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 Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:01 am
~Nicotine~
I try to close my eyes
I try to sleep it away
But once it starts theres no stoping
Not until I crash and burn
I feel the shiver
I feel the anger
I feel the pain
I feel the explosion
The tossing and turning
The incredible need for another taste
Another hit
Another puff
It's killing me
Yet I don't care
It's driving me mad
And I just don't need air
I feel my breath
Its growing hot
My soul is calm
But my tongue is burning
I don't know how it got this way
I haven't had it in so long
Yet I taste it even now
And I crave it even more
Maybe I just need a drink
Or maybe her skin is made of nicotine
(just random err I guess metaphor?I dunno this was just a way to get the thoughts out and explain how a certain person gets to me,my body and my heart)
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:10 am
nice...*steps out for a cigarette*
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:23 am
XDDD oh noes my writing has somehow promoted smoking!Don't sue me!I'm poor enough! LMAO *follows you* =w=
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:25 am
*shares cigarette* to hell with health! if it feels good do it lol
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:34 am
ninja *takes a puff*Oh boy I sure hope Cloudie doesnt read this XD she'd be pissed if she found out Ive smoked-no body tell Cloudie or I will hunt you down and molest your house door! XDDD
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:55 am
Cloudie its my fault...Im a terrible influence.
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:01 am
Nah its not your fault DX besides Ive only tried it once...I was tempted to do it again but cigs cost so much now I decided it's an addiction I don't need right now =.=
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:02 am
but this one free...so no worries twisted
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:17 am
XDDD lol indeed so you silly thing you
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:25 am
let me take the blame...its safer XD
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:32 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:12 am
Just a Dark Cloud
You start as white
And turn me pink
But end as black
To show me strength I lack
I try to follow
Only to to slip in rain
You make it hard to swallow
And fill my heart with pain
I pray for the sun to make you clean
But when nothing happens I want to scream
And you float back again in white
And once again I'm filled with light
I try to pray
But am hit with lightning
I try to pray
But again you fight me
I suddenly pray for rain
Just to see you again
I pray for rain
But the sky is clear again
I look down in the puddle you left me
It seems you are just a dark cloud over my head
(May edit,I dont really care)
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:49 am
Mystique, girl, you are just the coolest writer ever!
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:12 am
Lea-nii Mystique, girl, you are just the coolest writer ever! *blinks*eh?really?I think you're just saying that XD this is my 3 time ever trying to write poetry and the first I wouldn't even all a peom >.< I just write stuff like this when Im really upset about love...I'ma drawer not a poet
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:15 am
haha well i like your poems. did you see my thread?
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