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Enoh Love
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 9:18 am


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Amrita
(Meaning 'Immortal' - from Sanskrit 'a' = not, 'mrita' = dead)
Nicknames: Rita
Gender: Female
Age: 8-10 in appearance

Faction/Race Undead - Vetala
--- Note: Vetala have several names, such as 'Vetal' or 'Baital', but they are essentially Ghouls or Vampires (depending on the translation) who can and often do possess and reanimate a corpse.

Personality
Amrita is a very simple Vetala, Dedicated to learning and poisoned with tunnel vision to focus on her studies to the best of her abilities. She takes pride in what she does manage to accomplish, making her generally barely passing grades feel like a medal of honor. Look down on the overly decaying Zombies all you want, push her over in the hallways, she won't care so long as nothing falls off of her; chances are equally good she just fell on her own anyway. It's happened before, it will happen again.

Despite her actual self being a more socially acceptable member of the Undead, she has taken over the 'Zombie' frame of mind as she is currently locked in a Zombie-like body. Due to the fact that she was never a Zombie originally, she does not understand that this current body of hers is one of the end-of-the-food-chain ones. Heck, she is still incredibly proud of herself for even possessing this body to begin with! Besides, she is merely borrowing this rotting body until she has the strength to possess and reanimate a new one. A better one. With more skin, and less smell. Up until this body she could only possess skeletons with a minor amount of muscle or flesh remaining, having a body that can be identified as mostly humanoid is a great accomplishment for her. They should be proud of her for that! She is certainly proud of herself for it.

She tries very hard; studies take up most of her time, leaving very little in between for social interactions. This is truly because she is limited to the bodies of the deceased that she is possessing, and as such her mental capacity is rather slow; she has no choice but to focus very hard in order to get where she wants to be...even if it is a slow, grueling process. Her inner Ghoul shows through here; she wants to succeed, she knows she can do it, it's just the getting there that is the hard part.

When she does go out and socialize, she will still attempt to make friends with any other Zombie as she does not yet understand the social hierarchy of 'her own' kind; that the less rot there is, the better. That being said, she understands the hierarchy for the other species, and won't go near the Mummies, Patchworks or Vampires unless she has no other choice or unless they go up to her first. This is mainly because she is terribly embarrassed over being a Ghoul stuck in a corpse, and adopted the mentality of 'Who would believe me, if they knew the truth?'.

If they do end up talking to her, well...then she just gets a big head because hey, the cool kids are talking to her! It would be enough to make her happy for hours.

Physically, Amrita is small and rather clumsy, especially when walking. How could you not be, with your feet pointed backwards? More often than not, she looks like she is constantly moonwalking - shuffling feet is pretty much the only way she can get around. Not only that, but her hands are also backwards, meaning at a 'resting' pose, her palms point outward from the body.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?
Right now, Amrita can only easily possess and reanimate the corpse of very decayed children, and wishes to build up her own strength and power to be of use to her brethren, and to be less of a shame to the name 'Vetala'. This thought really only came to her when she possessed the corpse of a young only-mostly decayed girl as a test...and managed to get herself locked in. Oops. Well, that was embarrassing.

Each year, she will hopefully have learned enough to be able to get herself a new body, and to detach herself from the previous year's body to inhabit the new one. Each new body should be in better standings when it comes to decay, and each year her mental capacity will get larger as the bodies become less rotting. She will more than likely go for the same 'type' of body - girls with similar hair and eye colours at the point of their death...but no matter how fresh the body, the hands and feet will always point backwards; it's the trademark of a Vetala-possessed corpse. And, every year, without fail, she will get trapped in the body. This will happen until and if she ever graduates.

FEAR:
  • About the Vetala: The Vetala are said to have an uncanny knowledge of the past, present and future, along with deep insight into human nature. That being said, they are also known to kill children, cause miscarriages, and drive people mad. But there is one set of Vetala stories in particular (25, actually), called the Baital Pachisi, that focuses on a Vetala that a King is trying to capture. The only way to successfully capture this Vetala is to not speak a word, but every time the King gets his hands on the Vetala, it tells him a story that ends in a thought provoking question, along with a threat that promises bad things should he know an answer but not speak it. Each time, the King answers the question, and each time the Vetala disappears, leaving the King to try again another day.
  • Natural:
    -----> You Make Me Sick!: A play to the 'Killing Children' aspect, Amrita can currently only make someone feel ill. A passing wave of nausea that may or may not be spawned by the rotting flesh of her current body.
  • FEAR:
    -----> Answer me, Please: Amrita's FEAR is a FEAR that is more for support than anything. If attacked, she will do her best to make her attacker answer a question. Right now it won't be anything more thought provoking than 'What now?', but it will more than likely be along the lines of 'What's that?'. If answered, Amrita will be able to give them the slip. Probably. Her FEAR puts her body into overdrive, and if her question is answered, she will more than likely be able to avoid the attack, at least a bit of it, anyway.


Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Gray, hazed over as with any corpse.

Hair Colour/Style: Long, Black, unkept with dried or withered flowers stuck in its knots.

Skin Colour: Grays, Greens, Browns Blacks - rotting heavily, and skeletal in some places.

Clothing Style/Colours: Only a Hindu Sari - The pattern on it is up to the artist, however the primary colour should be either red or yellow as young and unmarried girls are buried in either of those colours. The Sari is worn as a wrap, as I imagine skirts and dresses don't stay up well when your hips are rotting.

Extra: Her hands and Feet are pointed backwards. There is a high level of decay on the body, but how that looks is up to the artist...but there should be the same withered, dead or dry flowers stuck to her rotting skin from the funeral rites.

References: N/A
PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 6:24 am


Fixed some typos! Also looking for some crits. =D Thanks!

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 6:32 am


Looks interesting! But I think we are only allowed one general FEAR to start out with. Because first years can only use them once per battle. Also with their classes they can expand their use of FEAR.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:10 am


Oops, that's right! I played with them. =) Fixed.

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Enoh Love
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:26 pm


Tweaked her personality and FEAR a little bit more~
PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:13 am


Crit~

So first of all, I wanted to know: Does Vetala view herself as a demon, or an undead? You describe her often as a demon, and say that she "doesn't understand" that she's at the end of the food chain. Yet, you specifically mention that she won't go near the undead of higher social levels, and don't even mention about whether she'll consort with other creature types, such as proper demons. It actually sounds like she would be a spirit, but I can see why you would classify her as undead - I'm just want to see the attitude pinned down.

I'm also curious if you have links to any sites with information on the Velata. I was trying to do some research in order to get more information and context, but I couldn't find anything!

Regarding her FEAR - I can see why the idea would seem attractive, but I think it would be very difficult to carry out in RP. Once you start getting into divulging another character's information, things get tricky - it can either be really awesome, when you have someone that thinks they can forward a plot in some manner, or really uncomfortable, if someone doesn't want to be handing that information out. Unless you mean to say that this ability just makes her hyper-aware as opposed to drawing on information from some magical source, this is going to be a really challenging FEAR to pull off at all, let alone well - especially if you're planning a strict upgrade path of advancement, where this is the only ability she'll ever have and she'll just get better and better at it. That's just my feeling on it, though!

I hope my crit was able to help somewhat. ^^ Good luck!

Arrien


Enoh Love
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 05, 2010 2:07 am


Thanks for the crit! =D

The trouble with the Vetala is that in my research I've had them described as Ghouls, Vampires, Demons and General Spirits, but the general consensus is that the are Ghouls or Vampires that can and often do possess and reanimate a corpse. I'm afraid I must have used Demon without thinking. D:

I imagined that once she took over a corpse (and subsequently got herself stuck), she took over the Zombie Undead frame of mind. As a socially acceptable Ghoul or Vampire she comes up extremely lacking, and I think that for her is enough to keep her away from the higher undead types, out of embarrassment as well as in light of the undead body she is locked in. I wonder how many people would honestly believe her if she said she was actually a sort of Ghoul or Spirit, and not a rotting Zombie?

Vetala actually have a few names, one being 'Baital', and here are a few interesting links:

Baital Pachisi - 'Twenty Five Tales of Baital' or 'Vikram and the Vampire'. This is a general summary. Basically, a Sorcerer wants the King to Capture a Vetala to use it as a weapon and a source of power. Every time the King gets his hands on the corpse the Vetala is possessing, it starts to tell a story and ends it with a thought provoking question, and a threat that if the King knows the answer but doesn't speak it, his head will explode (which was probably not true). When the King answers the Vetala disappears and he must try another day.
Vikram and the Vetal - These are rough english translations of the 25 tales~
Vetala - From Academic Dictionaries and encyclopedias
Vetala - From Monsterpedia

You're right, her FEAR could be pretty hard to pull off without a bias. Perhaps I should focus more on the sort of Myth from the Baital Pachisi, where she could escape so long as her opponent talks to or answers her? That would probably work out much easier.

I hope that answers your questions! I will definitely have to ponder her fear a little more, though.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 1:56 am


Changed the FEAR, Updated the personality a bit, based on the crit from Arrien!

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Zoobey
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 9:40 pm


I got this one!
PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 11:28 pm


Arel was in a downright foul mood this morning. It didn't help that he had the worst hangover known to the history of ice demons in Amityville (which was, considering most of the school population was students, really just limited to him), and it only aggravated the problem that someone or a few someones had purposely turned up the thermoskull. He was pretty sure that drip-dripping sound was the tip of one of his antlers melting for crying out loud.

A certain someones had also pulled open the windows this fine Frightday morning, and while Halloween only consisted of two weather patterns - dark and slightly-darker, the secretary was already feeling slightly nauseous by the fresh warm air. With a groan he picked up the first application form, waving it a few times in the air to fan himself. It made a strange crinkling noise.

Pausing in mid-fan for just a second, he analyzed the form-in-hand. It was slightly torn.

He quickly swapped it with a nicer looking application form in the acceptance folder and fanned away. Much better.

Zoobey
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