Please tell me your real opinion of these poems.

you are forgoten and no one cares,
you can not breath but your still here,
your body does not change at all,
and you just wait on that Forsaken Fall,
you hope and pray that someday,
you would just fade away,
but you don't and still no one cares,
about the little you up there


Together we are happy,
Apart we are not,
For with every parting there is a fight,
But with every greating there is delight


In the dark a coyote howls,
It's a sound full of hope and of fear,
In the dark your dreams and nightmares,
cross over the Coyote Bridge,
Wild things thrive,
Tame things do die,
When you cross over the bridge,
Lifes not the same,
In the dark your fears come alive,
But your hopes still linger inside,
The Coyote Bridge


that last one is a song and if you want to here it i'll put the link to it below

http://www.youtube.com/user/xxleaftrailxx#p/u/12/vf5NlmYaLhA

Thanks For Reading