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Shard Hozuki

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 3:07 pm


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Username:Shard Hozuki
Character Name: Shard Hozuki
Age:19
Gender:Female
Race:Shinigami


Height: 65 in
Weight: 124 lbs
Eye Color: Reddish Brown
Hair Color: Light Brown
Hair Style: Kept short, barely reaching her shoulders, with bangs across her left eye.
Markings/Tattoos: Her back has one long jagged scar on the left side.


Personality: Inwardly, Shard is constantly in a shifting state. Her emotions are never really stagnant. As far as the world can see, she'll shift between reclusive and slightly happy, no further than that. She is quick to trust, which many think to be a fault of hers. Shard personally considers it one of her greatest assets.
History: Before losing her life, Shard was known as Sarah, a name she threw away as soon as she could. She was an average girl, growing up with no extraordinary circumstances. Sarah went to a normal school where nothing strange really happened, got average grades, and never really left her hometown. In time, she began to grow weary of the normalcy of her life, craving some excitement to break her free from the monotony that it had become. Upon realizing this, she packed her things and left home, vowing not to come back until she had satisfied her desires. She wandered away for nearly a full week before finding what she thought would be her haven. Arriving in a large city, she had found her new home. She did anything she could to break free from her past, constantly looking for a new fix. Day after day, her new life began to take her closer and closer to a breaking point that she wasn't prepared for. When this day finally came, she barely even realized as she was taken to a new haven, Soul Society. Now, having arrived at the end of her life, and the start of her death, she has vowed once more to make a change. She has decided never again take things to the extreme she had before, choosing to strive to be the best at her own level before moving to the next.

Likes: Quiet spaces, Food, Old Friends, Art, Bustling Areas.
Dislikes: Routines, Messy people, Needless Violence.
Other: (None at the moment)

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Division: 13
Rank:Unseated


Zanpaku-tô Name: Sakibou
Description and/or Appearance: Before being released it looks like a standard zanpakuto, though the blade is on the opposite side.
Zanpaku-tô Spirit: A large Black Tiger with white stripes.



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Shikai: Sakibou Kodora
Shikai Release Incantation: Howl, Sakibou!

Shikai Description: The blade shortens and divides into three, forming over Shard's right hand and forearm. It resembles a tiger's claws, though elongated.

Shikai Ability: When released, Shard's agility increases greatly, allowing her to nearly match that of a shunpo with her standard steps.

Her senses also grow exponentially when Sakibou is released, giving her an advantage when fighting from afar.






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Bankai:Sakibou Mouko

Bankai Name: Oodora

Bankai Appearance: Shard's bankai form is similar to her shikai, though the blade expands itself more. It stretches across her back, and down her other arm and legs. This form forces Shard to take on a bestial style of movement, keeping on all fours limbs.

Bankai Description: In addition to the sensory amplification of her shikai, any wound caused by her claws will become unable to be fully healed.


PostPosted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 3:51 pm


change the bleeding thing for your bankai...... it is god moding

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 8:55 pm


It's a bankai, it's supposed to be a bit strong...and it's not like it makes the wound gush blood, it's just harder to heal fully. It doesn't say it can't be healed at all, just not back to 100%.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:09 pm


Shard Hozuki

Bankai Description: In addition to the sensory amplification of her shikai, Shard's bankai also causes anyone cut by her blade to bleed constantly. Any wound caused by her claws will become unable to be fully healed.




The piece I bolded is what is god modding about this ability. So either change it or you will not be accepted.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:20 pm


I agree completely.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:21 pm


Done. No need to act all pissy about it...really...I have no desire to godmode at all.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:31 am


I'm glad that your not going to godmod! Its just that often people with zanpakutos that cause extensive bleeding godmod. You may not even use that ability, but its better to remove that skill so that no one can say that your godmodding. Otherwise I love your profile (though my opinion dosn't really matter xD)
PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:59 am


Heh, I appreciate it. Yeah, I already changed the part they were talking about. The constant bleeding isn't part of it anymore, but I'd like to keep that the wound can't be healed back to 100%.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:35 am


I hate people that are unoriginal and use wings and tails and such...also fire...I can use them because I actually use them right and for a defensive standpoint, I am the only (Person I've seen at least) Who can take something unoriginal and make it original ^^ Maybe you could do that as well ^^
PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 10:06 am


Do you see zanpakutos turning into what's essentially a claw often? o.O Or is it the lack of healing? I've been out of the BleachRP scene for quite a while, so I'm not sure what the most common abilities are at this point.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 10:12 am


Elementals (wind, water, fire, but not really earth) are quite common. I use them too, but I try to make my side powers new. Tails, claws, wings, daggers, and massive swords are quite common now too. Healing is adverage. Some people have it some don't.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 10:48 am


Many thanks for the info.

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