Way to advocate violence against bullies . . .

You have a very set style I've noticed after reading only two stories. There's, set up the setting, create the characters and a problem, solve the problem. this very set style I think is dragging your story down a little bit.

In the beginning you say that the lizard is called the Horned Toad. Is that his name or a nickname because you have the snakes calling him the horny toad.

Though if snakes eat lizards, how are they in the same town? That had me the most confused through out the story.

The end of the second paragraph makes it sound like you just finished Romeo and Juliet and decided to write your own tragedy and just end it. Then you suddenly go, nah we'll give it something of a happy ending. This roller coaster of plot and emotions doesn't work in my opinion.