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 Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 3:10 pm
Order of the Gray
The Gray Jedi are a rare group, almost completely hidden amidst the many Jedi and Sith that exist in the galaxy. They have access to both light and dark powers, but may not have the deadliest or holiest of powers. They cannot be masters of healing, nor can they use the most destructive of the Dark Side, such as Force Crush or the Force Bomb. There are two Gray Masters, and each one leans towards one side of the force over the other. They will be listed. There are only ever 2 Gray Masters, and two Apprentices. No more or less. To open up the spots, just kill them off if you can.
Gray Masters
Light Side Affinity - Reave Kuv'ver'on (Lanfaer)
Dark Side Affinity - Jonathon Malkier (AriaofRevelations)
Gray Apprentices
Brast'Isisina'Thornehet "Isis" (Skittles) - Apprentice to Reave
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:03 am
alright, well i'm sure that this will need some revisions before it passes, but here it is so that you can at least see it. "Quote About Character Here, Delete if you don't want one" Ｂ Ａ Ｓ Ｉ Ｃ ● ● ● Ｉ Ｎ Ｆ Ｏ Ｒ Ｍ Ａ Ｔ Ｉ Ｏ ＮXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX ► ► ► G a i a - N a m e: ● AriaofRevelations/Aria di Luce Redentrice C h a r a c t e r - N a m e: ● Jonathon Malkier A g e: ●38 R a c e: ● Human G e n d e r: ● Male for now. O c c u p a t i o n: ● Vagrant A l i g n m e n t: ● The Gray , with a tendency towards the dark side F a c t i o n: ● Leave blank at the current moment. H o m e - W o r l d: ● Hoth Ａ Ｐ Ｐ Ｅ Ａ Ｒ Ａ Ｎ Ｃ Ｅ ● ● ● Ｉ Ｎ Ｆ Ｏ Ｒ Ｍ Ａ Ｔ Ｉ Ｏ ＮXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX ► ► ► H e i g h t: ● 6' 2" W e i g h t: ● 120 lbs H a i r - C o l o r: ● Violet (not natural, but it grows that way now). E y e - C o l o r: ● A light gold. S p e c i a l - M a r k i n g s: ● His left ear is pierced, and he has a tattoo on his back of his wife sitting on a crescent moon C l o t h i n g: ● A cloak of some sort, and often shawls or other accessories. The cloak is often gray, purple, Or white, but never brown or black. Ｐ Ｅ Ｒ Ｓ Ｏ Ｎ Ａ Ｌ ● ● ● Ｉ Ｎ Ｆ Ｏ Ｒ Ｍ Ａ Ｔ Ｉ Ｏ ＮXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX ► ► ► P e r s o n a l i t y: ● Johnathan Malkier is a very passionate person. John is also a very possessive person. He will defend what is his to the death. John will do what he wants generally. He does not want power, or more things, but he refuses to lose what he has. He often gives over to his passion, but doesn't ever go fully to the dark side from it. He may find himself getting angry easily at strangers, though he usually can push back his anger when he's talking to a friend or loved one. He can also be playful and fun, but rarely in front of strangers. He can be vindictive at times.
C u s t o m - T e c h n i q u e s: ● These are techniques that your character has LEARNED or DEVELOPED over time. They are not the abilities that act as RACIAL TRAITS. There is a space below for that. (A custom technique could be, learning many languages quickly and knowing quite a few) Use the bullets I have provided to list them neatly, or delete the ones you don't need
● Technique #1
● Technique #2
● Technique #3
● Technique #4
R a c i a l - S k i l l s/A b i l i t i e s: ● He can do what most humans can do, and whatever the force lets him in surplus of that W e a p o n (s): ● two Hook Sword Lightsabers A c c e s s o r i e (s): ● a stealth field generator. Ｓ Ａ Ｂ Ｅ Ｒ ● ● ● Ｉ Ｎ Ｆ Ｏ Ｒ Ｍ Ａ Ｔ Ｉ Ｏ Ｎ XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX ► ► ► S a b e r - S t y l e: ● Tiger Head Hook Swords. S a b e r - F o r m:
●Custom Hook Sword form~ near mastery ~while it takes it's inherent weakness to blasters both on the structure of the weapon and the style when the blades are hooked together, the Hookswords many surfaces for catching opponents blades makes very good for blocks, counters, and disarming. By hooking the blades together their reach doubles, and they are capable of swift attacks from multiple angles at double the reach of most saber users at a cost to their defense against attacks from multiple sides. When they are not linked together he lacks the offensive prowess, but gains a lot of potential for counters, even if fighting multiple foes.
(, depending on which part of the blade is used, the highly curved nature of a hook sword would make it hard to predict where I blaster bolt will ricochet to. As such, while he is trained to block them, he will rarely use them against their owners.)
● Fast Style~ advanced~ Malkier became less frequent when training in this form when his hookswords were manufactured ten years ago…he still practices it though, to augment his ability to defend against blaster fire.
. S a b e r - C o l o r: ●White S a b e r - U p g r a d e s: ● none yet. I will inform you when this changes. Ｆ Ｏ Ｒ Ｃ Ｅ● ● ● Ｉ Ｎ Ｆ Ｏ Ｒ Ｍ Ａ Ｔ Ｉ Ｏ Ｎ XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX ► ► ► J e d i- P o w e r s:
●Battle Precognition ~neutral~
●Force Concealment ~neutral~
●Comprehend Speech~neutral~
●Force Speed~neutral~
●Force Comprehension~neutral~
●force Push~neutral~
●force pull~neutral~
●force concealment~neutral~
●force flight~neutral~
●battle meditation~neutral~
●alter reality~neutral~
●force deflection~neutral~
●affect mind~Light~
●force heal ~Light~
●drain knowledge~Dark~
●force drain~Dark~
●force stun, force stasis, and stasis field~Light~
●Force Lightning, chain lightning, and force storm~Dark~
●force scream~Dark~
●force Crush~Dark~ C u s t o m - J e d i - P o w e r s:
● John trained in such a way as to not require hand movements of any sort for his force powers. Many that use would normally use body as a conduit will use his breath.
● Force parasite~ Gray~an attack formed by enhancing life of a specific harmless bacteria that is present in the human mouth using a light side of the source, and imbuing it with a form of force drain from the dark side. A breath of air is breathed on an opponent (the distance of this attack is offen enhenced using the force to up to 20 yards though). Nothing happens immediately, except that we can say there is a 10% marker on them. every 2 posts that marker grows by 10%. Whenever someone within 50 feet says the password that was imagined when it was created gains whatever percentage of their energy was represented by that counter, and then the parasite is destroyed. For example. If the word is called twenty posts after john uses the attack (we only count posts by the effected person for this purpose), he will drain all of the opponents energy for both force powers and physical abilities resulting in the opponent being put to sleep. If it is used two posts after he will only get 20%. If someone else guesses the word, they get the energy, and the parasite is still destroyed. If you stand in front of a machine that reads the dictionary to you, you might be cured if the word were in the language of the dictionary, but the amount of force will overwhelm and destroy the machine since they don't have the ability to hold that amount of force. The parasite reacts to force powers used against it after it has manifested in the flesh of its victim, and absorbs them, thus curing this condition requires patience and a lot of word guessing. It is not a quick "use force power X" and continue fighting sort of deal. The parasite cannot take lethal amounts of energy.
● force tempest~gray~ The jedi forces two apposing properties/uses of the force(light and dark) in an area into direct opposition, causing a localized clashing of the force itself, the result is a devastating destruction that sucks everything into the middle of it. Within the blast radius there is a near constant formation of lighting, and devistating tremors. The blast superheats the air in some places, and supercools it in others, as well as causing huge wind bursts from the clashing therein. It can be blocked if a user either uses a light wall, or in some other way holds back one of the halves of the force. You can also lessen the damage using some force powers and shields. After the attack the energy is neutralized and cannot be used for light or dark specific powers for a few posts(the number depends on the amount of power put in. a wider area of effect also lasts longer). This attack uses an extreme amount of energy to pull off, and failing do it properly can be disastrous. It should not ever be used when concentration is hindered. It is a very dangerous attack, comparable to some of the more powerful light or dark only attacks. The larger the target area, the longer he must concentrate before hand. It takes him nearly 15 minutes to get 700 yards (though that 700 yards could be well out of range as long as he can see it. It takes him about 8 seconds to hit 2 yards. He can create a 1ft diameter sphere of it in 1.3 seconds, though it would only cancel light or dark powers passing through it for 15 seconds, and only things passing through that area.
● force tranquility ~gray~ the exact opposite of force tempest, the dark side and light side of the force within a certain radius of John are set ate perfect peace with one another, to the point that they fuse completely and become the same (healing and destruction at the same time will inevitably cancel out). This prevents Powers such as force lightning of stasis field from working within the bounds…it does nothing to prevent a well placed light saber strike though.
● force rebirth ~gray~ this power dissolves the targets body with darker destructive energies while simultaneously using light to regenerate the tissue differently. This allows for the target to change appearance, fingerprints, race etc. it takes a long time to use and is impossible to use on a moving target. He uses it to reuse his spies in a place after they have been discovered, or for faking his death. Certain censors that mark mental signature or dna will not be fooled in the normal version, however dna can be rewoven in a longer version that takes years to complete. There is a quicker surface only varient for disguises that don't require a change to ones inner organs (so height, weight, gender, and race must remain the same) that can be used in minutes. Variants of this power using this principal of destruction and rebuilding can be used on inanimate objects as well.
● Alignment oscillation ~gray~ to users who can sense how one has used the force in the past, or determine someone's alignment or intent, John can make himself appear on either end of the spectrum depending on the appearance he wishes to maintain.
J e d i - T r a I n I n g: ● spend from hiss 8th year of life to his 17th st year of life in the jedi academy. He spent his 18th to his 38th year training under the Gray Master Aaron Chiur in complete issolation. The former Gray master is recently deceased. ● ● ● Ｂ Ｉ Ｏ ● ● ● XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX ► ► ► Emotion should not conflict with one's inner peace. At least as far as the code is concerned. To Malkier, however, emotion was something that always came first, even before peace. He would often be found outside of the academy flirting with a young apprentice engineer named Alicia when he should have been meditating or training in some ways. He would often break the rules in order to see her, occasionally bringing her into his quarters and hiding her in various places in the academy. As a padowan he continued this habit, as she had finished her apprentice ship and was no longer rooted o their planet. He would often bringing her across the galaxy in some various guise or another. Often this was a great annoyance to the master he served under, but he continued at it. Until one day. his insistence on being with her put her in the wrong place at the wrong time. He came against an assassin who was hired to kill the man he and his master were guarding, and his skills were not good enough. Alicia was near the fight, and she saw a trap that John did not. She intercepted the blow with her body. John's master to avenged her, but the damage was done. After that he maintained her brain in a machine designed to do such, and sought out a project she had been working on before. She had created droids before she left, programmed to self replicate, and to work on a single grand project. By this point there were already hundreds of droids in this hidden sanctuary, and the project was done. A masterpiece in its own right Le Lune Cuore was complete. After seeking out this ship, Alicia instructed him on how to create an integration that would allow her full control of the ships computer. After that was finished she could program the droids at will, and she ran a long series of upgrades to the ships design while John sought out a means to an end. He would become strong enough to protect what was his. He eventually came across a monastery of sorts. Those there practiced a strange martial art using strangely shaped blades, and John was fascinated. He offered them a more ideal place of seclusion for meditation, and a pact was formed. They then retreated with them to the deepest reaches of space to train constantly for twenty years. Among those monks was a man known as Aaron Chiur, A gray master possessing a great deal of wisdom, or so it seemed at the time. The man had been seeking someone to pass his knowledge on to because he knew he was going to die soon. John just happened to be in the right place at the right time or maybe he had some other business that he wanted to run away from for ten years, though they say with the force there are no coincidences...either way they traveled together in the more secluded areas of space for twenty whole years. He died of old age at the end of this time, however, at 230 years of age...much extended through the force. this is what sparked john's return. He is back now, though no one knows it, or has any reason to care…yet.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:28 am
Hm...You are right in believing this is difficult for me. Grays are by far the strongest force users in the Galaxy, able to use both sides without limit and able to use both in tandem. Your character blends the two better than Reave does right now, who balances himself through his personality rather than the Force. The powers are a lot to consider, as they are powerful and yet fit well. So, before I decide if its accepted, I need you to clarify a few points for me.
1. Is your wife dead or alive?
2. Your bio suggests a sanctuary. Please explain more about that to me, because if I accept the character I'm guessing I'm accepting that as well.
3. Force Tranquility: This makes it where all force powers do not work unless they are gray/neutral, yes?
4. Force Parasite is kinda powerful. What I need to know is if the breath is visible, because you're saying you can breath on someone 300 ft away without a way to block the parasite from infecting you. There needs to be some sort of weakness to this attack, otherwise all you'd need to do is breathe in someone's general direction and then avoid his attacks until he passes out.
5. I'm stealing your definition for Force Tempest, cause that's what Reave has xd
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:17 pm
1) by shear technicality her consciousness is alive. She is the ship. Only her brain and mind remains though. she still retains some feelings too, but she has no body, and would die if she was disconnected from the ships computer.
2) the sanctuary was the ship itself in an uncharted area of space somewhere. The ship stealths, and can produce it's own food. It's also a fairly large ship, and has everything necessary for his training.
3) it makes it so that only neutral works, so no gray either, since that requires both dark and light powers to work. since a gray has 3 types being cut instead of the one, it actually lessens his advantage, except that my character is good close range.
4) The breath can be blocked by a force shield, or any other barrier and it can be seen like little glowing particles coming from his mouth. It moves slowly enough that unless it's used close range, or against an opponent who is unaware of you, it is ineffective, and actually i would like to cut that down to 30 feet or less, because of my own notes...there was an extra 0 in the bio. If necessary i can double the number of posts necessary to go up each mark...though being able to dodge that well without at least acknowledging danger seems cheap on its own...i had actually assumed it would only ever reach 100 if the guy left or was ignored for a few weeks. other than that it seemed impractical to let it sit that long when killing it at 40 would be more effective, but you do raise a valid point.
5) lol. thief XP. that's fine.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:57 pm
Decrease distance to 20 yards, and you're fine. I'll allow 60 ft, since natural air would destabilize the particles quickly. If you use the right powers in tandem, you could extend it naturally anyway. Increase how long it takes to effect them. I'm sure you can make it fair. Non force users have a tendency to be effected anyway, so I won't mid if its quick.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 10:27 pm
alright, i doubled the time in between marks.
i forgot to say, that if you prevent him from speaking, he cannot say the activation word, though it would still grow until he could...though that much could have been inferred.
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