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GallusDomesticus

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 5:13 pm


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLMENT FORM

Name: Millefiori
Nicknames: Mille , Fi
Gender: Female
Age: 15

Faction/Race Demon

Personality: Mille is all about being the center of attention. She doesn't necessarily crave friendship or approval, but she loves to know that her name is constantly being spread. She wants the fame. She almost craves it, it's a sick obsession of hers. She'd do anything to be able to scare the brains out of a large crowd, no matter the means.

Her mind is unstable, always pondering the next big stunt or performance, after-all, a gal has to keep her face out there. (And the emotions and reactions from other students to her escapades are a tasty snack to a Succubus, no doubt heart ) Not one to share the spotlight, she pushes away the idea of having many friends, preferring to keep a tight-knit circular of friends, if at all that.

When Spoken to, she may come off as snobbish and uninterested. And that's because she is uninterested unless it involves academics or herself, so it's safe to say she is conceited.

However, she'll put on quite an act for boys, batting her eyelashes and putting out seductive body language, always teasing male classmates and trying to make them feel as attracted as possible to her, making them easy targets in battles later..

She does have a soft-spot, though. Mille is what you can call the "Class Whore", She enjoys dating, not necessarily for physical attention, but she wants to be seen. And she knows on the arms of a hunk, she'll definitely be seen & envied.

Mama,Papa?; Mille comes from an average family of Succubi. Her mother, often trapping monks and priests in their sleep, is notorious for preying specifically on the sexually deprived. While her father, well, he got what he could and accepted it. Her household was caring, considering the lewdness of the Succubi race, and Mille aspires to be like her parents, except be greater, grander, more renowned for her 'acts'. She loves her parents, but at the end of the day, she sees them as a goal. A Goal to surpass them.

Hobbies; Millefiori enjoys dancing, more specifically flamenco. Often, from her dorm room you can hear the sound of her tap shoes clicking, in a rhythmic four-beat song. Along with that, her record-player is constantly playing repeating the same few records of spanish-guitars and moorish influenced singers. Perhaps Mille will be the founder of an Amityville performance group? (EVERY SCHOOL NEEDS A DRAMA CLUB. OKAY? OKAY. :|)

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?
Mille is enrolled in Amityville Academy to gain some social status as a Succubus, mostly. She wants to be known from the moment she walks in the doors & for years after she leaves.

(-Gym ? [a dance would enjoy it. lul.]
-And Potions & Plants
-Illusionary Artes 101)




FEAR: Mille uses her dance to 'enchant' or 'daze' her victims into a sort of victim, being a Succubus, she draws on the emotional aspects of sexuality and love to ******** with her victim psychologically. Meaning, as she dances her Flamenco, the victim begins to watch, and slowly, the scene morphs into they're crush/boyfriend/husband/partner/WHATEVER. The longer/more intense the dance get, the more in-depth the vision gets (Meaning, it'd go from a vision of them interacting with another person, to them talking directly to them, this, of course, would be a hallucination.). Mille would change the perspective of the enemy to become friend, making them believe that Mille could be trusted. And that's when she would strike.

Weaknesses: Since Mille has to literally dance for survival, using her FEAR would be exhausting, especially once she became a Year 3, and her opponents would be difficult. Another obstacle is as a Year 1, her dancing and illusions wouldn't be strong, meaning she herself would have to 'whisper' into her victims ear as she produced these illusions with her dancing, making it difficult to balance weaving an illusion and convince her enemies she's their friend.

•Natural ability:

Feedin' on yer love?;Succubus'/Incubus' can feed on emotions of others. I was thinking (along with a suggestion from ruri,) that perhaps she can use her performances as an outlet to gain some emotions to feed on. At first, it'd only be a minor amount, but with some practice and growth as a Succubus, I believe she'd be able to literally feast on emotions, eventually.

Physical Description:
Eye Colour: life-less white
Hair Colour/Style: Her hair should be jet black, with sheen. It'd be pulled up into a bun with a rusted metal hair piece securing the bun in place (Like traditional flamenco dancers)
Skin Colour: White, with pink hues on the cheeks(as if she put on very subtle amounts of rouge), her lips, would be red (like, lipstick red.) with a small mole just above it.
Clothing Style/Colours: Dressed like a Spanish flamenco dancer, Mille's garment is a blood-red, with black lace ruffles. She wears a dead,wilted rose in her hair at all times (replacing them daily before she leaves her dorm. It's part of her daily ritual). Her shoes are muddy and worn down tap-heels, with a rusted silver buckle. In her hands, she holds a black ripped lace fan (ripped meaning it's fully functional, but the lace has wholes, as if caught on a fence at one point)
Extra:
Black rose-thorn like protrusions poking out of her arms/shoulders, and on her legs. (Ripping through her garment and ripping up her fish-nets, to create a more... demon-esque look.)

References:
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Inspirations/Outside References

Song that reminds me of Mille, A lot. <3

Dance Video 1

Dance Video 2

Dance Video 3
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Mille is loosely based off of this legend, of "La Petenera", a flamenco dancer who lures men to damnation, she was supposedly the creator of Flamenco. Interesting s**t, amirite?
Legend of the La Petenera
Theory of Paterna: This popular theory sustains that this palo originated in the town of Paterna de Rivera in the province of Cádiz. According to a legend, the name of the song refers to a cantadora (woman singer) called "La Petenera", who was born there. She was reported to be, owing to her seduction power, the "damnation of men".

PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:25 pm


Accepted <3333

x___Doctor Ruri


GallusDomesticus

Desirable Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 3:15 pm



Refs added. :'>
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:09 pm


There's not really much to crit or comment on since your gal got accepted, haha.

More so things I'm just curious about and such.

Mille seems like she'd be a queen bee sort of character. Although she's not one for sharing the spotlight, she seems like one who wants all eyes on her and no one else. How does she react when someone else is getting all the attention, I wonder?

That's all I want to know, really. Also - does she have any horns or wings? o Ao I remember reading in the demon section that demons always have horns of some sort, be they on their head or body spikes and the like. Same with wings. Though, I'm not sure if that's true or not...just something I'm curious about!

I hope this helps! <3 It was fun reading about Millefiori!

Mriae

Devoted Cleric


GallusDomesticus

Desirable Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:13 pm



<3 Thanks Mr, I'll have to re-read the demon section and read up about the horns. I think I missed that part. If she does have horns, she'll probably have black horns protruding from her legs, much like a roses thorns. (that's what I'm thinking would look interesting, since her legs are the least designed part of her body, besides the fish nets)
PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:26 am


Actually, demons do not always have wings. It's stated in their little profile. o 3o

SOME have wings, some do not, it's a take em or leave em kinda thing.

x___Doctor Ruri


GallusDomesticus

Desirable Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:25 pm



Thanks for clearing it up, Ruri. <3 -loves-
PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:02 pm


heart

Lunadriel


Hes a Trap

PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:19 pm


I like her she kind of tells it as it is and her need for attentions is hilarious. In a good way though I do wonder if the need to date so much won't get her in trouble. How will she handle the jealous exes?

Edit:
Fear: Maybe they are drawn into a dance that they can't stop a succubus is really mental. So maybe she is dancing in their haead and they can't determine where she is or if she is real>
PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 11:41 pm


You managed to ******** up your post format, js.

Postin' so you (and I) dont forget tomorrow.
Givin' ideas for fear since that's what you actually want as you have personality and looks set;

Feels like her fear isnt succubi enough. In the touch way, sure, but when I think succubi I dont think OH GOD HORRIBLE HALLUCINATIONS (they're (thoughts) not exactly pg-13 either but hey). SO MY SUGGESTION IS to change it from her touch having horrific hallucinations, it insteads puts them in a day-dreamy like state about their crush/lover/that hot guy from class three. All dream like and shoujo bubbles until Mille starts whispering horrible things to them while in that state. From "s/he'll never love you" to "Oh, him? I ******** him last night. Let me tell you girlfriend, not worth it." And as she continues weaving her poisonous words the dream would slowly change into a heart-breaking nightmare. (/insert sucker punch here. MINUS 10 HP)

But Mille is here for them. *She'd* never do those things. You can trust *her*, she *loves* you after all. (+1 FOR THE HAREM)

B)

Revien

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 6:25 pm


I think, SINCE YOU DEMAND IT, I will Crit on your FEAR~ 8]

I think you can add Mille's love of Dancing with her FEAR--Using her clapper thingies to enchant and confuse the opponent while her dancing sent out the hallucinations? And to add on Bell's great FEAR suggestion, how about more than just 'love for another being' but to incite a great and deep emotion for even random things in the mirage? And then SNATCH THEIR 'LOVE' AWAY FROM THEM BUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA~!

Of course, you also need to add a FEAR Weakness.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 5:09 pm



updated, proof-read & fear revised and added in. heart

GallusDomesticus

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