I don't know what RPing levels you are willing to accept, but your guild home need a good hard proofread.
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A new world, Zero World online, a place that
weren't supposed to exist for many people but now is turning into the most famous online game in all countries of the world.
Not all have computers and internet if I'm not mistaken. Different from all the other games
that you ever played I would take this phrase out this one give you the experience of a totally new fantasy world with a AI advanced enough to make everything around
you not only act on it's own but also think and learn, so forget about NPCs that ever say the same thing endless and low graphic games that have robotic movements, this is a new world, and you are invited to be part of it.
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i do not own the pictures inside this guild, they are all from photobucket and other picture sites. Thank yo
u Those bolds and blues don't even begin to get into sentences being odd or long. That second one, the disclaimer, seems like a half-assed attempt to give credit. Do it right, or make your own and give credit to the game creators/designers and whoever edited them.
The guild home should have the RPing level expected, and what is needed in a join request.
I know that your main audience will be people that already know this, but is that a description of the game, or of the RP? You might want to separate but include both, and a link to further information about the game, in case people that have not heard of it are interested.
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Since your guild looks to primarily be an RP guild, put RP as the main forum, and OOC as the first sub. You seem to have few enough threads that it won't be too much of a chore. (yes, threads have to be moved one by one.)
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All but two threads in the entire guild are stickies. Not only does that show a lack of differentiation between important and not, but people tend to not look at stickies and announcements because they are so used to them not changing that they barely see them on the thread list. Re organize that structure and consider why something wouldn't be right as a regular thread.
You should lock the rules thread so non-crew can't post, unless you require that all members post there to say they read them.
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From the Beastiary thread:
Gust221
This topic will explain about monster, they status and without forget their drops cool not much to say really
i'll try to make it better soon
Place holders look bad. Use a word or writer or word processor file to make something over time. Or, post a partial and add things as you can, but don't say it is on your to-do list because those things never get done.
Don't say it is bad. As captain you are showing lack of enthusiasm and that is translated into you not being willing to put forth the massive amount of effort needed to get members, get the guild active, and keep it active and interesting.
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The story book should have had all the needed posts reserved before being unlocked for posting.
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OOC chat is a subforum, a thread in it shouldn't be specifically for 'ooc chat'. Also, suggestions should be separate from that anyway.
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I noticed a lot of questions posted in your threads, I think you need to make it more clear that those can be their own new thread in OOC, or make a Questions thread.
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