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Respirometric needs Critique <3

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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:20 am

I'm Freja, and I'm fourteen years old. I live in finland but do not speak finnish (rather, I speak swedish and english fluently). Never taken art classes that have taught me anything I don't already know. I drew a realistic picture and then photographed it and used iPhoto and photobucket.com to lighten it up so it wouldn't look so dark. Here's the result:

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I just moved to the other side of the planet, so I don't have a scanner yet. ^_^'
What do you say?

Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:21 pm

This thread has no replies. :<

Honestly... I don't see much wrong with it. xD I'm not one of those educated artists, of course, but if there's anything that needs changing, I'd suggest her ear - it looks a little too far to the left and a bit too high, maybe? - and her hand - looks just a teensy bit too small.

This thread is old and neglected. lol
My wannabe OCD wouldn't let me leave that "0 replies" thing alone, though.

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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:54 pm

I love this picture. I love the eyes. They draw attention to the face. And i love the detail of the hair. The only thing i would want to do different is to diffrentiate her midsection from her hair. It's all dar in that area, and kind of hard to see where her clothes begin, and her hair ends. But that's just me. I love your picture :3 Keep up the work! i'd love to see more of your artwork :3

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