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- Lune Amour - Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:07 pm
Greetings Everyone biggrin I know some of you enjoy writing in general, so I thought I'd open up a poetry section biggrin Feel free to post anything you wish from your deepest or darkest feelings to your mosy joyous moments of life !! 
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 12:10 am
Can I just post a link to my dA for my poetry?
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- Lune Amour - Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:38 am
Da-ku Kishou Tenpi Can I just post a link to my dA for my poetry? Of course !! It's your guild xd And we'd love to read your work biggrin
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 9:55 am
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- Lune Amour - Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 6:41 pm
Da-ku Kishou Tenpi http://pokemaniac1993.deviantart.com/gallery/ Thats my gallery, updated as soon as I write anything Woo ~ Thanks James biggrin
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:15 pm
I have... one. Do I post it right here?
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:19 am
CorrineAri I have... one. Do I post it right here? Yes you do razz
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:34 am
I actually have my journal with all my poetry in it.... I'll post some tomorrow if that's ok?
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- Lune Amour - Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:50 am
Toxic_Treats I actually have my journal with all my poetry in it.... I'll post some tomorrow if that's ok? Of course biggrin We appreciate your participation biggrin
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:16 am
Ayako Miyojin Toxic_Treats I actually have my journal with all my poetry in it.... I'll post some tomorrow if that's ok? Of course biggrin We appreciate your participation biggrin Thanks redface
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:19 am
I will warn you guys my poetry isn't exactly uplifting
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:34 am
Ok so here goes nothing! This is one of my older poems so it's probably not that good. Please do tell me what you think of it and I still haven't thought of a name for it so if you have an idea tell me about it. You seemed to
be such a
beautiful soul.
so careless and free.
You spoke from
the heart of things
far greater than
you or me.
Little did I
know this was
all an act.
A carefully planned
game...
And I was
nothing but your
toy.
What an amazing
pawn i made
for your game.
I believed each
carefully constructed lie
you told me.
I was dilusional
to think a heartless
monster could possibly
know anything about
love or beauty.
So you are the
same...
Blood thirsty and
raw just like
the rest of
the scum that
infests this earth.
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:02 pm
Toxic_Treats Ok so here goes nothing! This is one of my older poems so it's probably not that good. Please do tell me what you think of it and I still haven't thought of a name for it so if you have an idea tell me about it. You seemed to
be such a
beautiful soul.
so careless and free.
You spoke from
the heart of things
far greater than
you or me.
Little did I
know this was
all an act.
A carefully planned
game...
And I was
nothing but your
toy.
What an amazing
pawn i made
for your game.
I believed each
carefully constructed lie
you told me.
I was dilusional
to think a heartless
monster could possibly
know anything about
love or beauty.
So you are the
same...
Blood thirsty and
raw just like
the rest of
the scum that
infests this earth.
I bloody love it!!! Great job~
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:25 pm
Da-ku Kishou Tenpi Toxic_Treats Ok so here goes nothing! This is one of my older poems so it's probably not that good. Please do tell me what you think of it and I still haven't thought of a name for it so if you have an idea tell me about it. You seemed to
be such a
beautiful soul.
so careless and free.
You spoke from
the heart of things
far greater than
you or me.
Little did I
know this was
all an act.
A carefully planned
game...
And I was
nothing but your
toy.
What an amazing
pawn i made
for your game.
I believed each
carefully constructed lie
you told me.
I was dilusional
to think a heartless
monster could possibly
know anything about
love or beauty.
So you are the
same...
Blood thirsty and
raw just like
the rest of
the scum that
infests this earth.
I bloody love it!!! Great job~ Really? redface
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:26 pm
A Leafy Day It is a breezy fall day.
Children play joyfully.
You can hear the sound of dogs barking as they wag their tails happily.
My fellow leafs flow through the wind.
I wonder how it’s like to soar through the wind like a bird.
I have survived many winds, hot and cool ones.
Yet with each one, they seem to gain strength.
As the breezes change to winds,
I change from grass green to bark brown.
I weaken.
*i wrote this on my way to lunch with
my friend, no judging please
lol xD
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