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Profitable Conversationalist
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 Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:22 pm
I'm doing commissions, here is one I'm working on. What do you think? Should I work on anything for next time? Is it OK? 
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:27 pm
You draw bodily proportions much better than I do, but the face is a little squished in my opinion.
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:39 pm
Is that Phoenix Wright? It looks pretty good!
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:40 pm
wow! that's way better than I could ever do xD
Great job!
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v v starlight lunaria v v
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:42 pm
it's realy awesome to me. i think just a little bit of Alignment Practice is all ya need! biggrin try looking into different Perspective Excercises. ^_^
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:46 pm
That's cool, a lot better than i can draw when i was tring to draw people.
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:51 pm
 Asthma, Diabetes...Nice try. Personally, I think that even though it needs a teensy bit of work, it's pretty good.
The face is a tad squished, but I didn't notice that until it was mentioned.
What I noticed is how the legs connect to the body, his right leg (from my view) seems to be shaped a little oddly. Not trying to be rude, but where it connects to the crotch area, it looks a little wonky. Remember, that even though men are muscular and built with broader shoulders, they have hips too (:
His hips show it, but his one leg doesn't.
I hope you don't take this too personally, but I also draw a lot and I'm big on getting the body shapes right and only wish to help you seeing as you asked for critiquing.
Other than those little things, I find it quite good (: Keep at it. But I'm still here.
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 9:01 pm
After inspecting it further I noticed that his right armpit looks a bit off. So like when you look at the pic it's on the left. But it's his right.
I don't make sense.
And the pointing hand is a bit large, but honestly it's kind of perspected that way, so it actually looks alright.
Again compliments for drawing bodies, the perspective is pretty good.
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:32 pm
It's okay.
His hand is too big, one arm is thicker than the other.
And Even though he is a 'petite' looking guy, his legs; starting at the groin area, are too high up and to thin.. Oh and his head is a little large
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Posted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 7:01 pm
Thanks for the awesome pointers. Men are not my strong point, art wise. I'll keep trying!
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