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 Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 4:35 pm
Scapped check out the others in my sig.
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:25 pm
Natural Abilities:
*To be able to hear a great distance: He isn't able to see through walls or see somebody clearly down the hall but he can hear a person clearly from say the other side of the pumpkin patch.
Family Items (Not to be used in battles just heirlooms that he has):
Old pipe he likes to smoke with some interesting herbs.... Which he got from his grandmother
Facts about Eriko:
-Eriko likes to swim nude when it is really cold out.
-When he was eight out on an "adventure" he was cursed by an Yama-uba to die of old age. Oyuki (great-grandmother but not by blood) found him when visiting Hideki (great-grand-father).Eriko was rapidly aging on the inside and slowly on the outside so she was able to know who he is. She rushed him to Hideki where they rested Eriko in the pond and Oyuki froze it to preserve Miku's life. Oyuki wept for the child's life while Hideki tried to find a way to reverse the cure. It took many days for them to find a way while the pond slowly melted.
They went over all different ways to help Eriko examining his body countless times. It was was a small chance to reverse it if he lived it would surely make life on Eriko. His eyesight would always be poor and his growth would be stunted for an extended for some time but he would live. So Hideaki centered the curse in the pupils of the eyes to create a binding the pupils would needs something that would be able to replace them. Oyuki handed Hideaki what looks like frozen tears that they would use in an exchange the for the pupils. Eriko won't be able to see as well but he could use glasses to help and he would live. When the pond finally melted his body was weak for a very long time. He still hasn't grown much since then he is no taller than five foot three.
-Eriko has pretty poor eyesight (he wears glasses) but makes up for it for great hearing.
- He carries around a pair of pupils as a reminder.
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Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:47 pm
Updates:
8/16: Okay made some major changes from Purnima (sorceress) to Miku (tengu).
8/17: Minor changes.
-Gender change, it is a nice change of pace.
-Fear redone because the old one was not good.
8/18: More changes and stuff added.
11/2: Major changes from tengu to kitsune
Critiques are welcomed.
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:02 pm
You keep detonating Miku as both a 'he' and a 'her' at places o 3o
Personality: Well-rounded, but I'd like to know why he doesn't trust people? I'd just like to hear more of why he is how he is.
FEAR: I love the idea but can it be used in battle, or is it just like a 'I'm a SUPER SPY' thing? Just wanted it to be clarified.
Overall, I think this is wonderfully made and I really can find no significant faults :'3
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Questionable Shapeshifter
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:26 pm
Ugh Tengu abilities that can be used are hard to find. -goes back and does some more research- I may just put it as a natural ability.
Yeah I switched him from a she to a he, I do it with at least one character when I go for a different shop.
Personality: I meant to go into that it is linked to why he has no pupils.
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:29 pm
Added some facts and changed some of the description so people might understand him better.
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Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 11:47 am
Looks good but how will he do his homework and read and stuff? I know he's not blind but can he see well enough to do those basic things?
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Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:11 pm
Yeah he can it is just things that are far away that he has trouble with.
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:49 pm
Straightened out his personality think I added to much.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 1:52 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:16 pm
Alright made some changes to fear, abilities and description. I am ready.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 11:02 pm
"Hmph, blind little bird wants to attend, eh?" Hellma sneered before tossing the form over her shoulder. A loud snarl and crunching followed by desperate hacking could be heard throughout the office.
The Professor rolled her eyes as the Acceptance Bin began coughing up feathers in a bout of extreme melodrama. "This, you should be used to. There are many feathered ones this year, yes, but with this you shall DEAL."
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:30 am
Gave a bit more description.
I still need some personaility crits.
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 1:04 pm
Redid some of the fear.
Also almost completely changed his personality... Most likely will need to re-accept the fear.
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