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PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:01 pm


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Arkady
Nicknames: He answers quite happily to Ark
Gender: Male
Age: 17

Faction/Race Demon - Grigori

Personality:
Arkady doesn't hold with all that eviler-than-thou rubbish. As any skeleton worth their salt knows, a smile can be so much more terrifying than a scowl. A good grin shows teeth. And Arkady in particular favors the kind of smile that is just a little bit knowing, just a little too sharp... The best way to confuse your enemies is to look like you are having more fun than them, all the time.

The original Grigori were angels who fell due to the sin of lust. Arkady, in keeping with that fine tradition of his distant ancestors, tends to flirt. Regularly. With both sexes. Blatantly, badly, and always half in jest. He will deliver the worst pickup lines in the world with a straight face, just to see how people respond. He doesn't actually expect to get anywhere with it - much like the proverbial dog chasing cars, he wouldn't really know what to do if he actually caught one. It's more just his idea of a really strange private joke. Nonetheless, he is completely convinced that he is popular with the ladies, despite any and all evidence to the contrary. One can only assume that he is delusional.

Arkady literally laughs in the face of danger. Expect him to go for a battle pass as soon as he's allowed to, and then show a blithe disregard for his personal safety from then on. One could be forgiven for assuming he's got some kind of self-destructive streak going on; in some respects, this is true, as Arkady does in many ways try to embody the live fast and leave a good-lookin' corpse mindset. But it's more that he rarely considers the consequences of his actions, and never learns from a mistake until he's already made it. Act faster than you think, that's his philosophy. He's got wings, so no need to look before he leaps!

Easily bored and constantly restless, Arkady moves from one interesting thing to the next. Unfortunately, this means he ends up in trouble a lot of the time. Minor punishments bounce off him like a Superball off a concrete sidewalk, and he usually has the sense to keep his mouth shut and his head down before he gets in the deep s**t. But any kind of confinement or constraint on his behavior – such as, say, detention – is one of the few things that can foul his otherwise invariably upbeat demeanor. Arkady needs stimulation to keep up that cheerful act (get your mind outta the gutter, I'm talking mental stimulation) and nothing wears him down faster than being stuck in a room and forced to do something mindless and dull. And when he turns moody, things get ugly.

Because, you see, other people’s feelings are largely unimportant to Arkady. He conceals that fact, because he's not stupid. Arkady knows that if he's going to get through his school years with any semblance of dignity, people have to like him. But there is a world of difference between liking other people and trying to make them like you. It's pretty much just a huge game to him. A very complicated game that requires a great deal of strategy, yes. Still, if he loses a friend over a careless move, or if someone sees through his constant playing, it’s no more to him than losing a pawn off the chessboard. Not that chess is a particularly apt metaphor. Arkady lacks the patience for that kind of manipulation. He rarely plots more than a step ahead, instead relying on quick wits and his natural demonic charisma to fast-talk his way through life. On the flip side, if Arkady decides you are more of a nuisance than you are worth, he’ll dump you faster than the former prom queen dumps her baby in a back alley.

On the rare occasion that he does grow genuinely attached to someone, it tends to skip straight over the normal "friends" stage and straight into creepily possessive territory. It won’t be obvious. Like any good Grigori, he will keep an eye on you. Who you are with. Who hurt your feelings. Who you might like better than you like Arkady. Then someday you’ll notice that weird habit he has of conveniently showing up places that you are at, and you’ll start to wonder… Messing with one of the people whom Arkady feels this genuine affection for, that's one of the few things that can seriously, seriously upset him. Like, drop-all-pretenses-and-go-for-the-throat upset. All in all, you are probably better off with him thinking of you as not quite a person. Which is a sad statement in and of itself.

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Natural ability: Grigori - Watchful Eye
Grigori were also known as the Watchers, before they Fell and became demons, and their job was to observe humanity. Even now, Arkady can make use of that gift. By quickly sketching his Emblem, a stylized eye, on an object and concentrating, he can leave a faintly glowing golden imprint of that Emblem on the item. At any point up to a day after that, he can concentrate again to look through that eye as if it were one of his own - though he has to have his real eyes closed when he does it, or he'll just get a splitting migraine headache from trying to see two places at once. After a day has passed, the sigil fades. He could theoretically also place his mark upon a person, but they would have to be willing or he would have to be really slick, because it's pretty damn obvious that you're drawing on someone's arm.

FEAR:
Arkady's FEAR is based on illusion. He lashes out or lunges at his opponent, rattlesnake-fast, and suddenly a grave injury appears somewhere on their body. This is not accompanied by any sensation of pain, only a curious numbness, as if the victim were going into shock. In all other respects it's realistic - the smell of blood, the sensation of warm dampness spreading around the wound, perhaps even a wave of dizziness or seeing stars. It is a gaping gory hole in you, after all. This injury is completely illusionary, and at this point it only lasts for a very short time - maybe 30 seconds.

Weaknesses - Several. For one, this is one HELL of a bluff, and it tends to only work on any given individual once. After that, it's all just psychological warfare, because they'll know it's fake. It's also of limited use on undead; if Arkady can think of a reasonable equivalent to a mortal wound (I.E. a ghost beginning to dissipate against their will, a vampire with a wooden stake through their heart) then it might work, but if he can't imagine a way to kill you, the FEAR won't take effect. Likewise, if he gets his details wrong due to lack of knowledge of his opponent (I.E. blood from someone who doesn't bleed) then the illusion will obviously break.

Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Gold
Hair Colour/Style: Jet black, with a just slightly bluish sheen. He keeps it in a messy, short ponytail (about to the top of his shoulders)
Skin Colour: Slightly tanned
Clothing Style/Colours: Rough avi? Take as many liberties as needed, obv.
Extra: He should be tall and lanky, but not stick thin. Smallish wings in blue and gold. A tufted tail, somewhat like Haku from Spirited Away or other dragon-ish thing, in that same blue/gold scheme.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 9:01 pm


doop doop, reservin' this post. Am puzzling about his FEAR.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:16 pm


I really like Ark's personality, as you might know by now. It sounds really consistent with his species, and all the little details line up: I'm especially fond of his "a good grin shows teeth" philosophy and can see it reflected in most of his manner.

I was a little thrown by his self-disregard, because it seems so uncharacteristic when compared to the rest of his traits. Why does he feel this recklessness? Is it a tribute to some aspect of the Grigori, or for some reason that has to do with the character?

Another thing I noticed were his special abilities and FEAR. I really, really love his natural ability. It's such a creative use of the watchfulness Grigori are known for. I like his FEAR as well, although it made me wonder more about the character. He seems to know what he wants and how he intends to get it - why, then, is his FEAR false? Does the bluff say something about Arkady? Or I could be reading too much into it, in which case you can feel free to ignore me. "orz
PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 7:36 pm


Thanks so much for the crit, and sorry it took me a bit to respond - I got kind of wrapped up in the Mafia event. XDD

H'OKAY, so I tried to edit the part about him leaping into the fray to make it clearer. It's... hard to describe. XD On the one hand, he does have a little bit of that self-destructive streak. He takes risks because he's sure that he can handle them, and then regrets it only after the fact. But I guess the issue with the battling and the issue with the FEAR are somewhat connected.

At least the way I've always seen it, Grigori are kind of... twisted by nature? Arkady included - he's got this disregard for others that he tries to hide. But in a duel with another student, he doesn't have to fake the way he feels about his opponent. He can just happily leap into the fray, and then at the end it's back to good battle, see you in class tomorrow. It's a socially acceptable way for him to let out a little of his darker side, and so he relishes it as a sort of stress release. And that's the way I envisioned his FEAR as well - he wouldn't actually hurt someone that badly, he's not a berserker, but it's allowing him to unleash some of that tension in a more controlled way.

also I just love the idea of Ark being DERP enough to pick a fear that only works once on a given person, it's just the kind of thing he would do. and then later go "...I WISH I HADN'T DONE THAT."

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:11 pm


Your character has an interesting personality, I like it. Especially his smile like you mean it, or say, you don't know what I'm really thinking trait. He reminds me of a friend and your ways of thinking are right on track with each other however, the FEAR ability kind of confused me a little.

Maybe you should focus on cleaning it up a little to bold out the main points. It is a good idea and it definitely fits the demon.

Which by the way, I love that you came up with a fallen angel, I love them and that's why you get a lot of credit for the amount of work you have put in to his form.

One thing I wanted to know as well, was other than detention. What gets him down? What gets him seriously wound up? Where is his kick in the teeth?
PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 3:23 pm


Fixed some stuff up/expanded in the personality! Thanks so much for the crit <3

Yeah, maybe I made the FEAR a little too fancy-worded. Deleted some of the excess froof to make it more straightforward.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:21 pm



Hmm
The only problem I can see is his fear.
Is the wound permanent, and does it really cause any harm to them?
Will it work in battle, especially when the aim is to truly hurt the victim?

Otherwise I like him <:
PostPosted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:32 pm


Nope - the wound only lasts a short time, and it's completely illusionary.

If he ACTUALLY needs to hurt someone, he'll have to resort to other methods - like just plain old punching their lights out. XD

And hee, thank you!

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:34 pm


TRUTHFULLY When I first read what sort of critter he was, A fallen Angel, I was expecting some sort of huge garystufest. I was delighted to become more and more intrigued the more I read! I really dig this guy immediately, and I love that you not only considered the "snarky" sort of attitude fitting of his demon-type but also all the repercussions and psychological effects of looking at the world the way he does, and dangers of being his acquaintance. If you want to expand anywhere I guess it would be elaborate his psychology a bit more, but I suppose that's only because it fascinates me, it was pretty clear to me as is. X) What you have so far really excites me to see him in action! Best of luck questing, man!
PostPosted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 1:11 pm


<3 Haha, thank you! Yeah, I was a little bit hesitant about posting Arkady here at first - he's one of my oldest OCs, and I'm quite attached to him. I'm aware that he can come off as Stu-ish with his attitude, which is why I tried to emphasize that it doesn't always work out well for him.

I'm still working on that personality section, toying with it a bit to clarify and expand.

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