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 Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:20 pm
Shall there always be love?
Should I stay a snub?
For love I promised not to feel
For love I know may never heal
Are all this risks worth to take
to get your wedding cake?
Tell me what you say
Should I stay this way?
For you I may be a stranger
But with this thought my mind is in danger
I can't think right,
it wouldn't even help me if I'd be bright
Should there be love?
Would I know if it'll end with sob?
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 8:05 am
Don't strain so hard on syllables in the sentance or stanza. Unless you really, really, really want it to be all the same, it's almost easier to read if none of them match sometimes.
I liked the line about the wedding cake the most.
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