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PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:34 am


Empty Sin
By Redmoon3580

This time has been filled in,
Saturated with nothing.
This line that could have been
Filled with eternal something
Lies here an empty sin,
So artistically lacking.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:43 pm


Nice poem.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 2:45 pm


I love poems that bash themselves, I honestly do. And considering the fact that you used the words in a way that makes it apparent you KNOW what they mean...well, I just love your poem.
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