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Ziekara
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:23 pm


Dream as if you'll live forever...


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...live as if you'll die today
PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 2:42 am


This pickled vegetable...

This is a character for an RP my friend and I are trying to make (not a guild RP). I have RPed perhaps a grand total of three times in my life and each time I was crap. So, I just thought I'd drop this little character sheet off here and see what you guys though of him. Its still a work in progress, so concrit is more than welcome and remember, I'm a terrible noob at this.

... could kick your a** !!


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Username: Renkon Root

Character Name: Renard or just "Ren"

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Tribe: Shifter Tribe, Renard can change his shape to resemble a gargoyle like creature. He has leathery membranous wings that allow him to glide (not fly, just glide), a long whip-like tail and just an all around larger and stronger body when in his shifted form.

Personality: Renard tries to be the calm, stoic member of the group... and fails miserably at it. He is easily annoyed and has the bad habit of acting first and asking questions later.

Bio: ( This depends on the premise/plot of the RP which has not yet been decided. )

Weapons: N/A, Renard carries no weapons.

Description: In his human form he is about 5"9 with broad shoulders and a slender but muscular frame. He has olive skin that burns easily in the sun, dark eyes (of a non-descript color) set into an angular face with sharp features and his head is crowned with blond hair (almost the same color as sun-dried wheat). He also wears a single string of beads in his hair for seemingly no reason other than he thinks its "cool", but in reality it just looks utterly ridiculous.
In his shifter from he resembles a gargoyle (of the Disney variety). His olive skin turns a darker steely-gray, however his hair and eyes remain the same color. His height raises from 5"9 to 6"3 and he sprouts large membranous wings on his back and a long whip-like tail.
Due to the size differential between his base form (human form) and his shifted form (gargoyle form) he tends to wear stretchy clothing.


Anything Else?: Renard is greatly annoyed by bawdy comments about how he changes "size", "grows", "gets bigger", etr. He's heard them all before and he is not amused.

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