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I remember back when I was ten
Yes, I remember all the way back then
And you were small, just nine years old
And the autumn chill made us cold

We were walking down the street
With no shoes on our feet
Of course my mother would just yell
But we didn't care if we stood or fell

And you looked up at me
With a smile in your eyes
You said "this is the start of a beautiful friendship"
And I laughed and said "That's a lie"

But you shook your head
As we walked to your house
And I followed you
Silent as a mouse

We went inside and did what little girls do
You laughed at me
And I laughed at you

And at the end of the day
We raced to my yard
Then fell over in the grass
And looked up at the stars

You smiled, then turned to me
And Said "Nothing will ever tear us apart"
And I believed you
I believed you with all of my heart

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Could you guys help me come up with a title please? thanks ^_^ heart

A First Friend / Forever in My Heart

Just a suggestion to stick with one scheme throughout the poem. The rhyming words should line up.

I remember back when I was ten
Yes, I remember all the way back then
And you were small, just nine years old
And the autumn chill made us cold

We were walking down the street
With no shoes on our feet
Of course my mother would just yell
But we didn't care if we stood or fell

And you looked up at me
With a smile in your eyes
You said "this is the start of a beautiful friendship"
And I laughed and said "That's a lie"

But you shook your head
As we walked to your house
And I followed you
Silent as a mouse

We went inside
and did what little girls do
You laughed at me
And I laughed at you

And at the end of the day
We raced to my yard
Then fell over in the grass
And looked up at the stars

You smiled, then turned to me
And Said "Nothing will ever tear us apart"
And I believed you
I believed you with all of my heart

See how it went from double rhyming to skipped lines? I suggest you stick with one throughout.

My First Real Friend

Memories of the Heart