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 Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 6:16 pm
I am the keeper of the Midnight Carnival. When you first arrive, everything appears pristine. The paths are clean, the rides well maintained, employees friendly and the food tasty. But the longer you stay at my carnival, the more the facade falls away and the truth revealed. The carnival is crumbling. The rides are rusting and falling apart, the paths are strewn with litter, the employees long gone and the food nothing more than greasy blobs at this point. And so I sit atop my Ferris Wheel, watching my carnival fall apart beneath me.
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 9:58 pm
I like your imagery and story line a lot.
I must say that I was only sad that it wasn't like "I'm an evil clown and you're stuck here forever with me in this carnival" kind of ending.
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