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Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:52 am

this is just a random poem

the person you seek
the life you new
what dose it mean
we do not know
who is we
who is i

Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:31 pm

it is intersting maybe one lil thing is in need of changing but other than that it is great!

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Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:10 pm

short, smart. very nice job.

Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 7:59 pm

ash max i think he did fine. poems dont need to rhyme u know. he doesnt need to change anything.

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