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Maeth
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 11:06 am


Since the actual story threads need to be left reply-less until after completion I got the idea to just create a thread in itself for any commentary you have about his work.

This is simply so his threads can be trim and neat for new readers.

Thank You.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 11:12 am


Um, why not just make it a story commentary thread period? Then we can comment on your story in here too, to make that clean and neat.
And you can just delete the posts in the actuall story thread to clean things up a bit

Ayaji
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Maeth
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 11:45 am


I have deleted the posts. But I still want people to be able to talk about it and share.

Also, my story is not in anyway needing to be tidy or anything since it's not a serious work.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 5:16 pm


hey thanks, bro. and thanks to those of you who have been reading my story and commenting on it. this is actually the second time that ive posted this story on the internet. i got some really great feedback about it the first time. unfortunately, i cant play the soundtrack i compiled on this site. maybe ill put the links to the songs later.

also, would anyone else be interested in working on their writing skills with me? i was thinking about starting a series of short stories along with some of you. maybe round-robin style or a bunch of short stories following a theme. of course you could add illustrations to your short stories. i would be willing to edit the stories for posting.

hmm, more on this later.

Sensei Grae


Ayaji
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 8:59 am


I used to do round robin sort of stories on another forum...I enjoyed it, and I would be willing to do it again^^ We had a 'three word' story, where each person posted three words of the story. That story got pretty strange very quickly, but it was fun heart There was also a story where we took turns posting a single sentance from the story, and one where we posted paragraphs. Which style were you thinking of?
PostPosted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 1:35 pm


a paragraph or two might be okay, i suppose. what i originally had in mind was everyone contributing actual complete short stories which were about a common character or world. i have a couple ideas of what that could be that i will reveal later. for now i'll just say that both would be in the realm of 'tall tale'.

more to come later.

Sensei Grae


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 6:47 am


No one listens to me when I suggest things. crying At least it was done.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 15, 2006 11:02 am


I'm sorry? What happened?

Maeth
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Sensei Grae

PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 3:06 pm


Lasreaine
No one listens to me when I suggest things. crying At least it was done.


i think she means that we all said, 'nah' when she suggested a different thread for comments on the story. then we did it.

we all owe lasreaine some kudos. ...or how about some domos? domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun
PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 4:41 pm


hey, everyone. i just posted the last chapter in the first act of SiaS. when i finish posting all the stories, i'd like to start a thread or two for everyone to participate in short story writing. what would you guys be interested in doing?

if you want, i can establish the world and core characters for everyone to play around with. what sort of world and characters would you be interested in?

recently, ive been thinking about writing short stories to add to the legend of the laughing man (from the short story by jd salinger. read it here: http://www.freeweb.hu/tchl/salinger/laughingman.html

you might have heard the name before if you watch ghost in the shell where there is a villain named after him. if we went with this character it would be sort of a tall tale, with a larger-than-life robin hood-like mysterious central character in what is basically the simplified real world. the laughing man and his strange crew would have misadventures as they pull off their ingenius criminal escapadees, all the while staying out of the clutches of chinese bandits, tibetan pirates, and an obsessive french detective and his crossdressing daughter.

if you all don't like that idea, we can make our own world and partying heroes (or anti-heroes). all ideas welcome!

once those of us who are interested in this decide what we're going to do, i wouldnt mind be the editor. just send your short stories into me and i'll do all the spelling and grammar corrections so that everything looks nice and semi-professional. icon_smile.gif

Sensei Grae


Sensei Grae

PostPosted: Sat Feb 04, 2006 3:25 pm


i just posted the first chapter of the last act. i was just wondering if anyone is still reading the story?
PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 1:58 am


Salinger would be proud.

Maeth
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Sensei Grae

PostPosted: Fri Mar 10, 2006 12:58 pm


okay, the story is finished....SO! what did you all think?



....be gentle redface
PostPosted: Fri Mar 10, 2006 7:50 pm


Sensei Grae
okay, the story is finished....SO! what did you all think?



....be gentle redface

It was awsome! mrgreen I love it. You truly do have a great talent.

Anekko


Maeth
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 11, 2006 2:19 am


You should post "Where reality takes us". I think people would enjoy that.
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