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Zamaku

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 6:52 am


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_______________T h e - B a s i c s - P l u s

Full Name: Takeru Takaishi
Nickname: T.K. or 'The lunar Dancer'
Birthdate: January 31st
Rank: Forth Seat Vizard [4]
Age at Death/Appearance Age: Nine [ 9 ]
Actual Age: 180 years old
Gender: Male
Race: Caucasian
Hometown: Karakura town

Theme Song:
Yui - Again [Piano]

Break Up


_______________P e r s o n a l - I n f o r m a t i o n

Physical Documentation: [the top picture...]
Takeru is a short young male with light silver shaggy hair. his attire generally consists of a Hoodie followed by a pair of cargo shorts and sneakers along with his always present headphones draped around his neck. Takeru generally always has a light tan complexion and semi athlete build for his age.
Height: 4'12
Weight: 100lbs
Personality: Takeru's personality is just one contradiction after another, he's generally quite and lonly but actually loving every thing about nature and life. but then at other times he can be angry or even destructive when it come to harming nature or those he hold dear to him no matter how few there are. Ever since he was young he has always been told lies and falls accusations leaving him very little room for trust in others, this makes him have a lonely type presence on others. He also has a seemingly high sense of justice but being a loner he dosent often act on those impulses. another thing about him is that he knows just how well it is to keep a cool head in battle but he has several weakness that just seem to throw him into a frenzy of attacks leaving him open to damage both physically and mentally. the person that Takeru conveys any trust in is his zampaku-to spirit, the two are very close and he is the only person Takeru can be his real self around, which is fun a happy child

Sexual Orientation: Straight


_______________V i s a r d - i n f o r m a t i o n - p l u s

Zanpakuto Name and Sealed Description:
Takeru's Sealed Blade
Name: Sishimaru
[Note* the name was altered from shi-ruba-tu-ski meaning lunar wolf God]

Zanpaku-to Sword Type: Striker
Zanpaku-to Element: Lunar

Zampaku-to Spirit: Sishimaru
Sishimaru is very friendly towards those he trusts such as Takeru, he too has a high sense of justice much like takeru and loves the rush of a good fight unlike takeru. although he puts takeru's well being first he is sometimes overwhelmed by his love for a good fight. his and Takeru's relationship can be described like a 'boy and his dogs'. Sishimaru can also be refured to as Takeru's Yang.

Zanpaku-to Inner World: Takerus spirit world is much like a forest embedded on the side of a mountain with a clear view of the full moon. there is also a water fall flowing into a lake at the base of the mountain, this lake represents life and hope. this is the place in which Takeru come when he needs to find solitude, this can be refured to as his 'happy place'. This is also the place in which both his zampaku-to spirit and inner hollow reside.

Shikai~
Shikai release phrase:
Long: "Dance across the alluring moon, Sishimaru"
Short: "Dance Shismaru"

Weapon Changes: Takeru's Blade dose not change shape but 20 Silver Halos are produced, the Actual zampaku-to its self dose not disappear when Shikai is activated. theses halos can be used to block or defend enemy attacks and can also be used to attack the enemy directly. The halos can be controlled with various movements of Takeru's body, like a flick of his wrist of a snap of his finger. He can also control them with his soul, this lets his fight even if he is restrained though not to great effect if he was free. the Halos, although sharp to the point and extremely deadly can be destroyed with a well timed strike from and opponent but can then be reformed with a little Reshi from takeru.

Body changes: when Takeru's shikai is activated his eyes become a Silver misty color, this change lets Takeru keep up with the speed of his opponents movements, there attacks and held reveal hidden and invisible objects, it is also said that he can detect lies and his opponents true feelings. this ability can only be used upon one opponent at a time meaning that when facing a group of people it is easy to get confused amoung the groups feelings and thoughts, that being said, this skill requires immense concentration. The correct name for this ability is 'sukkiri No boushi' meaning 'clear eye'

Field changes: None

Shikai Attacks~

urufu fusegu- this attack creates a simple barrier of energy around the caster. the shields strength and from is determined by how much energy the user put into it.

gesshoku juusei- Two Halos closests to Takeru grow out about 20 feet in Diamiter, the two halos then begin to spin at high speeds and are covered in a silver energy. the two halos are then used to attack.

bakuretsu doushika-iittou- this attack covers the blade in a large amount of silver unstable reshi meaning that even the slightest touch could set the Reshi into an explosion. this attack is used mainly as a finisher due to its high risk and cost.


Bankai~ not yet achieved
Bankai release phrase: "Banaki...Sishimaru De no Ookami"

Weapon Changes: After going into Bankai Takerus Zampaku-to blade changes into a large 'Lunar Claymore'. this new weapon is called the "gesshoku no hakaisha". in addition to the weapon change the 20 Halos from the previous shikai are now multiplied to 200 in total. these are Harder, faster and sharper meaning all around more deadly.

Body changes: in addition to the previous shikai effect 'sukkiri No boushi' meaning 'clear eye' Takeru now Gains strange tribal marking around his eyes and middle of his face. because of these markings takeru gains the ability to use his sukkiri No boushi on multiple people instead of the 1 that could only be accomplished in shikai along with heightened senses.

Field changes: None

Bankai Attacks~

kyojin kontan yaiba or Giant Soul Blade
Description: The user Focuses a majority of there energy into the blade. once energy has reached top then a giant blade of energy erupts from the claymore. this can be used for attacking and Defending

ko shippou toke or great silver shield
once this move is used 100 of the Halos come together to form a shield on Ray's left arm covered with a bump of golden Reiatsu covering the entire outer layer of the shield . the Shield is ALMOST impenetrable but can still be beaten by some one of high class power, much like a captain or even a lieutenant.

Eclipse Meteor~ to use this move Takeru jumps high into the air and places the sheild over his body which then begins to gather energy. then when enough energy is gathered he Launches out many Balls of black reietsu covered in a gold Reitsu cover causing massive damage to the opponent is he or she is struck by any of them.

Vizard Mask Fenrir
Mask Time Limit 1-3 posts
Inner Hollow: Lobishu
Lobishu's personality takes after Takeru lonely and hateful side making him the side that compels him to kill and fight those who threaten him in any way may it be physically or mentally. Lobishu is generally quite and well behaved but has been known to attempt to take control of takeru wile he is weak but has always been stopped by Sishimaru. Lobishu can be refured to as Takeru's Yin.

Takeru is not very adept in the art of Kido due to his lack of interest in the field and because of this he knows very little spells.


Bakudo: 1-21
○1○
Sai (塞, Restrain)
Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.
Incantation:
unknown.

○4○
Hainawa(這縄, Crawling Rope)
An energy rope entangles the target's arms.
Incantation:
unknown.

○8○
Seki (斥, Repulse)
Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it.
Incantation:
unknown.

○9○
Geki (撃, Strike)
Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them.
Incantation:
"Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!" ("自壊せよロンダニーニの黒犬!! 一読し・焼き払い・自ら喉を掻き切るがいい!")

○?○
Hōrin (Disintegrating Circle)
Causes an orange hued tendril with spiraling yellow patterns to erupt from the users hand and attempt to trap a target. the end of it remains in the hands of the user allowing them to control the path of the tendril before and after capture. The Kidō is able to connect with another one of itself if both have captured a target and bind them together.
Incantation:
"Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and tear out your own throat!" ("自壊せよロンダニーニの黒犬!! 一読し・焼き払い・自ら喉を掻き切るがいい!")

○21○
Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Escape)
Creates a blast upon activation and is used like a ninja's smoke bomb.
Incantation:
unknown.
Hado: 1-33
○1○
Shō (衝, Thrust)
Pushes the target away from the caster.
Incantation:
unknown.

○4○
Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning)
The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.
Incantation:
unknown.

○11○
Tsuzuri Raiden (製本電, Bound Lightning)
Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through.
Incantation:
unknown.

○31○
Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire)
Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
Incantation:
"Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!" ("君臨者よ!血雨の仮面·万象·羽ばたき·ヒトの名を冠す者よ!焦熱と争乱、海隔て逆巻き南へと歩を進めよ!")[

○33○
Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down)
Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power.
Incantation:
"Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws." ("君臨者よ!血肉の仮面·万象·羽ばたき·ヒトの名を冠する者よ!真理と節制、罪知らぬ夢の壁に僅かに爪を立てよ!")



Fighting style: Takeru is adept in a form of taijutsu in which his moves resemble the style of capoiera or that of breakdancing.
Skills: high sense of smell, taste, hearing and sight, can materialize his zamapku-to spirit and inner hollow, bright silver Cero, Bright silver Bala, sonido.



_______________P e r s o n a l - H i s t o r y

Human life:
During his human life Takeru was very lonely, his father was a drunk who beat his mother every other night and his mother was always at work, though when she was home she loved and cared for him, at this point in time she is the only person Takeru trusted. He went to a normal public school and got regular grades in school, he was pretty average. though the one thing un-average about him was the fact of his high spirit pressure and the ability to hear [not see] Hollows and spirits, there hollow cries filled the air as he would try desperately to sleep during many a night. due to lack of sleep and the recurring tales he would tell his parents of monsters in the night with white masks he was eventually placed in a mental facility at age 7. after completing a year there he was then again placed under parental custody of his mother. but that did not last for later that very evening she was pushed off there 8 story high apartment balcony by his father, Takeru bared witness to this murder himself causing his entire mental psyche to shut down and going into an acoma for half a year.

after reawakening Takeru had learned that his father was put to death for comiting murder, takeru was then placed under to custody of the state, he was given a small shack for a house and barley enough money to sustain life but even in the thick of things takeru still had enough love in him to take in and care for a young wolf pup.on the day of his ninth birthday the wolf pup had grown to be a full sized wolf, this wolf was not vicious for it protected takeru and even help care for him. finely things were starting to look up for takeru. but still as misfortune would have it that could not last for long for a week later on a stormy night takeru and his wolf for a pet/ friend Sishimaru were on there way home from the convince store when a loud wolfish cry erupted form an ally way followed by a young females scream for help. not thinking twice Takeru and sishimaru Darted in the direction of the scream only to find a wounded, almost dead young female child laying on the ground towered over by a ..a...Werewolf! [hollow in the shape of a werewolf] the werewolf was black and its entire beings wasn't entirely solid, though Takeru just thought that it was the rain playing tricks on him. just then the black werewolf raised his blade [that smae blade becoming Takeru's Zamapku-to] in his left hand and was about to finish off the young girl when Sishimaru tackled the monstrosity away from her but no before taking a blade wound to the shoulder. Takeru ran over to the girl and put one arm around her and lifted her onto his back and began to run through the back roads followed by a wounded Sishimaru close behind. the three Ran, duck and dipped through the back roads of town as the large black werewolf jumped from roof top to roof top in presuit. Takeru finally found a dry spot out of the werewolfs vision to hide. after concealing himself, the young girl and sishimaru a loud thump sounded just a few feet away from there hiding spot followed by a growl, "were are you little ones?...there's no use in running i will always find you" growled the werewolf then jumped away still looking for them in a different location but still none the less close by. after telling the girl to wait here wile he and Sishimaru looked for help he ducked from underneath his hiding spot and with sishimaru at his side began to run though a back ally towards a busy road, but then out of no were appeared the same black werewolf, his appearance still fuzzy, "see, i told you i would find you" he growled as he advanced on Takeru. but before the werewolf could reach Takeru sishimaru jumped out at the werewolf with the last of his strength but was easily slammed into the side wall by the werewolf's fist, the werewolf proceeded upon Takeru, his teeth bearing its fangs, his sword glimmering in the moon light....

And like that it was all over, Takeru held high in the sky, the werewolfs blade piercing his stomach, blood dripping from Takeru's dead mouth. "Hahah. see, i told you it was futile" the black werewolf sneered. then from out of know were the werewolf dropped his blade with takeru still on it and fell to his knees and begain to scream in agony as he gripped his head, "what....what are you doing to me!!!!" he screamed at Takerus dead body and with that both The black werewolf, Lobishu and the dead silver Wolf Sishimaru turned into spirit particles. Lobishu's spirit particles flowed into Takerus dead body and attached themselves to his spirit and Sishimaru's spirit particles flowed into Lobishus blade that was used to kill Takeru, and then the sword itself disappeared into thin air leaving only Takeru's dead body laying on the ground with a trail of blood flowing into the drain pipe, and thus ended Takeru's living life...

spirit life: After his death Takeru was left to wonder as kindred spirit avast the town of karakura, his memory of his life fading away day by day until only the memory of his name and death remained. When Takeru died he did not know that later in his dead life his Killer [that was a hollow when he killed Takeru] would become his inner hollow and his best fried, Sishiamru the wolf would become his zampaku-to spirit along with the very blade that was used to kill him as his zampaku-to. [but back to the story] After many..many months of wondering with no memory of who he was aside from his name, was he able to find Yoh Asakura, a shinigami who sensed Takeru's high spirit pressure and decided to investigate only to find a spirit with a hollows presence. after Takeru under went a spirit burial he awoke in soul society along side yoh. after learning and accepting that he was dead Yoh went on to explain about shinigamis and Hollows, seeing that Takeru was interested in the subject he offered to help train him to harness his immense spirit pressure and to one day become a shinigami him self. Then, from that day forth Takeru was under the apprenticeship of Yoh asakura, seat 4 of squad 10.

The months went on and Takeru began to understand the basics but the more he learned the more he worried for there was always an evil presence in the back of his soul [his inner hollow] and soon it would make itself known for one day wile training with Yoh Takeru had to take multiple breathers, Yoh on the other hand picked up emmidietly on what was going on and stopped the training for that day and took Takeru out for spicy meat buns [Takeru's favorite food]. wile eating Yoh poked and prodded about about was wrong until Takeru finally told him, afraid that Yoh would be upset with him he looked away ashamed but he was surprised by Yoh's sound of praise he went into detail about this strange power inside of him [his hollowfication]. after there meal Yoh bid Takeru a fare-well and went on his way, wile walking he thought, "Haha, finally, if i turn that little runt into the cipher core to do experiments on they'll pay me handsomely" Yoh plotted in his mind. the next evening that they meet for training Yoh convinced Takeru to give in the power and let it empower him, Takeru trusted Yoh completely knowing not of what he had planned and went on with it. after giving into the power he was over wellmend with a destructive urge, his body now covered in a white chalky substance and black markings, his hair growing rapidly and his voice loud and hollow as he gave off roars of pain and confusion. then, as he rampaged several 10s of shinigami jumped from the trees throwing nets and capturing devices at him until he was caught. then, wile being transported Takeru seen Yoh being handed money by a man in black, Yoh looked directly at Takeu and gave a little sly smile with a wave and then turned and walked away. after that moment Takeru endured test after test no matter how painful they were until they day that the Cipher core had no further need for him and dumped his almost dead body in hueco mundo. still determined to continue living Takeru fought the cold embrace of death and trained his body in the bowls of hueco mundo killing of hollows to become stronger and training his Hollowifcation abilities and eventually materialized his zampaku-to and achieved Shikai all in a 80 year period. after which he used his hollowfication power to open a Garganta wiht little difficulty and escaped into the human world were he now resides.


Current: After escaping hueco mundo Takeru now wonders around Karakura town looking for his purpose in life, trying to find some one he can truly trust aside from his zampaku-to spirit, sishimaru. he can usually be found at the river deep in thought. he has been at this for about 20 years now, never changing appearance from that of the time he died...



Profile Layout (c) winters_Star
PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 6:32 pm


i still have to finish Takeru's entire bio, make some grammatical adjustments and add some description/info here and there but i was wondering, "how do you guys like it as of now? what should i add, take out, im looking for good credible advice" im also wondering, "based off of what i have written so far [before grammatical corrections] what rank among the vizard do you think ill become? gimme your honest hypothesis"

Zamaku

Fashionable Werewolf


everily
Captain

Eloquent Raider

PostPosted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 12:56 pm


Even if you haven't achieved Bankai, please fill that in.
I know that your character may appear nine, but please also provide your actual Shinigami age.
In all your Shikai attacks you say "The Blade". But your shikai is composed of 20 halos? Do you also have a blade?
You cannot have Chiyudo unless you were part of the Fourth Squad, or trained by the Fourth Squad Captain.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 2:59 pm


IlyanaJaggerjack
Even if you haven't achieved Bankai, please fill that in.
I know that your character may appear nine, but please also provide your actual Shinigami age.
In all your Shikai attacks you say "The Blade". But your shikai is composed of 20 halos? Do you also have a blade?
You cannot have Chiyudo unless you were part of the Fourth Squad, or trained by the Fourth Squad Captain.


alrigthy, i will take Chiyudo off, i thought i was kinda pushing it anyways sweatdrop
i will also add an 'actual age'.
and to clarify my zampaku-to consists of 20 silver Halos and my actual Zampaku-to Katana, no change has come to the blade its self.

Zamaku

Fashionable Werewolf


ZephyrsBlade
Crew

Business Businessman

PostPosted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 8:34 pm


Hi there!

I'll be looking over this profile for a bit 'cause its been kind of untouched for a while and my attention was just pointed here, and aanyways I guess I might as well get started with what came to my attention then.

-One thing is the Rapid Tempo Assault, 108 times is a bit excessive for a Shikai, lower that a lot, it'd be pretty hard to make even twenty strikes appear as one too, so yeah you'd want to either lower it or change it completely.

-The second problem is just a quantity issue with your Bankai, the limit is three for Shikai and three for Bankai, so reducing or combining the attacks would also be great!

-Thirdly, 30 second Mask Time? You're going to want to translate that into posts, since it's not very specific.

Those are the remaining issues I see blocking the path to approval. Please don't kill me!

~ZephyrsBlade
PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:43 am


almighty, i have fixed all that you have stated to be wrong with my profile. please take a look for your self then point me in the direction of the vizard leader so that i may attain my rank, thank you!

~Zamaku

P.S~ both 'urufu fusegu' & 'ko shippou toke' are not attacks but merely defensive moves

Zamaku

Fashionable Werewolf


ZephyrsBlade
Crew

Business Businessman

PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:08 pm


They're abilities though, and well please reduce it to three abilities for Shikai and Bankai, then it'll be fine. If people did go by that then they'd fill up their Shikais and Bankais with 'defensive' abilities, so reduce it to three abilities for your Shikai and Bankai and then it'll be fine, sorry if there were any misunderstandings with the wording.

~ZephyrsBlade
PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:09 pm


Alrighty, all is fixed and ready to be ranked =]

how do we go about the ranking process, do you or the Vizard leader decide on where to place me at this point?

~zamaku

Zamaku

Fashionable Werewolf


everily
Captain

Eloquent Raider

PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:34 pm


Alright all approved~

And you get to choose your own rank, and if you are indifferent about it, I'll give you a rank, the Vizard leader is MIA for a while. ^^
PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 6:46 pm


alrighty, how bout forth seat vizard?

Zamaku

Fashionable Werewolf


everily
Captain

Eloquent Raider

PostPosted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 7:15 pm


Sure.
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