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 Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:46 am
Ah, another day at the acedemy, Shisu thought, walking down the long hallway to the room where she was scheduled to teach her first student. What was the student's name?, she asked herself, trying to recall the file she had been given, but couldn't seem to remember. Stepping up to the classroom door, she slid it open and stepped inside. Eep! My first teaching job, she exclaimed in her head, skipping over to the desk and hopping up on it, sitting on top of it cross-legged. Now just to wait for the student, she thought, staring intently at the door.
{{I hope you find this topic okay. Post here when you have.}}
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:36 pm
Kaiin walks down the hallway at a moderate paste with his hands in his pocket.When he reaches his room walks up to the teachers desk, puts his hands together and bows. Good morning sensei. Please excuse me for keeping you waiting i should halved arrived early. Forgive my tardiness Kaiin says before taking a seat front and center. Sitting straight up and hands folded on the desk. Never the less I am ready for the days lesson.
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:16 pm
{{Make sure when you use dialogue, you put it in quotations around it ("insert dialogue here") so that it's easy to see what is speech and what is action. Good job using different font color, though. Also, it's a little easier to read if you put everything into the past tense instead of the present. You can look around the guild for some RPing examples to get an idea of what a post should look like.}}
---------- Shisu jumped off the desk as the student entered the room. " Good morning. You weren't tardy at all actually, I was early. Oh, and you don't have to bother with the bowing stuff. It isn't necessary," Shisu said, smiling at the student where he was sitting at a desk. Hopping back up on the desk she sat cross-legged again. " So, first thing's first. Introductions! I'm Arekushisu Matsuchi, you can call me Shisu, though. I'm a Genin here in the [Nameless] Village and you're my first official student. I like to read and my specialty is ninja tools," she said, speaking a little too quickly, but she hoped the student caught the important stuff. " How about you," she asked, smiling widely.
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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:52 pm
"Well, I like to train."Kaiin said while keeping a calm and emotionless face.When will we start training, Sensei?
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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 6:52 pm
{{In OOC we will be testing along with testing in RPing. So, first off, what do you do before you post? Do you preview the post? Run spell check? Etc.?}}
---------------- Shisu laughed at the student's ready-to-go attitude. " Training will take place in due time. First I need to know who you are. I don't know anything about you. Do you have your profile? If so, may I have it so I can see if you're ready," she asked, placing her elbows on her legs and holding her head in her hands, intently looking at her first student.
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:28 am
"Of course sensei, for give me. I should be more patient."Kaiin reaches into his back pack and pulls out a copy of his ninja bio and his it to his teacher."If you still have any questions just ask sensei. I will be glad to answer them."Kaiin said while bowing. Forgetting what she had said earlier.
Username:iMangetsu Hozuki
Character Name:Kaiin Hirashima
Rank:Student
Age:17
Appearance:About 5'9 5'10 with long jet black hair going down the sides of his face and in the black a medium sized ponytail.He is pretty muscular for some one of his age Kaiin also has gray eyes.Kaiin is usually seen where dark clothing blue red black and gray.
Picture:avitar
Personality:Calm, kind, down to earth, confident,layed back, and sometimes a little clue less.
Bio:Born with a silver spoon in his mouth Kaiins family were the riches people in a small town. His family owned a mill that was the towns man source of money and jobs, but his family treated the workers badly giving them long hours and little pay.So they people decided to take the money they deserved and chase his family out of town.When his parents herd of this plan they sent off to live with relatives here the night before.He has remaned here for the next 8years and has promised his self to find his parents who did mange to escape the raid on his home.
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:16 pm
{{Make sure you are responding to my questions in OOC. Half of the test to become a Genin takes place in OOC (Out Of Character).}}
----------------- " There's nothing to forgive. Your excitement to train is to be expected. After all, you may become a Genin today. So, lighten up. Have fun," Shisu said, smiling brightly at her student. Taking the papers from him she took a second to read them over. Ah... so his name is Kaiin. That's right. I remember now. So he lost his parents... just like me, she thought sadly. Realizing she was frowning at the papers she looked up and threw a smile on her face. " Everything seems to be in order. Nice to have you here, Kaiin. Do you have any jutsu? There doesn't seem to be any listed in your bio," Shisu asked him.
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:50 pm
"Well the only jutsu i am capable of using belong to my kkgenkai Seisoku Bikou The first stage of Seisoku It allows me to free enter in and out of shadows. Also the I may use a nearby shadow to warp them to another location that ive been to or I can travel while in the shadow. While im hidden in a shadow I am unaffected by taijutsu and genjutsu. Also I may control any shadow around me to attack or defend by using body gestures.The shadow may extend, retract, hold items, and even grab your opponent, but the base of the shadow must always be connected to a solid object. If I were to remove the shadows base and hold it completely in the air the shadow will simply fade away. While im controlling shadows I can only perform shadow style ninjutsu or genjutsu techniques. Also thee shadow are unaffected by taijutsu.
Here are a list of my jutsu sensei. ( C Ranked )
Tri Shadow Jutsu- A shadow like tentacle reaches out of the users back, it can stop taijutsu if you can make it react in time, the tentacle can reach 25ft away it can not stop ninjutsu.
( C Ranked )
Ninja Art-Human shadow Unite-The user combines with his/her shadow and there skin terns black. In this state the user isnt affected by genjutsu and ninja weapons. ( Ninjutsu )
( C Ranked )
Shadow Doppelganger- The user summons his/her shadow to fight by their side. The shadow is unaffected by taijutsu, genjutsu, or ninja tools. The doppelganger can not attack while performing or controlling another jutsu. You can only have one doppelganger. ( Ninjutsu )
( B Ranked )
Shadow Veil- The user creates a gray veil of negative enrgy around his/herself. It repels the affects of gejutsu (ninjutsu)
(C ranked)
Ninja Art Shadow Fist-The user gathers shadows around it and draws them to his/her arms then shoots the shadow toward the enemy(s) at a high speed the shadow also take the image of hands and can be controlled the user cant perform any other jutsu while using this one.
(B ranked)
Ninja Art Shadow damage Jutsu- The caster hands and feet start to glow in a dark blue negative energy that allows him/her to hurt the their opponent by hitting their shadow.
(B ranked)
Shadow Burst- The user draws shadows from around to make many small shadows on the ground the user then is able to make them explode multiple times at will the user cant perform other justu while using this one.
(A ranked)
Shadow Art-Beast Unite Jutsu- The user combines with his animal partner to gain certain abilites that the creature may poses like if your were to combine with a cheeta you speed and sinces will in crease or if with a bird you will grow fethers and wings.(NOTE COMBINEING WITH AN ANIMAL WILL DOUBLE YOUR SPEED STRENGHT AND THE POWER OF YOU JUTSU ALSO IT WILL ALTER YOUR APPEARENCE A BIT MAKING YOU LOOK LIKE HALF MAN AND HALF BEAST)You can also semi transform you can change one part of your body and not the rest. So if you combine with a bird instead of getting feathers, talons, claws, and wings you can juts get the claws or wings. To stop this jutsu simply perform it again and you will seperate from your animal ppartner.(NOTE TO USE THIS JUTSU YOU MUST HAVE AN ANIMAL PARTNER)
(A ranked)
Shadow Art-Feather Exploding Wind Tunnel-The user of this jutsu performs hand signs to create a large tunnel of wind that is able to nock enemies off their feet and deflect ninja tools. The tunnel also contains many black feathers that explode on contact with the enemy. Range: 70ft
(B ranked)
Shadow Art-Black Foam Jutsu-The user performs hand signs that allow them to spew black foam from there mouth. If the foam makes contact with the enemy it will stick to there body slow their movements in able them from performing jutsu for 2 posts. Range: 20ft
(C ranked)
Shadow Art-Rising Shadow Spear Technique-The user performs hand signs that allows the him/her to raise black spears under the enemy that can pierce the shields guards and barriers.(The more chakra used the more spears that will appear.) # of spears 1-30 Range: 50ft
(B ranked)
Demon Roars Technique- The user of this jutsu in inhales deeply while summing up chakra in their chest and releasing it in a thunderous roar that can stop and reflect any and all ninja tools and non physical atacks(which mostly are ninjutsu ex. fire ball jutsu, water dragon jutsu.It has no effect on genjutsu.) this jutsu dosent hurt the opponent with the initial attack except blowing them a way some. Shadow Shadow Clones(lol)
Rank:B
The user makes black clones of his/herself they are slow and clumsy and are good for nothing except as a distraction. They are unaffected by ninjutsu, and genjutsu.(limit 5)
Ninja Art Wings of a Demon Jutsu
Rank:C
The user grows black wings from his/her back.
Armor of a Demon Jutsu
Rank:C
The users skin turns gray and scaly and is able to shoot out small needles from any where on his body.
Ninja Art Breath of a Demon
Rank:B
The user is able to shoot large a mounts of negatively charged sludge out of his/her mouth if it gets into wounds it can stop chakra flow to that area.
Pool of Shadow
Rank:B
The user summons all shadow around to surrond the enemy(s) feet and starts to pull them under the more you fight it the faster you sink this jutsu can only be broken by breaking the casters concentration.
Shadow Bomb
Rank: D
The user takes chakra and a small piece of shadow in to his/her hand and compresses them together to make a bomb a very powerful bomb that can curve one when thrown to increase chances of hitting.
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:19 pm
{{Mangetsu, you need to respond to my questions that I have asked in OOC. If not you will not be able to graduate and become a Genin. I will repeat the questions to make it easier and so you don't have to search. Before you submit a Role-playing post what do you do? Do you run it through spell check, preview it, etc.?
Another note: Your list of jutsu is extensive and very creative. Although, a ninja of the student level would not be able to perform all these jutsu. Perhaps, start out with about 5 to 10 jutsus and after you have become a Genin train and add more jutsu to your list. Also, having the capability to be unaffected by taijutsu and genjutsu while in a shadow could be considered God-modding, so I would either change it or explain it better.
And another note: You can go ahead and post your profile and jutsu list in the Shinobi Records by creating your own topic. Just make sure your RPC's name is the topic's title. You can look at other profiles to get an idea of how to set it up. I suggest Death's, Lilly's, Kiiyashi's, or Cobra's to use as examples.
Finally, double check that any dialogue is in quotations "...". Also check for missing or incorrect punctuation. [Nameless] is a semi-literate to literate guild and so correct grammar and spelling is preferred.}}
-------------------------------------- Shisu nodded at his explanation of his bloodline trait and his jutsu. " Very good," she said approvingly to Kaiin. " Okay. Your next task is to explore the village and write a sentence or two about each location. Then return here and report your findings," Shisu continued, holding out a pen and a few pieces of paper for him to write on. ------------------
{{Let me clear up what you are supposed to be doing. You do not actually have to post in each sub-forum, but you do need to write two sentences about each sub-forum of the guild. Examples of the sub-forums are: Village Academy, Insanity Tavern, Wilderness, Training Grounds, etc.. Then you just tell me in RP what each of the areas are. Do you understand the task or do you need me to describe it clearer?}}
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