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With My Last Breath, On My Last Night

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Ash-Max1

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:34 pm


With my last breath, On my last night

As I stopped and listened,
I heard the sound of something pounding,
Then I realized it was my heart that I was hearing,
Beating fast and cold like the wind,
Doing what it willed,
Soon my heart slowed and as time raced on by I became as scared as ever,
I realized where I was and I became more afraid,
Afraid of what was to become of me,
For I was in the deepest darkest part of the dark and forbidden forest.
For here no one that went in would ever come out.
And standing in this position right now made me realize now that I should have never ran away from home, now being sure of my death I whispered with my last undying breathe into the air “I love you mom and dad and the rest of the family”. and then I let go of myself and released my soul into the dark breezy night hoping that it will get to rest in peace.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 3:26 pm


Ummm.....Veryy.,.....how should i say...interesting?
It's like way long, and kinda doesnt make sense as a poem.

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Ash-Max1

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:34 am


ok well it dont madder
PostPosted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 3:29 pm


Whatever you say...

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:52 pm


idk I got it...kinda sad though
PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:05 pm


i wrote it when i was kinda sad lonley and plain out bored and kinda planing to run but hey that was the past

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:09 pm


know the feeling just remember you need some thing you know my screen name
PostPosted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:07 pm


very good. nice job.  

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