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 Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:18 pm
"Years have passed then. . . years have passed since that day I was first needed in a war that told me truths. . . I was a coward then, even with my position as an elite. It was that war that got me to see things right. It was that gave me reason to move on and make this world right."
"Captain, the Erezians have breached the fourth wall! The 5th infantry has also fallen down!" a tower guard reported as their city and their castle of walls was now falling down. It was the time that the city of Unsail, and other cities fell in a single night as a treacherous nation attacked. Dead bodies littered the street as fire consumed the city.
He was running, running as he knew as well what the Erezian hands could do to him. He was not alone then, other cowards were running as well as their defense fell and the city was almost devoured by silence. He continued to run then, but then he got to notice someone by an alley. It was a sight he didn't actually expect but then it was there as he then stood still.
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Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 7:20 pm
Hidden Arc "Years have passed then. . . years have passed since that day I was first needed in a war that told me truths. . . I was a coward then, even with my position as an elite. It was that war that got me to see things right. It was that gave me reason to move on and make this world right." "Captain, the Erezians have breached the fourth wall! The 5th infantry has also fallen down!" a tower guard reported as their city and their castle of walls was now falling down. It was the time that the city of Unsail, and other cities fell in a single night as a treacherous nation attacked. Dead bodies littered the street as fire consumed the city. He was running, running as he knew as well what the Erezian hands could do to him. He was not alone then, other cowards were running as well as their defense fell and the city was almost devoured by silence. He continued to run then, but then he got to notice someone by an alley. It was a sight he didn't actually expect but then it was there as he then stood still. (to be continued) I like that story right there!
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Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 7:48 pm
Cloom Hidden Arc "Years have passed then. . . years have passed since that day I was first needed in a war that told me truths. . . I was a coward then, even with my position as an elite. It was that war that got me to see things right. It was that gave me reason to move on and make this world right." "Captain, the Erezians have breached the fourth wall! The 5th infantry has also fallen down!" a tower guard reported as their city and their castle of walls was now falling down. It was the time that the city of Unsail, and other cities fell in a single night as a treacherous nation attacked. Dead bodies littered the street as fire consumed the city. He was running, running as he knew as well what the Erezian hands could do to him. He was not alone then, other cowards were running as well as their defense fell and the city was almost devoured by silence. He continued to run then, but then he got to notice someone by an alley. It was a sight he didn't actually expect but then it was there as he then stood still. (to be continued) I like that story right there! Sorry that I haven't finished it. ^^
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Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 12:26 am
Hidden, I did not realize that you were Befrant until I had visited your profile. I enjoy your new name.
Would you like a few grammar suggestions, or would you like to wait until you are further into this story?
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Priestess of Neptune Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 12:44 am
Eh. . . you didn't? <.<
My name since I was Grey Silverfang was then Gloom Judge Befrant, Mythic Walker and then this one. :3
It's fine if you give them now. ^^
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