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 Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 9:33 pm
counting our conversations
wading our way through the words
why cant we just understand each other?
instead of starting these incessant, unnecessary arguments
about things my pride wont let me swallow
about things i cant even comprehend
i need to know you still care
i need to know im still who i used to be
i wake up every morning
scared by that man in the mirror
who is he?
where is the boy that stood there
sheepish and shy, so many months ago
counting our conversations
wading our way through the words
you're here for so little
and gone for so long
but i cant seem to keep you out
and believe me, i've tried
the problem is that you arent even to blame
you always hit me with that contagious, constant smile
such a bright light in the dismal doldrums of my daily life
but by the end i manage to wipe that smile clear
and what started with laughter, ended in tears
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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 7:23 am
This almost reminded me of a poem my ex might have wrote about our relationship.
"you always hit me with that contagious, constant smile
such a bright light in the dismal doldrums of my daily life"
I like your use of alliteration smile
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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:45 pm
Wow. That was wonderful. Please write more!
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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 9:21 pm
Cloom Wow. That was wonderful. Please write more! lmao well if you say so....
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