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marieaskelinton

PostPosted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:55 pm


My Silent Whisper

my silent whisper
it tells me to ignore you
the silent whisper
it tells me to hate you
silent whisper
it says your no good
but how
how can i listen to it?
how when it tells me your not...
your not the one
my silent whisper
tells me your not who you say you are
says your a liar
a demon
a demon i can't resist
some one i will miss
i must
i have to
i must listen to my silent whisper
 
PostPosted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 8:26 am


I like this. It sounds like a love type poem, but with an awesome twist. and ya know. A really cool whisper.(conciense) smile
Nice!

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 8:36 am


sounds awesome you should keep writing
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