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 Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 6:51 pm
Alrighty then~. Since the rest of the guild is going to go under the same treatment. We'll judge all the OC profiles coming in, in this topic alright?
Start posting~!
((Please... one at a time. And we'll give our opinions on whether they're too powerful, etc. ))
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Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 6:52 pm
Whatever Profile Twi puts up I reject it.... >.>
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Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 6:55 pm
-kicks Raine-
From this point on! All your opinions no longer matter!
((Kudos to those who get that. XD ))
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Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 6:56 pm
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IIIIMMMM NOOOTTTT RUUKKIIAAAAAAAAA YYOUUUU ARREEE O:<
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 3:52 am
Username:BMB
Character Name:Terra Belle
Race: Arrancar
Age: 100
Birthday (optional): June 2nd
Height: 5'10
Weight (optional): n/a
Eyes: Lavender
Hair: Blue
Unusual Features: None
Mask Fragment: The single horn and rose on head.
Hollow hole: covered by cloths (small hole in foot)
Number: 3 (Covered by cloths) (ower hip
Affiliation: Aizen's Espada
Rank: 3rd
Aspect of death : Betrayal
Relatives (optional): N/A
Appearance: 
Personality:
normal, very formal, is complete opposite when mad.
History:
Terra was once the daugter of Barragan Luisenbarn. He loved his daughter because they were both complete opposites. She could create plant-life and make it flourish and he could destroy it.
She was a vasto lorde class hollow found by Aizen. Aizen was astounded that she was only 100 years old and she was already a vasto lorde hollow usually the process took longer. She was reluctant to join and told aizen no. When aizen heard her answer he asked why, she responded by saying "I've lived through 100 years of betrayal, seeing so called friends come and go what makes you different." Aizen smiled and held out his hand to comfort her. "As long as you're with me betrayal will never come to you again." Leaving with aizen she then became the third espada and the youngest arrancar to ever become an espada becoming a prodigy among most.
Resurreccion Name: Tutora de rosas
Resurreccion: 
-Bolt of love-
She summons a huge rose with a whistling sound. It then releases four roses that are capable of shooting laser beams.
-Seductive voice-
She unleashes a huge high-pitched vibration and sound.
-Bewitching wind-
Summons a huge rose and it breaks down into smaller rose petals. The petals then can either swhirl/swarm around the caster to protect from attacks. Or around the enemy to cut them repeatedly.
-Heavenly rose cannon-
She turns upside down and opens the giant rose, that forms her lower body, to reveal a large cannon-like bracelet and fires a huge energy blast
Segunda Etapa: 
-Thorn whipping-
Her whip can expand and extend. The whip is able to sunder earth and is sometimes able to paralyze (if an even number is used during dice role or random number)
-Forbidden temptation-
A larger verson of her "bewitching wind technique".
-Orbs-
She can summon 8 orbs they can do 3 things. Form a octagonal shield that can block attacks. Fire lasers in various patterns. Attack their enemies by rushing into them at high speeds.
Other Information:
-Betrayal-
Since her aspect of death is betrayal she gains strength around someone who has been betrayed or is a traitor. When this aspect is acknowledged she gains markings over her body.
-Terra forming-
The ability to generate plant-life and manipulate earth.
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 11:54 am
@BB
Looks good to me BB. Any other opinions guys?
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 12:43 pm
TwiDawnLight @BB Looks good to me BB. Any other opinions guys? I''m fine with it biggrin
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 1:12 pm
Username: OriSTELLOhime
Character Name: Hisana Kurosaki
Race: Half human, half hollow
Age: 16/17
Birthday (optional): September 8
Height: 5’ 7”
Weight (optional): 105 lbs.
Eyes: Left eye is gray, right eye is black with a yellow iris, covered by hair
Hair: Burnt-ish Orange
Unusual Features: Large bust like Orihime’s
Blood Type (optional): O-
Affiliation: Division
Squad: Her world- Parallel Squad Zero. Our guild- Divison 11, Combat Specialist
Rank: Captain of her Parallel Squad Zero. 3rd Seat of Division 11
Relatives (optional): Ichigo Kurosaki (father), unknown mother Appearance: mrgreen Regular: Hisana has long burnt orange hair that hangs over half of her face. This is to prevent any Hollow energy from escaping, because if any being not human sees it, a hollow form of herself is brought out. There is a split piece of hair that falls on both sides of her nose; when gentle, kind, sad, horrified, or shocked, Hisana Kurosaki resembles either Hisana Kuchiki or Orihime Inoue in a way. When serious, deadly, angered, tough, sarcastic, annoyed, suspicious, furious, or fired up, she seems to bring out the side of her that resembles Rukia Kuchiki. She also has one gray eye and a fair skin tone, also a bust the same size as Orihime's. She bares a hibiscus flower broach on her neck, in hopes that her unknown powers will reveal themselves in the near future. twisted Hollow: Her hollow form is nearly identical to her regular form, biologically. Although her hair covering her Hollow eye is now white and blown away from it, and both her eyes are black with yellow irises. She wears a short black and white kimono with a low-cut V shape in the middle, revealing half of her bosom like Rangiku would, and bares the Hollow hole in the middle of her back under her robes. She is barefoot, and almost never smiles, except for when she's bloodthirsty and..."twisted." biggrin Bankai: In Hisana's Bankai form, her appearance is much more similar to that or Orihime Inoue and Ichigo Kurosaki. Her hair gets wavy on the ends, and the flower broach on her necklace is moved up to her ear, making it obvious it's the 2nd generation of The Three Flowers of the Hibiscus Shield; the petals are extended and resemble an actual flower. Her shinigami uniform's top is opened up much more, but still fastened in the middle; the bottom edge of her shirt-thing is ripped, and the sleeves are narrower and longer, reaching down to her fingers' lower joints. Underneath this, there are low-wrapped bandages around her torso, in the case of an emergency.Personality: Hisana is tough as steel and won't tolerate for positive emotions; though because of this, Ichigo gives her the nickname “General Arctic Tundra,” being the fact at one point when she was fourteen or fifteen, she scared him more than Rukia could have years ago. She despises this greatly and will do anything to start a fight with Ichigo she can easily win. On the other hand, when she's in the training grounds area with other shinigami, or out in battle with Arrancars or Hollows, her abilities will fire up to the extreme and can activate in nearly a split second. History:Early life: About 20 years after Ichigo sealed Aizen away without using his Final Getsuga Tenshō, Hisana Kurosaki was born on September 8th in Soul Society. That same day, Ichigo was in grave battle with Hollow Ichigo. Him morbidly wounded, Hollow Ichigo saw the chance to escape out of Ichigo's own body and into Soul Society/the outside world. He did so successfully and made it out. Eventually, he found his way to the birth site of Hisana Kurosaki, and, as Ichigo was just about to catch him, he stowed himself away within Hisana. (Freaky, but it's legit.) Hisana opened her eyes for the first time; one eye was normal, sparkly gray, and the other was identical to a hollow's, black and yellow. Ichigo and the others decided to use her to conceal Hollow Ichigo, never to return unless she allows it by pulling her hair back (to allow it, she'd have to know, which she never did.); as a child, an eyepatch concealed it until her hair was long enough to hide it. The Beginning: Most of her life, Hisana, and Ichigo lived in the human world, back in Karakura town. Rukia Kuchiki lived down the road with Orihime. Hisana was stuck inside the house all day to prevent anyone from being tempted into exposing her hollow eye. Her Teenage Years: Hisana was attacked by a hollow when she turned about 16, and Ichigo turned to his shinigami form for the first time in... a long time. Hisana witnessed this event and, after the hollow disappeared, she demanded an explanation from him; Ichigo couldn't explain all of it, so he took her to Soul Society, showing her everything and explaining hidden shinigami power within her. Rukia caught up with them and gave her a soul candy; when Hisana ate it, her shinigami form was born, and she fought with the other shinigami ever since, eventually creating her own squad, Parallel Squad Zero. From that day forth, her whole life changed, and she's stayed in the human world by herself to fight against evil forces ever since. Along the way, she's uncovered numerous hidden abilities.The Present (her time/our guild): While strolling with her Zanpakuto spirit around Soul Society in her shinigami uniform, on a cold winter day, Hisana looked to the sky as it started to snow. Megami Zetsumei explained to her that snow was a gift for the world when they had all worked hard during the hot summers, and that the cold winds were a sign angels were singing to them. (It was almost Christmas, so that explains a lot.) However, the cold winds started to blow harder and harder, until black winds came and directly stabbed Hisana's wound; Megami Zetsumei morphed back to her sword form to travel with Hisana. A black vortex sucked them both inside-outwards until they completely vanished. When Hisana tumbled out, she was standing in the middle of a desert, lost and alone. There was no sight of life for miles... Upon wandering, she was brutally attacked by a Hollow, until saved by a mystery boy with large black wings and dark purple hair, who managed to create a zanpakuto out of thin air. He disappeared after the Hollow's defeat, leaving Hisana stranded immobilized from the attack. Eventually, Wasteland Scouts found her and brought her back to Rukia Kuchiki, captain of the Underground Divisions; she explained to Hisana that the world had perished under Aizen's victory against Ichigo Kurosaki. Hisana was confused, considering Ichigo was her father. Through much deep thought, she realized that the black vortex had transported her to another universe much like hers, except the planet was an apocalyptic wasteland. Front his point, she joined the Underground Society as a member of Divison 11, the Combat Specialists, teaching everyone her amazing sword techniques learned from Byakuya in her own world. (Refer to the "Other Information Section" if you're confused on that last part.)Zanpakuto Name: Zetsumei Sealed State: In its sealed form, Zetsumei is nearly identical to that of Zangetsu, Ichigo Kurosaki’s sword, except the handle-thing and hilt are composed with embossed, curved lines on all sides, making it easier for Hisana to hold onto the zanpakuto Zanpakuto Spirit: Megami Zetsumei Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance:  Appearance of Final Performance Spirit:  Releases:Phase 1- “Kage To Dansu, Megami Zetsumei!” Phase 2- “Death Wish, White Zangetsu.” Shikai: Megami Zetsumei Abilities: The abilities will gradually reveal themselves one-by-one until the final battle of this guild in which Ichigo comes back. Tracker Reiatsu: Hisana develops a black, shadowy reiatsu at her feet, which spans into a hemisphere that allows her to sense any life forms or creatures within a 1-mile radius. It's very easy to notice, especially to that of an Arrancar, and as a result, isn't used very much.Santen Zanshun: The hibiscus broach clasped on a chain around Hisana's neck splits apart into three pieces, each unfolding into little fairy-like creatures, given the names Akahana, Etsuyo, and Satomi. The tiny creatures have different sets of wings relating to an angel, a demon, and a fiery phoenix. They align in a triangular formation in front of Hisana and each generate a corner of a triangular Garganta. This tactic is ideal for transportation methods from one place to another.Watashi ni kokyū: Meaning "Breathe Into Me," this Shikai ability allows her to create a pillar of black light that rains down from the sky onto Hisana and the zanpakuto, releasing Hollow Hisana and White Zangetsu Reborn. (Hollow Hisana is really just her possessed by Hollow Ichigo, although her voice sounds deeper and deadlier.)Himei o Ageru no Komori-uta: Meaning "Scream Lullaby," this is one of Hisana and Zetsumei's most powerful attacks. Before using this, music will start to play out of nowhere. Once the song reaches the climax point, Megami Zetsumei comes out of her sword and into her spirit form, joining in song with Hisana. Two long lines of rainbow-colored music notes and measures erupt from their mouths while singing, twisting into a beam similar to a cero; the sword form of Zetsumei is faintly shown behind Megami and Hisana, acting as if it were an electric guitar, playing the guitar solo that adds extra power to the attack. This creates a song so loud and heart-wrenching, it paralyzes the foe in their tracks, and melts away their willpower and courage to keep fighting. The only people who are immune to this ability are Megami Zetsumei, Rukia Kuchiki, Orihime Inoue, and Hisana herself. No hollow is immune to this attack; it's completely impossible. Saigo no pafōmansu ga dete, anata no kokoro o sakebu/
Last Performance, Scream Your Heart Out:
This is the last form is Hisana Kurosaki and Megami Zetsumei. The zanpakuto is slammed into the ground, acting as a microphone stand, and Zetsumei emerges as her cleansed form with longer red hair and a crimson-to-black, scanty body suit. Her partner Hisana bares a much lowered geisha's kimono down to below her cleavage, as there is a slit up the right thigh, enabling swifter movement. Hisana's hair is moved back and reveals there not to be a Hollow eye, but it is red. Zetsumei's blade takes on a more rigid appearance with many jagged edges and a crossed duo-ribbon on the end of the hilt. If this attack is used, both Hisana and Zetsumei completely lose their powers and become humans; yes, this means Zetsumei is no longer a spirit, but a living, breathing person. Hisana would be exorcised of her inner Hollow, and sent back to her universe with Zetsumei. Considering the crossover of events in the space-time continuum, the two technically die in one universe and are returned to totally normal in their original universe, still having their powers.Kido: Without even knowing it until she later turned seventeen, Hisana has successfully been able to pull of an impressingly powerful Kido, healing the target completely in a short amount of time, being almost as powerful as Orihime Inoue's Soten Kisshun ability. The same also goes for her using Bakudo; in her hollow form, she has mastered every single one of the previous techniques, being exactly the second reason why her Hollow form is never released; she would become unstoppable and too powerful.Hoho: Hisana has been able to do an extremely fast Shunpo, moving miles within less than a minute; however, the Shunpo is only able to be attempted while in Hollow form. She’s almost as fast as YoruichI...Other Information: Hisana, in her world, trained in Soul Society with Rukia’s brother, Byakuya Kuchiki. He taught her many of these mentioned techniques, as well as skilled sword moves a samurai might use. She despises bugs, but isn't scared of them, always squashing them under her fist when others are afraid to touch it. She is very interested in dangerous and deadly plants and animals, plus loves to pick a fight with those who shouldn’t be messed with. You could say she’s 25% adrenaline junkie, 25% artist, 25% combat specialist, 25% talented, and 100% just plain strange.
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 1:13 pm
TwiDawnLight @BB Looks good to me BB. Any other opinions guys? Sounds good to me! mrgreen And I redid the entire layout for my OC.
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 3:15 pm
Hime-chan
Hm... I love what ya did with Hisana's history so it was seperated. Very nice! =D
Hisana looks interesting, and I think she's good. Any complaints guys?
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 3:24 pm
I like it..
I still wonder if I should post Leere, I could even make it so that in the past before the big war thing that the gotei 13 made his natural Zanpakuto forbidden from releasing, and even though that no one currently knows him today he could still think hes forbidden from releasing it. idk I'm rambling and if that confused you he has two Zanpakuto's one is his natural and its power is over whelming. His second one is caused from his Hogyoku infection and caused another zanpakuto to become linked to him (Soifon's when she died)
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 4:02 pm
TELL ME WHATCHYA THINK biggrin
Ringo Maruyama
Username: Raine Shiba
Character Name: Ringo Maruyama
Race: Human - Substitute Shinigami
Age: 18
Birthday: August 5
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 175 lbs
Eyes: Light Green-Jade
Hair: Crimson Red, Dark Red
Unusual Features: Eyepatch that covers right eye, which is an entirely inky black eyeball…
Blood Type: B
Affiliation: Underground, 5th Division, Somewhat of a Loner
Squad: 5 (Only affiliates himself with them because of Fujimaru, but is not officially in the squad…)
Relatives: Taichi Maruyama (Father, Deceased)
Miyuki Maruyama (Mother, Deceased)
Appearance:
Crimson red hair, bright green-jade eyes, and an athletic build, Ringo is an eighteen year old survivor of the War with Aizen… He wears the common clothes, black jeans, with a white T-shirt and black leather jacket worn over. He wears a headband around his neck, like a necklace, which is itself dark red in color with ornate golden designs stitched into it… He has a small silver ear piercing on the lobe of his left ear… He wears fingerless battle gloves, and an eye patch covers his right eye, for reasons he does not openly mention…
Personality: Cheery, Eager for battle and willing to help in any situation, he is one of the most loyal friends to Fujimaru Kudo… He is not laid back, and will seem to get any job done on task and on time. Though he is not openly friendly, not wiling to approach someone and strike conversation with him or her, he will never reject the opportunity. He can be cocky at times, but years of experience in fighting have taught him to become more aware and cautious when it comes to battle. He is known to be rough-around-the edges towards those of inferior rank…
History: Born to a family of survivors that was able to survive the war, Ringo was not his original name at birth. His original name is unknown… At the time, he was raised in a small decent home his parents Miyuki and Taichi were able to locate… At the age of twelve, his parents were both killed by a hollow, and during that same day, Ringo released his power, one that he had no idea he had, killing the hollow, but blames himself to this day for the death of his parents, whom he loved dearly… He was the only one who could see hollows in his family…
He had to learn to live alone, under the fear of constant attack by hollows and under the awareness that any day could be his last… His house and multiple hidden findings he had stored in the house were the only things he had left… He did everything he could to protect them… He had remained alone for two years, with no one else to speak to… Soon enough, it had come to a point where he had forgotten his own name…
One day while salvaging through rubble to find anything of interest or worth, a Captain from the Soul Retreival Force, Fujimaru Kudo, noticed Ringo, and after realizing his potential after a short confrontation, Fujimaru took Ringo in as his pupil…
Shortly after, Fujimaru noticed Ringo had no name, and therefore, named him Ringo "Apple" for Ringo's love of apples…
Soon enough, Ringo had gained the ability to release his shikai, earning a zanpakuto, and discovering the spirits within him. He became aware of a more spiritual world, and continued to practice daily, all of Fujimaru's teachings.
After some time, he had gained the ability to achive bankai, at age seventeen… and Fujimaru was pleased to see such success in the upbringing of Ringo…
The two became close friends…
Ringo to this day affiliates himself with the Underground, and has become considerably one of the most powerful… as far as humans are concerned… He has attempted to relate with Orihime on several occasions… considering they are both humans… He knows everyone else in the Underground fairly well, and will not hesitate to converse with them…
Weapon/Medium: Zanpakuto…
Zanpakuto Name: Kamiakuma (Divine "Heavenly" Demon)
Sealed State: ((See Shikai, as the Zanpakuto always remains in Shikai state))
Zanpakuto Spirit: Kamiakuma, The Heavenly Demon ((Two Black and White Koi Fish that swim around Ringo))
Release: "Break Free…"
Shikai: The Zanpakuto appears much like a long black ragged balde with a golden etching towards the hilt. The fabric of the grip is a jet black color, and the color of the hilt itself is silver… The blade itself is about the size of an oversized claymore… It does not ever return to its sealed state, as Ringo has yet to figure out how to seal it again… He still does, however, call out its release when he decides to use it, though it is not necessary for him to do this…
Shikai Abilities:
-His zanpakuto's basic ability upon release lets out a massive surge of black and white reiatsu, which seem to come at either side of the opponent…
-Ringo, using his zanpakuto, is able to sink into the ground and appear wherever he desires… except for on actual people themselves… He however, requires time to re-assemble in the new location, allowing time for an opponent to strike. This plays as a major disadvantage to Ringo, and therefore he refrains from using it…
-Using either shunpo or the minor boost his shikai supplies him, he dashes to all eight sides surrounding the opponent, each time making a slash… the slashes then cut through the opponent…
-The sword itself is naturally strong, and is used in several occasions for mere melee…
-Kamiakuma's last shikai ability, deception, is to reflect any opponents attack upon themselves… He reverses the attacks directly back to the opponent, but this time supplying it with his Ringo's own black and white reiatsu…
Bankai: "Lets punish 'em… Akumatenshi" (Demon-Angel)
Bankai Abilities:
-Upon his release, the surge of black and white energy surrounds Ringo, splitting him apart entirely into two beings… the Demon (Akuma: In white) and the Angel (Tenshi: In Black)… Each of the two with a slim long bladed katana, with a long ribbon that flow about them…
-These two beings have enhanced speed strength, and can each summon the massive burst of black and white energy… with much more force than that of Ringo's shikai…
-Each of them is able to slash through the enemy at a much higher speed and multiple times more than before…
-Akuma, the White demon, has somewhat of a raging hunger, and will willingly bite and chew into the opponent, hoping to obtain somewhat of a meal from them… His blade is known to be the more powerful, using pure brute force than anything else…
-Tenshi, the Black angel, is an excellent hand-to-hand combat. He mute, and cannot speak at all… His blade is known to be the swiftest and uses more speed than anything else… He is the only one that is known to be able to calm Akuma during one of his frenzies
-The pair make a lethal team, almost unstoppable…
-Eternal Seperation of the Angel and Demon… This is the final attack and is rarely used because after its use, it can knock Ringo into a 24 hour coma… since it releases such massive spiritual power… It's power is unknown as Ringo has yet to unleash it on a poor victim…
Abilities:
-Very effective in the use of Shunpo, not enough to have mastered it, but has been trained by Fujimaru to the point where he has become somewhat of an expert at it… He incorporates it into his fighting…
-Skilled in hand-to-hand combat, believes in fist fighting before resorting to the use of his blade… He excels in street fighting style…
Other Information:
He especially loves fruit, namely apples (hence his name)
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 4:40 pm
@Raine
I like it.
@BB & Raine & Orihime
Alright. I think it's safe to say that you can now put up your profiles. Post them under their respective races in a new topic and their squad as well as rank.
Ex. Rukia Kuchiki, Captain of Squad 1
Go for it!
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