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Darness V

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:09 pm


.:: Traveling the Lands ::.
Darness246's OC Quests


Hello there, greetings to you all that pass by! This is my OC quest thread for Fairy Grotto, where I will place all my common OC Quests to hopefully one day have arted and certed by Omie~! It's currently under construction, but YOU MAY POST CRITIQUES!!! :'D Much luff~ heart
PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:24 pm


:: Hylian OC Quests ::



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NAME: Ehvian
GENDER: Female
AGE: 17 years old
HEIGHT: 5 feet 3 inches
WEIGHT: 105 lbs.
JOB: Hermit
QUARTERS: Lost Woods
PERSONALITY: Ehvian is a bit anti-social and shy when it comes to being around people. She is meek and soft-hearted though, caring for creatures and nature in the Lost Woods. Ehvian is not usually one to fight, fleeing from the scene if danger appears.
INFO: Ehvian was once a small, young Hylian girl who lived in the castle Town of Hyrule. She was a bit of a street rat, her family being less fortunate than most of the families in Castle Town. Ehvian and her Mother and father lived in the back alleys of the town, hidden from the eyes of the public view who frowned upon them. One day Ehvian went ahead to the marketplace and snatched a loaf of bread, thinking no one had seen her do so. Unfortunately she was wrong. The owner chased her out of the Marketplace and even out of Castle Town, hurling rocks and other items at her. Ehvian escaped out of the Town's gates and ran towards the woods, beaten and hurt, and now terribly... lost.

Darness V


Darness V

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:29 pm


: Gerudo OC Quests ::



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NAME: Carmine
GENDER: Female
AGE: 26 years old
HEIGHT: 5 feet 10 inches
WEIGHT: 140 lbs.
JOB: Treasure Hunter
QUARTERS: Gerudo Desert
PERSONALITY: [WIP]
INFO: [WIP]
PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:40 pm


:: Zora OC Quests ::



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NAME: Solari
GENDER: Female
AGE: 14 years old
HEIGHT: 4 feet 6 inches
WEIGHT: 70 lbs.
JOB: Trinkets Merchant
QUARTERS: Hyrule Castle Town
PERSONALITY: Solari is generally soft spoken and shy around many people, not being use to them even though her adopted parent was a Hylian. She's especially awkward around other Zora's, not knowing how to warm up or fit in with them. She has been watching other Zora's from afar to try and learn her heritage, but usually ends up giving herself away, and is quite clumsy in doing so. Overall, you could call her a "Moe" for her personality.
INFO: Solari was found as a Zora egg washed up on the shore of a beach, whisked away from her mother's egg clutch and her possible siblings. Lucky her, there was a young Hylian man along the shoreline who was treasure hunting, and happened to stumble upon her. Knowing it was a Zora egg, he took it as one of his greatest treasure's back to Castle Town to his home, where he placed it in his fish tank and waited with eagerness for it to hatch. Days passed by slowly...almost 2 weeks even, and the little egg had not hatched. The man held a heavy heart, thinking maybe this Zora egg had died long before he found it, or perhaps he may have killed it somehow before the little Zora tadpole could hatch free. He was quite wrong. The egg hatched as he sat there, watching, and out wriggled a little aqua and purple spotted Zora baby! Goodness, how the man danced! He even kissed the glass tank and the Zora rubbed back up against the glass affectionately in response. this was her parent, after all. she would never know the difference.

It took many moons and time for the little Zora polliwog to grow it's limbs and form, but soon enough she no longer needed to stay in water constantly and was amphibious, beign a adorable little girl Zora with bright purple eyes, violet spotted markings, and many frilly fin decorations. Her Hylian father was quite proud of her, and he would take her with him when he would treasure hunt at the beach. there Solari, as she was named, would roll about in the sand or swim in the water with much grace, finding treasures beneath the ocean her father could not ever hope to reach. It was one day during a time at the beach thatr Solari bumped into another figure in the water... a Zora, that seemed to look like her somewhat. She had never seen another of her kind, and was instantly frightened, dashing out and clinging to her dad's side. She spoke of the fish person and it was then he realized that he never told her what she was. Who she really was. That night back at home in Castle Town, the Hylian man explained as best as he could to his Zora daughter on her origins. How he found her and took her in as his own, and that even if she was a different species, he still loved her as his own. Solari was saddened to hear all this, wondering why she was separated from her kind for so long...

Now that Solari knows what she is, she is curious to learn more of her races history and customs.

Darness V


Darness V

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:43 pm


:: Garo OC Quests ::

NONE AT THE MOMENT
PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:53 pm


:: Kokiri OC Quests ::

NONE AT THE MOMENT

Darness V


Darness V

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:58 pm


:: Twili OC Quests ::



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NAME: Thellos
GENDER: Male
AGE: 24 years old
HEIGHT: 6 feet
WEIGHT: 150 lbs.
JOB: ???
QUARTERS: ???
PERSONALITY: Thellos is aloof, thinking he is of a superior being compared to those around him, even to his fellow Twilif except his brother. He sees the world in a different view and at times may seem a bit... "off his rocker" so to speak, because of the way he talks to himself or explains things. At times though he gives off a malicious sort of air that even sanity can't hope to intrude on. Thellos thinks of his peoples' banishment from the realm of Light in the past, and seems to think revenge on those who did so to them deserve punishment in the most grisly of ways. The only person Thellos seems to soften a bit for is his brother, who is the complete opposite of himself. While he is strong-willed, rude and brash, his brother is soft spoken, highly sensitive, and more over very observant in comparison. Though these 2 Twilif men are opposites, they say opposites attract and make the best of teams sometimes.
INFO: [WIP]
PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:59 pm


:: Sheikah OC Quests ::

NONE AT THE MOMENT

Darness V


Darness V

PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 12:03 am


:: Skull Kid OC Quests ::

NONE AT THE MOMENT
PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 12:06 am


:: Oni OC Quests ::

NONE AT THE MOMENT

Darness V


Darness V

PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 12:49 am


:: Esper Pet Quests ::



MAONUI


PHANTOM


KEATON
NAME: Shiroko
SPECIES: Keaton
GENDER: Female
WITCHERY: Foxfire Trot
CHARACTERISTICS: Golden arm sleeves on front legs
COLORS: White fur, 1 Orange eye, 1 Olive green eye
PACTMAKER: ---

PUICHU
NAME: Blu Chu
SPECIES: Puichu
GENDER: ???
WITCHERY: Electric Blues
CHARACTERISTICS: N/A
COLORS: Cerulean blue jelly skin, White face mask, Yellow eyes
PACTMAKER: ---

INFERNAL WOLFOS


STARCHID


BOMBCHU


LESSER ESPERS
NAME: Emotional
SPECIES: Poe
GENDER: Female
WITCHERY: Golden Emotions
CHARACTERISTICS: Golden leaf laurel around head
COLORS: Black cloak, Golden lantern, Greenish hazel eyes
PACTMAKER: Ehvian
PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 5:51 pm


I don't mean to be mean, and if you need more space I'll delete this. But I think you might be going for too many OCs at the moment. While I'm sure you could probably handle over 3 OCs, having more than 3 generally sets you up for less than awesome roleplaying. I think you might want to cut down on an OC so you can better focus on the others. I mean, I've seen some people with 7 OCs or more and usually they can't handle all of them very well and they're shoddily made.

Other then that, I do think that you've fleshed out most of your OCs with pretty interesting backstories that aren't completely "My parents died and now I'm a superhero" or something like that cliche-y types of histories. You might want to take a bit more time to detail your OC more, but that's about it.

By the way, you're chibis are so adorable! X]
Plus, let's collaborate some more for Thellos and Akim. [I was actually thinking of giving them pretty normal though still rather unique backstories instead of horribly sad or hero-y ones. Normal parents FTW!]

Kuro Ichigo Ookami

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