: Scarecrow) Rank - B
Genjutsu
•Raikou Ame no Jutsu (Lightning Rain Technique) B •Hitoshirenu Shikaku no Jutsu (Hidden Assassin Technique) C •Zettai Tenkou Kansei no Jutsu (Absolute Weather Control Technique) A
◤ History Satoshi was born into a family of ninja. Generation after generation, the techniques of the Hatake were passed down. Through the harsh circumstances that each shinobi endured, the ruthlessness of each ninja grew from the academy until death. This was the way for Satoshi. Toned from birth to embrace the cold ways of the art of the ninja, Satoshi progressed through the academy with great promise. His quick unbiased decision making placed him in recommendation for the black ops. Satoshi now aims to specialize into a branch of the village. He is not quite sure which one takes full advantage of his abilities. In the meantime, Satoshi will be the sword of his Mizukage.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:24 pm
 ☆★☆★"Died For All the Wrong Reasons"☆★☆★
Alucai walks into the small field and resting his palms on the katanas at his sides. As he awaited he soon saw another swordsman like character in grass. "Say you good sir shall we do battle here, and may one of us lose their lives the other shalt not ever forget thy opponents name" Al looked deeply into the eyes of his opponent. "I am Alucai Hatake and I have come to this land in search of a worthy challenge for my skill with a blade". Alucai drew his red hilt katana and got into a samurai's stand off stance where he holds the blade with both hands while the sword is pointed behind him. Alucai automatically brought two techniques into play without even moving, Mujitsu Ame [ Innocent Rain ] & Ganshiki Ame [ Insight Rain ] [230/230]
☆★☆★"Never Die"☆★☆★
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:43 pm
 Satoshi had his eyes closed in meditation as a stranger approached from behind. He opened his eyes as he heard him challenge him to a duel. Sato turned to face him. The swordsman introduced himself firmly and formally. Satoshi smiled slightly. "Heh. I will be your challenge, cousin." *Satoshi said unsheathing Fuujin from his sheath on the right side of his waist with his left hand. "I am Satoshi Hatake." He introduced himself. "And I will remember your name." Satoshi said as he held his katana with both hands but in a side stance, with the blade pointing behind him on his left. [435/435]
*[Dont let me be misunderstood (Instrumental)-Santa Esmeralda]
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 4:02 pm
 ☆★☆★"Died For All the Wrong Reasons"☆★☆★
Alucai chuckled as he heard that his opponent was a cousin of his. "Well we shall see who is the better swordsman today won't we" Al's katana started to glow as white flames encased his blade. Alucai was trying to think of what to do but he really didn't want to start, except it couldn't be helped. Alucai blindingly fast went forward towards his opponent quickly thinking of an attack, as he neared Sato Al raised his blade and used a technique that was incredibly fast, Turning Swallow Cut, Alucai slashed down and by flicking his wrist slashed back up with incredible speed. Would Sato be able to block these intense blows? [220/230]
☆★☆★"Never Die"☆★☆★
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 4:37 pm
 Satoshi saw his opponent case his katana in white aura. It was all too familiar. Fuujin began to blur slightly as a white light covered the blade. Small tendrils of electricity crackled as they streamed around the blade. Wind blew across the field as they each stood for a moment. Sato was waiting for the moment that every swordsman ached for: The first move. It was subtle, a tension. Alucai had tightened his legs to move forward. In this instant, Satoshi bolted forward, atempting to match his speed with Alucai's. The two shinobi flashed forward. They continued to move as their swords met. As Satoshi was bringing his blade from left to the right in a horizontal slash, Alucai was already pulling his blade down at him. Sato kept his slash in the sae direction but instead of aiming it to Alucai's abdomen, Sato raised the blade so that it blocked the strike from above. Fuujin sparked and crackled as it ran across his opponent's blade to the right. After stopping the first slash, Satoshi now pulled the blade from it's position in the right, to the lower left, in a diagonal slash. This slash was aimed to block the upwards slash performed by Alucai. The blade set against the other and parried to the left. Satoshi appeared again, flashing into extistence as he slid to a stop a few feet behind Alucai in the last position he had held his blade. Anyone who was standing nearby would have seen the two disappear, a white flash accompanied by the sound of striking metal and the reappearance in less than three seconds. [425/435]
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 4:47 pm
 ☆★☆★"Died For All the Wrong Reasons"☆★☆★
Alucai's senses picked up on the killing intent of Sato and as Alucai turned around he sprinted towards Sato and went to strike upwards with his blade except when he swing upward with the right hand he had let go of the katana to fake out Sato and as Alucai's right hand caught the sword a blast of white fire was also following the slash at Sato, Samidare [ Summer Rain ]. Alucai waited to see if he faked out his opponent or would the next trick up Al's sleeve be enough to throw this swordsman off guard. [200/230]
☆★☆★"Never Die"☆★☆★
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:12 pm
 As Satoshi turned around to face his opponent, he was already on his way. Sato was too slow to strike first as Alucai was already slashing upwards. He had no choice but to defend. Sato brought his blade in front of the opponent's slash. He moved Fuujin in a counter-clockwise arc that left the blade in the way of Alucai's. Once Sato had braced for the impact, there was none. Satoshi saw that Alucai had dropped his sword momentarily until he slashed the same way again. Sato had not been ready. Fuujin was hit up and back, forcing Satoshi's arms up due to the force of the white attack. Sato quickly regained balance and shifted his blade so that it was pointing behind him on his left again. In an instant, Sato had injected an electric current into Fuujin, sure to add damage to the incming slashes. [Raiton:Current Transfer] The first was a horizontal slash aimed at Alucai's left knee. Satoshi then followed with a diagonal slash from the bottom right to the top left, aimed at Alucai's left rib section. The second slash was performed with most of the blade's length, ensuring a deep, paralyzing cut if contact was made. [415/435]
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:33 pm
 ☆★☆★"Died For All the Wrong Reasons"☆★☆★
Alucai jumped back avoiding the slash but as Alucai held the fiery katana out he dropped the katana and kicked the hilt at the last minute sending a wave of fire plus the katana towards Sato, Yarazu No Ame [ Last Minute Rain ]. As ALucai rushed forward behind the katana he knelt in mid slide in order to perform a lightning fast technique Iaidō Alucai would hopefully hit something if not the blade of Sato's own blade except the moment Alucai had a grip on the red hilt katana the technique Chakra Scabbard as the blade came out of it's sheath the crackling of chakra and fire lit up the fast blade that was going for Sato's midsection. This technique is said to cut through the hardest steel. [145/230]
☆★☆★"Never Die"☆★☆★
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:41 pm
[OOC: Two things. Satoshi slashed twice. The first, not so close. The second, much closer.
Also, Alucai held the red hilted katana before he dropped it and kicked it. Your Chakra Scabbard technique is using the same sword which is not possible, since the katana was kicked away.]
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:46 pm
Lord Edegaru [OOC: Two things. Satoshi slashed twice. The first, not so close. The second, much closer. Also, Alucai held the red hilted katana before he dropped it and kicked it. Your Chakra Scabbard technique is using the same sword which is not possible, since the katana was kicked away.] [[OOps sorry I meant my other katana the blue one then lol]]
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:52 pm
[What about the second slash?]
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:19 pm
[[The first attack that you blocked was the kicked katana, then I used my Iado with a chakra scabbard in order to not only break your sword but penetrate any armour being worn... make sense?]]
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:26 pm
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