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 Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:14 pm
(just a poem about the people in my life who think they know the real me)
Hidden
you call me a loser,
you break me down,
you hurt me,
i never shed a tear,
my emotions hide withen,
you say you hate me,
i just glare,
inside i scream i love you,
but on the outside i remain silent,
the tears well up,
i stay in control,
my heart drowns in a sea of unshed tears,
a sea of sadness,
you keep yelling,
the real me rages withen
she fights to break free,
to run to you and say i love you,
i have caged her and she
too drowns as my heart aches,
she remains hidden,locked away
and only you have the key
to set her free.
but you dont know this
i suffer in silence while she remains
hidden
(comments welcomed, dont be too harsh though ^_^)
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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 6:25 am
That was awesome. I'm seriously speechless. I feel that way a lot. But I never thought anyone but me would write about it. Great job! xd
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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 10:42 am
thank you ^_^, im glad you liked it, i honestly didnt think anyone would notice this little poem next to the amazing talent of the other members, so thank you for commenting ^_^.
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