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 Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:07 pm
SO, this is Zollity Rozen and her hammer's name is Scouter. She is my OC for Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS. I was wondering if you could tell me if she is good or not. Based on: -Shading -Style -Stance -Weapon Creation -Outfit -Background I would greatly apprecitate some critques and feed back on her. 
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:12 pm
Wow, thats awsome!! i don't think there needs to be anything fixed.
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Electronic Diva Vice Captain
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SilverBowAndArrow Captain
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:16 pm
It looks cool did you draw it or is it digital?
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:42 pm
First of all - god damn - this is awesome!
This is perfect, nothing i could crit.
-Shading: great. Clothing, Hair, Amor, Background - so far there is nothing you could make brighter or darker. Well all in all it looks like standing in a forest so the lightning fits.
-Style: Not a huge Anime Fan, but well that's what you might prefer. Just refering to the face, the rest could also be comic-ish. Therefore i like the outlines. May i ask which programm you used? Everything looks smooth so yes, i like that!
-Weapon Creation: Original, not a boring sword or Gun. Don't know which creature/hero your Char should be but her expression tell me she is a strong female so this huge .. Hammer(?) is wise choosen. I just wondering about the "upper" part of the weapon - the pastel purple part does not really fit, just my opinion. (comparing to her outfit)
-Outfit: There is nothing to add. Perfect all in all.
-Background: Good. Personal i don't like the front-ground part, cause it's too blurry, but the rest is great, cause it shouldn't pop into the eyes. If i compare the stones in the background to the stone in the front - they look way detailed, maybe it's just me, but maybe this could be a bit edit.
All in all - great! AWESOME work!
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Wrath the Warmachine Crew
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Posted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 3:09 pm
Gosh, my jaw just dropped from that drawing. It's simply FANTASTIC and I'm afraid I don't have any better adjective to describe it.
Shading: Nice shading done on different textures. I like how you made metallic look to gold trims. Skin's good, so's the hair. Are there two light sources? (from looking at her knees)
Style: smile Lovely anime. Long live japanese art. I like how everything is at sort of an angle. No boring "face-on". Feels like the character's moving around.
Stance: Waist-above looks great. Balancing of the weapon with her left hand, smile . Her right foot seems to be a bit twisted. It might be better to turn it outward. You know, balancing.
Weapon Creation: smile Kick-a$$ sledgehammer w/ a spike. Simple and effective. Like floral patterns on the hammer.
Outfit: Nice use of curves and symbols. Her belt's fleur-de-lis is awesome. Chest plate and helm goes together nicely. Good job.
Background: Not too dark, not too light, it's all good. Grey rocks do emphasize her from the forest.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 12:05 pm
I like the girls coloring
the left leg is a little weird
she kinda looks like she's floating
tho i can't quite pinpoint why or where
the clothing and armor is good
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 7:08 pm
Ooh!
Pretty!
But I have to agree with Arayza, her stance is wierd.
I think it's her right leg (the leg on the left) it should look farther back than her left leg (the one on the right) and facing the left the way it is now she looks like she's gonna dislocate something which is bad with a hammer like that...
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:28 am
It looks so good! I feel so incompetant now, crying , lol.
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