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 Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 11:09 am
same rules as artwork when it comes to critisizing
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Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 6:24 pm
Title: Reflection
Reflection,
An invisible barrier
Protecting and isolating
Between real and fantasy
Between You and me
Identical, similarity features
Same figure,
Same color of eyes and hair and lips
Yet completely different
A shadow yet
Visible with multiple of
Bright color of the rainbow,
Not a contrast of black and white
Fragile, sharp, and thick and partly silver
Around the edges.
If dropped
The magic will spill
As the image will
Shatter
Into million of pieces
Looking down and seeing multiple images of yourself
The magic has split
Into multiple pieces
Sharing
Distributing
Allowing
Each piece to capture
And look just like yourself.
Either way
No matter the size
The image inside
Will still be
Watching
You
Mocking you
Imitating and copying
Any actions
Whether it’s happy or sad
Rain or shine
It will be there waiting
And waiting
Inside their invisible barrier
Waiting for you to appear again
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Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 3:26 pm
I love it smile heart Raining Melodies Title: Reflection Reflection, An invisible barrier Protecting and isolating Between real and fantasy Between You and me Identical, similarity features Same figure, Same color of eyes and hair and lips Yet completely different A shadow yet Visible with multiple of Bright color of the rainbow, Not a contrast of black and white Fragile, sharp, and thick and partly silver Around the edges. If dropped The magic will spill As the image will Shatter Into million of pieces Looking down and seeing multiple images of yourself The magic has split Into multiple pieces Sharing Distributing Allowing Each piece to capture And look just like yourself. Either way No matter the size The image inside Will still be Watching You Mocking you Imitating and copying Any actions Whether it’s happy or sad Rain or shine It will be there waiting And waiting Inside their invisible barrier Waiting for you to appear again
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