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Aukai Oceansoul

Springtime Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:47 pm


Name: Kaliska

Nickname(s): Iska

Sex/gender: Female

Age: 17

Height: 5' 1

Weight:102 lbs

Rank/Status:Candidate
Sexuality: hetrosexual

Physical Appearance: Kaliska is a tiny women with short everything. Except for her hair which is an elegant deep brown color, and shining with health. Kaliska has dark green/grey eyes which fool people as to which color they really are in different lighting. She has small feet and narrow body. Her face has high cheek bones and thin lips. She rarely smiles unless she is with really good company (dragons mostly) so her grin is somewhat of a mystery.

Likes: Laughing (secretly), flowers, DRAGONS!, bright color and swimming, fishing and almost anything else to do with water.

Dislikes: Humidity, too much company, vegetables, Klah, wimps wherries, Example (OMG a bug! faint...)

Strengths: Intelligent, honest, fair and a problem solver, can swim and is not afraid of heights, public speaking a leader.(only within weyr)

Weaknesses: Crowds of none weyrfolk, wherries(of all things)she is afraid of them, ignoring people when she is busy.
She often blocks the doorway to her private rooms with clutter so she will know when someone is coming

Personality: Kaliska loves the weyr and dragons and finds people interesting. Particularly if they have really good information. She likes weyrfolk because their conversation doesn't often stray to far away from dragons. She dislikes to get up early and if disturbed rudely may wake in bad temper. At any other time of the day she is mostly happy and will help with chores outside. She also knows herbs and a little first aid. She likes to recopy scrolls as well and is getting rather proficient at it. When it comes to animals. Dragons are awesome!, Firelizards rock!, whers are cool, runners are fascinating, herdbeasts are mildly interesting, and wherries are scary. Kaliska enjoys public speaking but doesn't take criticism too well but eventually gets over it. She loves nature walks in the outdoors and can often be found helping riders oil their dragons. When people first meet Kaliska they immediately get a feeling of warmth with her bubbly personality. Being raised by a healer Kaliska is not afraid to take a leadership role and often acted as a moderator in stressful situations. Kaliska wants most to be a responsible respected figure in her society, she is determined to a point of fault, and is often up late at night thinking over things. Her ambition sometimes dumps her in hot water. And leaves people frustrated with her. She gets so single minded she will block almost everything else out until she is reminded again that she cannot control everything. She is also a bit of a grudge holder, not in a serious way but in a you scratch my back and ill scratch yours kinda mentality. She also gets along best with men, women are too dramatic in her opinion and if at all possible she will avoid them thus she had very few women friends and tends to bottle up emotions just like men. So that eventually the emotions spill over bringing tears or anger upon which ever unsuspecting person incurred her wrath. Most of the time she is calm and responsible. Unless there are wherries a fear she is hoping to eventually get over. Kaliska also has a strong personality and can be gruff or even coarse. With a degree of pomposness.She also has a jealous streak This is especially evident when she is tired.
Other: Kaliska sticks her tongue out when she is concentrating hard, its hilarious and she cant consciously control it for long. She likes to lightly tug her hair when she is reading and is constantly flicking it out of her eyes when doing anything where there is wind to this end haircuts are frequent. She likes picking at hangnails, scabs and blemishes. which being a healer she knows she shouldn't but cant really stop.
Kaliska surprisingly given some of her people skills has an awesome memory and can easily recall peoples names. She can hold her breath under water for over a minute and she likes to catch fish.

History:
Kaliska was weyrbred. Her parents were simply too young to care for her and she was given away at birth, And raised by the weyr healer. The healer taught her small things of healing basically first aid. Kaliska has no siblings that she knows of. The healer made sure she had good morals, Kaliska is not a theif unless you count small tidbits from the kitchen. She shares well with other people. and always tries to help people who are hurt weather emotionally or physically. Experience taught her not to be afraid of blood or stressfull situations as the healer guided her with his steadfast calm. Since Kaliska was raised by a man she often gets along better with boys. Kaliska has learned the hard way in her upbringing that it is life and love over all else. She waited impatiently until she was of a get to impress but sadly it has been a few years. After a while she took a break from hatchings to gather her emotions and has finally decided to try once again.

The wherry story :0
Kaliska had snuck into the wherry pen to get a closer look at feeding dragons and was swarmed by the captive wherries. This thankfully only left her with a healthy fear of wherries and a few large scraps and scratches thanks to the quick blue rider who pulled her out before any lasting damage could be inflicted. This is why Kaliska is afraid of wherries the accident happened when she was young but has stayed with her.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 7:08 pm


Hello and welcome to DRoP! Just got a few little things to fix on your profile and you're good to go.

APPEARANCE:
- Unfortunately, I'm going to have to limit the eye colour to only two colours. They can be blue-green, green-grey, or blue-grey but they can't be all three of the choices.


PERSONALITY:
The bulk of your personality appears to be facts about Kaliska. She can hold her breath for a minute, she sticks her tongue out when concentrating, she fiddles with her hair, and things like that are really just things she does rather than who she is. What we look for in personalities, especially for candidates, is what kind of person the candidate is, how they interact with others, and what kinds of leadership skills do they possess. All the rest of the information is just stuff to be used in RP post, but it's really not integral to her character.

What I'd like for you to do is rewrite her personality based on who she is rather than the things she does. If is helps, here are some basic questions to answer about her:

- First impressions of the character. What's she like to people she meets for the first time?
- Is she sociable or a little bit shy?
- When in a group of people, does she take the leader or follow someone else's lead?
- What traits does she possess that would make people think negatively of her? For example, does she get easily jealous? Is she selfish? Power-hungry?
- What does she want the most in life? What her aspirations? Her dreams?
- How have her parents or guardians shaped her life or made her into the person she is today? Did they teach her anything special? Values? Morals? A code of honour?

All the extra facts about her are great, but they just don't fit in the personality section. Once you've got the personality down to who she is we can work on any further kinks.

HISTORY
- To be classified as an official Healer's apprentice she would have had to have gone to the Healer Hall for training, which is unfortunately not reflected in her history. She's welcome to have some experience in healing basic stuff like cuts and bruises due to her parentage, but she can't be an apprentice without formal training.

- Can you maybe expand her history a little bit? Tell me more about her family. What was her relationship with her parents? Did she know them or was she fostered out as a child? Does she have any siblings? Did she get into any trouble as a child? Things that can help show how her past has shaped her personality would be great. <3

- Why is she scared of wherries? Did something happen to her as a child?

Chibi Sheepcat
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Chibi Sheepcat
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:05 am


Sorry about the delay. School has been keeping me very busy. XD

“She also like to practice healing in her spare time.” <- Since she is not an official healer’s apprentice, it’s unlikely that she would be able to do this. On Pern, people tend to leave the healing to the healers. It’s fine for her to have some basically knowledge of the craft (different herbs, numbweed, how to deal with minor injuries) but she wouldn’t be allowed to “practice healing” as it were in her spare time.

You’ve also only listed one flaw in your personality (single-mindedness). You’ve got two others in there but you’ve canceled both of them out by adding positives on the end. For example, “Kaliska… doesn’t take criticism too well but eventually gets over it.” By adding the but you essentially make it so that the flaw no longer counts. I need you to add one more flaw in there.

There’s a bit of a conflict between Kaliska’s “people tire/bore me” trait and her determination to be a respected figure in society. If she didn’t care about people enough to talk to them, how can she care about their opinions of her and want to look good in their eyes?

The history is good save for the wherry incident. Both of the Weyrs are northern Weyrs, which means that the chances of being allowed outside of them without an escort are extremely slim. Not only could the weather turn bad at any moment, but there are dangerous creatures out there and letting a twelve year old out into the wilderness alone would be just plain stupid on her foster father’s part. The fear doesn’t have to be from something dramatic; it can be as simple as she got into the wherry pens as a child and was swarmed by them. There are “tame” wherries that live in the Weyr for feeding purposes, so it’s much more likely she encountered one of them and that scared her.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 11:10 am


Can you just highlight for me what you count as her second flaw? I'm still only seeing the one.

You should also be careful about making statements like "everyone usually gives her a wide birth at these times" since you don't know for certain how people will react to her. Try to keep her personality focused on how she reacts to situations/behaves rather than how other people should behave towards her.

Chibi Sheepcat
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Aukai Oceansoul

Springtime Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 7:32 pm


How is that?
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