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 Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 7:09 pm
Fear me, love me, do as I say.......
I have just written one of the most amazing horror chapters ever for my Labyrinth fanfiction. My story is a horror/romance between an otaku O/C and Jareth. Kassydie, obviously the oc, has been traveling through the labyrinth for her baby sister and has faced life threatening horrors in every chapter. I've written the ninth hour and it was the horror I've been planning up to the entire thing, I haven't planned anything after and now I'm stuck as to how to best myself with the next chapter!!
If you would please write the most horrific or gory things you can think of or throw out horrifying ideas I would appreciate it very much!
And I will be your slave........
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 7:33 pm
Er -- AND THEN HER EYES BLED. D:
*not good at this thing* But I do go to Halloween Horror Nights every year! XD
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 8:27 pm
Fear me, love me, do as I say.......
XD Hmmm, bleeding eyes...................... SHNICKEY! Demonical beast with blood pouring from his eyes. Maybe...... I'm honestly not sure how to top her seeing her baby sister black with decomposition and still alive and then coming out of a pond made of blood.
And I will be your slave........
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 8:35 pm
I would freak if I saw something like that! Great I'm probably going to have some nice dreams tonight.
Uh maybe even scarier would be finding out that her zombie sister is following her? And whispering some pretty distressing things?
Yeah I'm not good with this stuff either... D :
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 8:38 pm
Fear me, love me, do as I say.......
No no I'm getting ideas from you two. XD Yay!!! Now I'm thinking she could be followed by wraiths or harpies with blood dripping from her eyes. Hmm, wraiths would be good. She could enter a part and do some stuff then be attacked and clawed at by them cuz they'll try to eat her. Yay!!!
And I will be your slave........
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:08 pm
You know it wasn't until I left and took a shower did I think "Labyrinth... Jareth...OMG I freaking love that movie!" : D
Your character is going through a pretty tough hell huh?
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:16 pm
Fear me, love me, do as I say.......
They always do if I have anything to say about it. XD Yeah, I think she's one of my best. She has a lot of depth without being cliche. It's the otaku magic I think. XD She accidentally wished her sister away, trying to find a better way to tell her Grandmother Sarah's story about Jareth. Then found herself in the Labyrinth, falling in love with Jareth and trying to rescue her baby sister without getting eaten by kelpies or raped by minotaurs. The part where her sister is all deadish and stuff is when she falls into the pond that replaced the Bog of Eternal Stench. ((Which had to be replaced because I hated it and it obviously wasn't a great enough threat to unruly inhabitants.))
And I will be your slave........
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:30 pm
I always thought Jareth had some awesome hair... =w=
You can take this pretty far! You're going to have fun coming up with interesting things to happen to her.
Yeah I always thought the bog was kinda lame but man I loved the masquerade.
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Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:48 pm
Fear me, love me, do as I say.......
XD I know!! I loooovvved David Bowie as Jareth, which is why I made the fanfic, and the OC. I figured Sarah wasn't good enough for Jareth and he needed someone different to be whole. The masquerade was suuuch a good character definition of Jareth's lover side!
And I will be your slave........
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