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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:34 pm
well the title says it all. Im trying to write a story and Im coming up with new species to add to the story. so if you can come up with something just put it down here. also if you feel like it can you describe what it looks like and or habbits or maybe draw a picture whee Sooooo please PLEASE help me.
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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:54 pm
well here is one of the main species.
its called a Underhound This creature is a creature of the night and slips under the radar during the day. this species is about the height of a average human and the common shape of a wolf. it is a breed of the undead and reproduces by letting out a acidic gas, that when breathed in by any living creature is slowfully and painfully transformed into a underhound.when a creature is transformed into a underhound they may have 1 or 2 traits that resembals the being they once were. for example if they were a rabbit they might have longer ears, or if they were a rino they might have small horns. another thing when they first become a underhound they go into a unstoppable destructive rage for a week eating everything they can get their fangs on. the underhound can eat anything because the acidic gas in it's organs turns it into more gas, for the gas is the creatures lifeblood. the under hound only has fur on it's head, neck, and bottom. the rest of the body is covered by thick skin. around the rib cage the skin is very thin so you can see the ribs and the eary glow of the heart (which produces the acidic gas that glows a specific color unique to each underhound). the toung of a underhound is stripped and is extremely long often flowing out of the side. the tails are stripped. the males tail reseambals a rapter tail, and the females tail kinds looks like a tiger tail but hairless all around except for a ridge ontop of the tail and a fan like fur at the tip. each underhound has unique markings on the bare skin.
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weeping willow of 94 Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 2:03 pm
how about a cross between a bird and a gorilla. I have no idea how to describe it. Sorry not that imaginative.
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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 12:07 pm
A Thread-Eater Corrupt: Despite it's name a thread eater feast on the memories of other beings. It will wait till a being has a substantial amount of memories, good or bad then pulls the good memories out of the victims head in and devours them. These creatures have no gender so it reproduces by forming it's own thoughts into a thread-like material and feeding it to a child while it sleeps. The child who is feed the string will within a week lose all fat and muscle on it's body then its bones will stretch till it becomes the likeness of a Thread-Eater and its heart slowly becomes a ball of pulsing Black thread. It stands at least 7 feet in height, having gray skin that seems to stick the bones in its body. Where it's heart should be a long white piece of thread hangs down and its long black hair wraps around it like a silky cloth. It puts one long bony finger to your temple and a crooked smile crosses its wicked face, you see it pull a long thread from your temple and hear it let out a loud screechy laugh sending the final chills down your spin. Then you lose consciousness wishing it would just take your life.
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:25 pm
wow thats really intersting I think I might murge this into my story.
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Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:51 pm
Well what about a mythical Sun-goddess, turned Fox? She would be arrogant in the beginning but loosens up near the end to finally understand why she was turned into that which she hated soo much. She would be a beautiful White/Yellow fur fox that has a subtle smile like a mother.
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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:04 am
I am happy if you like it. I came up with the Thread-Eater as I went along but it turned out good. If you do use it please tell me, it's really cool so I feel like putting it in my story after I alter it.
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Posted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:40 pm
II Balto II Well what about a mythical Sun-goddess, turned Fox? She would be arrogant in the beginning but loosens up near the end to finally understand why she was turned into that which she hated soo much. She would be a beautiful White/Yellow fur fox that has a subtle smile like a mother. So it's like an Okami fox XD
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:35 am
CandySkunk II Balto II Well what about a mythical Sun-goddess, turned Fox? She would be arrogant in the beginning but loosens up near the end to finally understand why she was turned into that which she hated soo much. She would be a beautiful White/Yellow fur fox that has a subtle smile like a mother. So it's like an Okami fox XD wolf fox? Cause its a fox wouldn't it be kitsune not Okami wait it Ookami that means wolf. So fox mistress?
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:44 pm
all of these ideas could be put into one story. I think they all sound like a digger (a story that I could sink my claws into).
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weeping willow of 94 Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:02 pm
you should hear this chick's poetry. It's so good it's creepy. If you ask her nicely maybe she'll let you hear it.
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Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 5:53 pm
I gots an idea! how about a dragon with claws made of amber. It also has an amber jewel in the middle of its forehead. To attack it stcks its claws into the ground and uses the electromagnetic energy in the earth( im not sure if there is or not) and then breathes out lightning. It also has no need for a mate since it can reproduce at will. I suck at making names so the best that i have is Amberdragon. im using that in my story too so if you do use it try to change it up a little bit. xp
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weeping willow of 94 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 7:15 am
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Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 7:17 am
weeping willow of 94 you should hear this chick's poetry. It's so good it's creepy. If you ask her nicely maybe she'll let you hear it. who's?.... are you talking about that poem i wrote on the last day of school?
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weeping willow of 94 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 1:11 pm
dude.... you only told me one of your poems. rolleyes jk. rofl But just in case yes the one from the last day of school. Also yes horray for details. blaugh
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