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PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 7:06 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 7:08 pm


Name: Sade Mistiltan

Nicknames: Mits, DJ Frost Shock
Age: 22
Birthday: December 21
Sign: Sagittarius
Blood Type: O-

Fav. Food: Peppermint Chocolate Chip milkshakes - mainly because they're just awesome, but also because they're almost impossible to find except during December.

Hated Food: Deer Meat - She's had deer meat before because her father likes to go out and hunt deer. She thinks its stringy and unnecessarily greasy so she doesn't like to eat it.

Occupation: Works as a DJ in Club Ice Jewel.


Hobbies:
-Singing: Sade loves to sing, her voice is a sweet soprano. Sade got into singing through a Christmas pageant she was in one year at her school. She enjoys keeping a tradition of singing during Christmas ever since. However she's working on trying to become a singer and wants to broaden the types of songs she sings. Often Sade is eager to go out and sing for the public, she believes it’s perhaps the most charitable thing she does. Plus, when she's singing she actually doesn’t judge people.

-Collecting Snow globes: Sade loves to collect snow globes from all over. When her parents go on vacation while she’s in school they’ll bring her back a snow globe. Sade’s collection is sort of small but she’s working on it all the same.

-Audiophile: Sade is continuously listening to singers sing to improve her own voice. Her stereo is one of those Hi-Fi, close to the real thing as you can possibly get coming out of an electronic speaker type deals. She hates bad quality recordings and will promptly throw them out when she finds one. Being an audiophile Viginia loves anything to do with music, and while it'll take her singing career a while to take off she's found that DJing at some of the local Nightclubs keeps her happy and occupied with her love for all things audio.

-Shopping: Sade loves to shop, by herself or with friends. She might be a semi-typical rich girl shopper, but that doesn't mean she won't go window shop in order just to find that one thing she's expecting to find. Virgina often shops both real-world and through searching the internet for places that not many people know about. Sometimes it's to find the hard to find items other times it's to find when the latest and newest gadgets are coming out and who's going to have them; she often stalks the new releases or even seasonal food items; up days before they come out and returns often so as not to miss getting the very first one. She also uses her shopping sources to find who makes her clothing and where to get it. Since she's not interested in sewing herself she looks for custom designers, that do good quality work.

Gemstone: Blue Topaz

Virtues:
-Good Leader: Sade is almost a natural born leader, she knows how to get things done. Even if the method is sometimes unconventional. She enjoys friends that listen to her and understands where she's coming from when trying to lead them. Things just don't go as well if she's not in charge in some way. Like that last musical bombed because she wasn't helping figure out how things should work. She doesn’t hesitate to take the lead when it’s needed, especially if people are running around with their head cut off. Often when someone else has an idea Sade will listen to them, and depending on her feelings about the suggestion or idea she'll act accordingly from there. Part of being a leader though, is to know when to follow, and while Virgina doesn't like to follow she'll relinquish the rights to lead if someone has considerably more experience than she does.

-Optimistic: Sade sees the glass as always half-full; she thinks if she keeps a positive outlook things will always turn out for the better. However, even then things lead to disappointment. After a frown and a few bitter words she's right back at looking on the bright side trying to turn the disappointment into an opportunity to work harder to achieve her goals.

-Patience When it comes to her long term goals Sade is Patient, she knows it takes a long time to be a good singer and a lot of practice. With all her long term goals she takes things in stride and tries not to rush things, even with friendships, she tries to not make her friends feel like they have to be her friend if they don't want to be. She often is a very good teacher and leader because of this, she gives people the benefit of the doubt that they need a learning curve and is often willing to help try to explain difficult concepts. She also doesn’t mind lending something to someone and having to wait a long time to get it back, she often sits and waits for them to return it without bothering them for it every day.

Flaws:
-Fish Tales: Sade tells fish tales that portray herself in a good light. She's normally found telling how she helped some poor soul keep from freezing to death, or how she heroically saved a kitten from a tree. She weaves believable enough tales however sometimes if she's not careful things start to get a little out of order or they get a little bigger each time. Sometimes she loses friends over these stories because they feel stabbed in the back; however, Sade still tells the papers or whatever/whoever she can, things that she’s done, to try to get in a better light.

-"Money makes the world go round": Sade believes that money is the most important thing in the world. She uses it to buy her happiness, her friends and even tries to buy love with it. She believes that the more money you make the more happy you can be, and doesn't see why people don't understand you don't have to be miserable if you have money. On the occasions she finds herself with little to no cash and her credit cards near their limits Sade often begins to panic and ends up calling daddy and whining because she can't buy anything; knowing he'll bail her out.

-Apt to Assume: Sade assumes things based on appearance and actions. Being quick to judge someone by how they act of if they're poor or rich. She tends to zoom quickly to those deemed to be the same status as herself; however, those that look or act poor Sade often assumes they are and tends to throw food, clothing or something of the sort at them. Sade often finds herself assuming that a girly boy often means their gay, and she’s often quick to judge what clique someone belongs in just by the clothing they wear. She also doesn't like those that like to benefit themselves (pot calling the kettle black?) she'll turn her back or find a way to back stab you the moment she thinks you're trying to do that.

-”Gotta Catch them all”: Sade has a habit of wanting really hard to get things. she is of the mindset that it's super duper special if it's "limited edition" or "signed by a famous person". The fact that Sade lives off money has turned her into an obsessive freak about catching the rare things that brings that impressed look on her friends' faces. She can't help but to love the rush and the excitement of having something that no one else has and the "respect" that comes with it brings an unspoken joy to Sade. Because of how much of her life she has invested into collecting, when she can't get what she's after, there's a noticeable depression cycle she goes through. Friends are much more difficult to catch, because for each friend she gains by impressing them, she loses another friend by being too boastful or greedy.

Physical Description:

Hair: Platinum Blonde (#f1eccf) with teal green (#03756d <- lightest they should be and goes darker maybe?) dyed tips, in a fun, tasteful hairstyle (Probably something like you'd see on a catwalk.)

Maybe something like the following.

Styled likeThis

Dyed like This

Eyes: Emerald (#146e30) or a Bright Jade Green (#2c9876).

Face: pudgy, rosey cheeks on a heart shaped face, always smiling.

Body: Slender with just a little fluff for lovings skin color is something other than pasty white.

Fashion: (Please realize these are refs nothing solid you have to follow but something in this ball park for her civilian would be nice as it's what she wears to work.)

Pants: 1 2

Outfits: 1 2 3
--- Mainly for me if colorists don't like what I have up there though, there's these websites! ---
Anything on this page
Anything here
Stuff here too
And here

Accessories: NecklaceDJ headphones
Maybe some beaded bracelets and necklace(s) that match the color theme
--- My reference again ---
Accessories

Shoes: 1
Anything on this page

she DJ's at parties and clubs mostly, often found wearing shades of blue and white or blue and black sometimes she'll kick things around and wear some rainbows (but none of this OMG MY EYES BURN WHY ARE YOU WEARING THAT RAINBOW VOMIT / NEON EYE SORE outfit deal... She tries to keep it reasonable.) This the DJ name Frost Shock. As long the colors go with the cold/ice/winter/snow/frost theme you should be good. (AKA you could go into the turquoise/your bluer greens if you want.)


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 7:09 pm


LT Carrollite - http://webmineral.com/data/Carrollite.shtml

Challenge:

Uniform: ELEMENTS TO THINK ABOUT FOR UNIFORM

Main Color: Medium Blue Or Maybe Black
Secondary Color: White or Ice Blue ?

Inspiration words - Ice, frosty, snow, cold.

Lt Stage: Please keep simple!

Ref 1
Ref 2


(Feel free to darken/ice this up as much as you'd like. Winter doesn't have to be happy, it can be dreary. ^-^ )

Weapon

-Stage one: Snow Globe
-Stage two: Snow Globe Wand - Her snow globe can create a zap of energy that feels icy to her opponents. Max use of two times per battle.
-Stage three: Snow Globe Staff - Her snow globe can create a zap of energy that feels icy to her opponents. Max use of two times per battle.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 7:09 pm


**Just as a note: Her Snowglobe wand starts out as some sort of plastic, probably a hard, soft, or squeaky plastic (or a mix of that). Just so people are aware this isn't quite made of glass and wood at the first stage. The final stage however will be a different story. 8D;

http://images.neopets.com/items/wetsnowballwand.gif <- also the snow globe wand sorta looks like that thing...


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PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2011 12:21 pm


((Got permission from LP over AIM to do some crit.))

LP: Blue says I'm being mean! ((I'm not trying to be)) though I will say you've decidedly grown as a role-player, and that a little spit and polish will make that show up as you pull these characters up from the depths. So I'm going to try and point out areas where I think you might want to look into changing things.

Name: Your current name set up is very.... ok it's kind of tropey. It ties DIRECTLY into her costuming... and that's always going to come across as very forced. I'd be really sure you want to continue this route while revamping the character. I would also, personally go with the European based name. Her current one sounds very Japanese, and everything about her indicates she has no Asiatic bloodlines whatsoever (that I'm aware of), so the European last name would make more sense, it feels like.
Think of Akina's crit on the Troy quest. You don't want to throw everything into making the character a single, streamlined image. Besides this character has -way- more potential to them than just being a sexy-Nega-Claus.


Favorite Food: I'm confused by the extra addition that somehow the fact that these shakes are seasonal makes them better, since there doesn't seem to be another indication that she's excited by or fascinated by exclusivity? However, based on her other personality traits, this might actually be an really exciting flaw to explore, a potential fascination, even obsession with getting her hands on something -rare- or hard to acquire. Otherwise I'd pretty much ignore the food thing, but this potential trait seems like it ought to be explored more! I haven't seen it before, which means it could be a fun, unique thing for her!

Hobbies: Other than shopping, most of her hobbies seem to revolve around music, both singing and collecting, but tell me more about her, please! Does she like or hate to read? Have a guilty (or not so guilty) tv pleasure? keep a secret rating book for what shops have the best home-made ice-cream?

-Audiophile: Personally I'd strip the part about 'chucking things out the window'.... unless you intend for her to come across as rather immature and short tempered. This trait of tossing them out the window (and potentially hitting someone or something...) seems in conflict with her patient trait as well.

-Shopping: I'd like a little more depth on this, since so far the only thing I -know- she'd be found shopping for is musical equipment and music for her audiophile ways. This would be a FANTASTIC place to start to tie in any interest in the unusual and hard to get. Perhaps hard to find, high end items with high exclusivity ((Limited Quantities! Signed edition! One of a Kind! etc)) set her shopping blood boiling? Although Akina points out not to add references to them AS a nega/Senshi/Knight, such a trait could also make for interesting roleplay if she became obsessive about the rainbow crystals, even if/especially if, she never gets her hands on one.


-Good Leader: This is a trait I'd be very careful with. I'm not going to say 'delete it', but I'd look into how she'd feel when someone politely (or not so politely) puts a quash on her attempts to step in and lead. How does she feel about being a subordinate, since as a nega she'll be one to at least one individual or another, right up to Tanz.
It may be downright challenging to get the chance to form a team and show people that she's the leader she wants to be, and she'll have to deal with failures as well. I'd like to know more about how she'll handle those too. Would she blame those beneath her for her grand schemes falling apart, or take the blame? Perhaps a combination of both?

-Fish Tales: Was she actually trying to commit insurance fraud or was this a 'Fish tale' itself? How did her parents manage to keep her out of jail, (or juvie) and how old was she?

-Money Makes the World go Round: Money can be no object for certain characters in INOM, though I'd be curious to know more about how the family makes their money, and if there's a limit to how high her spending can actually go before she hits a shocking wall and gets an 'Denied' on the credit-card swiper. ((How much does a VJ make? This I actually don't know.))

I like that she's trying to use money to fill a personal void, but it feels like this could use a little bit more meat on it's bones before, as a casual reader, I feel invested enough to feel sympathy for her free handed spending toward 'love'.It's possible you could even make this personal void into it's own flaw (like Realgars "If I let you in", but I'm not sure if that would be too much, or if you'd feel comfortable with that. Experiment and see?

Uniform: As an alternate thought, and NOT a crit, maybe she could have some of the super baggy raver pants and some kind of ravery top as a uniform? Those are kinda fun and unique, and would give her an excuse to wear some kick a**, flatter boots. Much easier to run around in than heels, and you could still go with some fur trim? She seems to wear similar things already, so it would be an easy adjustment. Just a random thought since I liked the crazy pants. Plus it would look way badass with the hair.

You've got some fun elements here, hopefully this will help a little!
PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2011 7:58 pm


Working on editing - However for pay scale I had to sorta double check with googling it I found this DJ Hourly Rate >> I think that might be close enough, I'd say since she's new she might be closer to the lower end.


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PostPosted: Thu May 26, 2011 1:38 pm


ON THE CIVILIAN:

I'd make her name non-Japanese. I know you are trying to do a play on words, but she could be Misseltoe or McSelto or something else that would not dive into the random Japanese last name.

FISH TALES is confusing. Her parents wanted to send her to rehab? Are you trying to say she is a compulsive liar? I think you took this trait one notch to far from "fish tales" to "serious psychological issue." I would recommend deleting the last lines about insurance fraud and rehab and just leave it at her telling larger than life stories to look good.

MONEY MAKES THE WORLD is a little scattered. I would rewrite it and cut it in half to just focus on the fact that Virginia believes she can buy anything she wants -- friends, jobs, anything -- and how this makes her shallow to others. At the same time, she would be a shell of a person if she didn't have her money.

GOTTA CATCH EM ALL is about being obsessive. It is also a little all over the place. I think you could describe this better in 3-5 simple sentences that focus on how she becomes dogged and fixed on getting what she wants -- even material things -- to the point that failing to acquire them can unhinge her and she might do some very questionable/alienating things in the process.

Hope that makes sense.

ON THE NEGA:

Ryu is right that I try to discourage people from doing concepts that are super on-the-nose, but that is my personal preference so it won't keep you from a stamp.

The snow globe wand is not enough of a joke weapon. That is basically a staff! For the first stage, the weapon would need to be, I think, a regular plastic snowglobe - plain and boring - that becomes a wand and then a staff. Also, magical items are supposed to be incredibly rare in the Negaverse, as rare as blunt force weapons are for Knights. Reading her profile now, it sounds like she is a Knight, honestly.

Nega magic is still typically physically-based. Lina shoots a beam out of her staff, but that is a physical strike. Nealite reflected magical attacks, but even that was mostly physical. Neither one of them cast anything, not really. I feel like Carrollite is casting magic, which is Knightly. If you want to keep her with a magic edge, then I would revise to give her wand/staff a minor ability to deliver an icy zap. So maybe in a battle she can give two charged zaps that feel icy, but are still just normal physical attacks – no freezing or slowing down. This would be more in line with Nega magic, I think.
PostPosted: Thu May 26, 2011 8:54 pm


Okay.... I think I fixed everything.... I hope.


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