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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:38 am
~10th Division Join Requests~ Join requests may be accepted by either the squad Captain, me, or the Vice-Captain (currently none). Please post all join requests here in this format:[b]Username:[/b] [b]RPC Name:[/b] [b]Zanpaktou's Element:[/b] [b]Sample Post:[/b] I will be judging the sample post. If you are accepted, please PM me a link to your profile to get it accepted.
NOTE: Your Zanpaktou must have an element-based power to be in this division. After all, we are the "Imperial Elements" squad!
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Posted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 12:00 pm
Username: The_Epic_Muffin RPC Name: Maria St. Claire Zanpaktou's Element: Lightning Sample Post: At this point, Maria was on her last legs; the seating tournament of Squad Ten had commenced, and her opponent was in a higher league than she, and had much more training. His attacks with fire were relentless and brutal, and the newer member of Squad Ten found it more than difficult to keep up. "What's wrong?" He would jeer, "Having too much difficulty fighting me?" Fact of the matter was, Maria hadn't released her Shikai, and her foe was fighting full power. She hadn't wanted to release it against a male, because she believed that she could best him without releasing. However, it seemed that this wasn't the case anymore; she would have to release, or lose to this arrogant loser right here and now.
".....You asked for it, you impudent wretch!" Maria stabbed her large blade into the ground, after dodging yet another fireball. "Impale, Sir Gallahad!" Suddenly, the area around her flashed with a bright light, and her appearance had drastically changed; she now sported white armor instead of her black armor, and her once raven colored hair had turned a shining, beautiful blond. Her already large blade had turned into a massive great sword, which she lifted over her shoulder with one hand, seeming to have no difficulty in performing said act. Her hands and the blade crackled with lightning power, and, as she rose her free hand, a bolt of lightning shot at her foe straight from it. Due to the speed of the lightning, he had little time to react, and found himself being blown back by the force of the impact, now suffering heavy burns to his torso from the heat of the bolt.
Maria, however, wasn't finished. She swung her blade down in a deadly arc, and a wave of lightning energy erupted from it, cracking and burning the ground as it soared straight at her foe. He had to roll out of the way in order to evade, which spelled his doom. "Bakudo Number Nine....Horin!" An orange tendril of energy shot from her fingertips, and wrapped itself around the man's leg. After a pull from Maria's enhanced strength, he found himself moving through the air at a relatively high speed toward her. Within a few moments, Maria rose her blade, and, as the man drew near enough, she thrust her blade through him, forcing him down to the ground, both pinned and impaled by the blade. She'd gotten him through the chest, and stopped his heart from beating; he was already dead.
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Posted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:19 pm
Accepted!
Please PM me your profile once you're finished with it.
Interesting that you're going for a lady this time~
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Posted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:30 pm
I roleplay either gender when I feel like it. Gender barriers don't apply to me.
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Posted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:49 pm
Heh... I should try some time. Though I think I would make a rubbish guy.
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Posted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:14 pm
Username: HelloItsJoe RPC Name: Tsunayoshi Sawada Zanpaktou's Element: Fire Sample Post: [Haha, this is my first time attempting a Bleach Rp post. >< Sorry if it's not great.]
Read X-BURNER if your confused. =D
"T-Traitor...?" Tsunayoshi watched as his Squad's Vice Captain was stabbed in the back by the Third Seat Officer. He then turned his attention to Tsuna, a sinister grin on his face. "Heheh... I thought I might have been in trouble when I felt a reiatsu, but it's just the new recruit..." Tsuna's face was hidden as his head hung down. His body was still, but his fists were clenched tight. "I'll just kill you like I did the Vice Captain!" As the traitor stepped forward, Tsuna's fist tightened so much his fingers began to crack.
The air began to swirl around Tsuna, as he released his spiritual pressure. The traitor drew his Zanpakuto, and attempted to ready his stance. Too bad Tsuna's blade had already crashed into the traitors. "I won't forgive you!" Tsuna looked up at his enemy. The look in his eyes were different than the usual Tsunayoshi's. These were more menacing, more angry, more determined. "Natsu..." He began speaking softly, his volume rising each time the blades clashed. "Feed the flame!" He shouted. Suddenly, a huge orange flame enveloped him. The opponent leaped backwards, to watch, and see what happened.
As the flame looking spiritual pressure began to fade, all that could be heard was, "X-BURNER!" Tsunayoshi's stance was odd. His right hand pointed in front of him. His left pointed toward his back end. Though, there was no blade in his hands. All he was armed with was a pair of gloves. Though, they weren't just any gloves. A large circular flame radiated from Tsuna's left hand. From his right, a torrent of flames raced toward the traitors position. "WHA-?!" This was the X-Burner. The left hand radiated a flame to keep Tsuna sturdy while he fired his blast from his right hand. After that attack, the glove's on Tsunayoshi's hands faded away, and in his hand was his Zanpakuto.
As for the traitor, all that was left was ashes...
[If there's something wrong, let me know so I can fix it. =D]
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Posted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:21 pm
Accepted! Your RP post was not at all bad.
But unfortunately you must re-do your profile. While you can draw inspiration from existing characters (whether from anime, books, films etc.) - you can't just copy their name, appearance and abilities, as you have done with Tsuna. Everybody here has thought up of completely original characters, and everybody joining is expected to do the same ^^
Also, you may want to keep your Bankai within the fire element, if that is going to be your element. If you really want a Zanpaktou that can freeze things, you can have a fire/ice Zanpaktou and mix them around (e.g. two fire and two ice abilities in Shikai, not just fire in Shikai and ice in Bankai).
Please PM me with a new profile once you've finished with it~
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Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:37 pm
Username: drizzit1121 RPC Name: yiel,kaginari Zanpaktou's Element: ice Sample Post: kaginari steped up to face an arancar. he didnt know what rank this arancar was but he didnt care. the arancar launched itself at him. luckily he already had his shikai released. he pointed his sword at the arancar,waiting for it to get close enough. when there was no time for kaginari to deflect or dodge he simply said.''vidka'' suddenly a beam of ice shot out at the arancar.but being an arancar he was too fast,simply avoiding the beam.
knowing he underestimated his opponent kaginari took a punch directly in his stomach. kaginari's vision went blurry,as he started to blackout. the arancar let kaginari fall.''you will never kill me soul reaper. as kaginari was falling he raised his sword and made a slashing motion.''vidkin'' a cresent shaped slash liquid nitrogen suddenly found it's way towards the arancar.
the arancar just raised his sword laughing.up untill the nitrogen wrapped around his sword and covered him.frezzing every thing instantley.
[feel free to judge. hope i did a good job. first bleach sample i have done.feed back is a must.]
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Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 6:25 am
Sorry, I can't accept this at the moment. Although your writing skills aren't that bad, there is virtually no punctuation apart from full stops, and a few commas and speech marks. Please re-submit one that actually uses capital letters and apostrophes.
Also note that you have to start a new paragraph when a new person speaks.
For example: Quote: knowing he underestimated his opponent kaginari took a punch directly in his stomach. kaginari's vision went blurry,as he started to blackout. the arancar let kaginari fall.''you will never kill me soul reaper. as kaginari was falling he raised his sword and made a slashing motion.''vidkin'' a cresent shaped slash liquid nitrogen suddenly found it's way towards the arancar. should look like (with all punctuation and grammar errors corrected):Quote: Knowing he had underestimated his opponent, Kaginari took a punch directly to his stomach. Kaginari's vision went blurry, as he started to black out. The Arrancar let Kaginari fall. ''You will never kill me, Soul Reaper." As Kaginari was falling he raised his sword and made a slashing motion. ''Vidkin.'' A cresent shaped arc (( you can't have a cresent shaped "slash" )) of liquid nitrogen suddenly found its way towards the Arrancar. Note that "its" does not have an apostrophe unless it's an abbreviation of "it is".
Another tip would be not to use your character's name so much. Using the same paragraph as an example, you could have written:Quote: Knowing he had underestimated his opponent, Kaginari took a punch directly to his stomach. His vision went blurry, as he started to black out. The Arrancar let him fall. ''You will never kill me, Soul Reaper." As the seemingly defeated Shinigami was falling, he raised his sword and made a slashing motion. ''Vidkin.'' A cresent shaped arc of liquid nitrogen suddenly found its way towards the Arrancar. Also, you could be more descriptive in your writing. Again:Quote: Knowing he had underestimated his opponent, Kaginari took a punch directly to his stomach, which winded him severely. Blood spurted from the ribs that had cracked on impact with the Arrancar's tough Hierro. His vision blurred, as he blinked rapidly, trying to retain his consciousness. The scene swam before him, and he lost all sense of balance - only vaguely aware of the Arrancar, a looming shadow watching him slowly fall through the air. ''You will never kill me, Soul Reaper," it spat in contempt, its sneer mocking Kaginari. At this, anger burned through him, inflamed by the bitter taste of defeat. He couldn't lose, not after all the effort he had put in to come this far. I will not... go down so easily!As the seemingly defeated Shinigami was falling, slowly, but surely he raised his sword once more and made a vicious slashing motion. ''Vidkin,'' Kaginari called out imperatively. A cresent shaped arc of liquid nitrogen suddenly formed from his blade, soaring towards the Arrancar with lightening speed and precision. There was no escape. You get the idea.
I need you to submit another sample post (a different one, please, so I know that you're not just copying the stuff I wrote) ^^
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 12:30 pm
Liani Vine Sorry, I can't accept this at the moment. Although your writing skills aren't that bad, there is virtually no punctuation apart from full stops, and a few commas and speech marks. Please re-submit one that actually uses capital letters and apostrophes.
Also note that you have to start a new paragraph when a new person speaks.
For example: Quote: knowing he underestimated his opponent kaginari took a punch directly in his stomach. kaginari's vision went blurry,as he started to blackout. the arancar let kaginari fall.''you will never kill me soul reaper. as kaginari was falling he raised his sword and made a slashing motion.''vidkin'' a cresent shaped slash liquid nitrogen suddenly found it's way towards the arancar. should look like (with all punctuation and grammar errors corrected):Quote: Knowing he had underestimated his opponent, Kaginari took a punch directly to his stomach. Kaginari's vision went blurry, as he started to black out. The Arrancar let Kaginari fall. ''You will never kill me, Soul Reaper." As Kaginari was falling he raised his sword and made a slashing motion. ''Vidkin.'' A cresent shaped arc (( you can't have a cresent shaped "slash" )) of liquid nitrogen suddenly found its way towards the Arrancar. Note that "its" does not have an apostrophe unless it's an abbreviation of "it is".
Another tip would be not to use your character's name so much. Using the same paragraph as an example, you could have written:Quote: Knowing he had underestimated his opponent, Kaginari took a punch directly to his stomach. His vision went blurry, as he started to black out. The Arrancar let him fall. ''You will never kill me, Soul Reaper." As the seemingly defeated Shinigami was falling, he raised his sword and made a slashing motion. ''Vidkin.'' A cresent shaped arc of liquid nitrogen suddenly found its way towards the Arrancar. Also, you could be more descriptive in your writing. Again:Quote: Knowing he had underestimated his opponent, Kaginari took a punch directly to his stomach, which winded him severely. Blood spurted from the ribs that had cracked on impact with the Arrancar's tough Hierro. His vision blurred, as he blinked rapidly, trying to retain his consciousness. The scene swam before him, and he lost all sense of balance - only vaguely aware of the Arrancar, a looming shadow watching him slowly fall through the air. ''You will never kill me, Soul Reaper," it spat in contempt, its sneer mocking Kaginari. At this, anger burned through him, inflamed by the bitter taste of defeat. He couldn't lose, not after all the effort he had put in to come this far. I will not... go down so easily!As the seemingly defeated Shinigami was falling, slowly, but surely he raised his sword once more and made a vicious slashing motion. ''Vidkin,'' Kaginari called out imperatively. A cresent shaped arc of liquid nitrogen suddenly formed from his blade, soaring towards the Arrancar with lightening speed and precision. There was no escape. You get the idea.
I need you to submit another sample post (a different one, please, so I know that you're not just copying the stuff I wrote) ^^ ok ty for the tips. i did that in a sorta rush sorry.
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:30 pm
Username: drizzit1121 RPC Name: Yiel, Kaginari Zanpaktou's Element: Ice Sample Post: Kaginari drew his sword, the sunlight listened off his silver blade. He faced the other Shinigami, glancing over the other male's body. "So are you gonna start this or should I?" The small, boy-like Shinigami questioned the other, his voice slick with sarcasm. Kozin, the opposing Shinigami glared at Kaginari. ''For a small brat with no shikai you are a bit cocky, aren't you. I guess I'll take you out quickly. I won't surrender my seat to the likes of you!" The Bald male roared, running toward the smaller Shinigami, his blade trailing behind him.
Kozin swung his blade quickly, almost disappearing from sight. Kaginari smirked, swinging his zanpakto blocking the other's attack just as swiftly. "You'll have to be better than this." Kaginari sneered, pulling his sword from its defensive position, and quickly slashing at the bald man's lower torso. Blood spurted from Kozin's slash wound. Crimson red filled the air, staining the taller man's clothing.
"Damn it! How dare you, you little brat!" The bleeding Shinigami screamed, slamming the hilt of his sword into Kaginari's chest. A sickening crack could be heard. Kaginari let out a blood curdling cry. "You're pathetic, you piece of crap! How dare you think you can beat me. One so small doesn't deserve to be a Shinigami!" Kozin scream, slamming his blade down over the smaller Shinigami's body.
Kaginari flinched in his crouched form on the ground, anticipating the attack. The metal clang of two swords smacking together. Kaginari's eyes opened wide and he looked up. A girl with golden brown locks blocked Kozin's Zonpakto. "M-Mika!" Kaginari said, shocked. "That is enough, now get out of here before I kill you." The girl stated towards the bald Shinigami, her tone dead serious. Kozin growled, "I-I'll get you for this, one day, you better watch your back!" The bald Shinigami screamed as he fled for safety. "Pathetic. Using a cheap trick like that. Are you okay... Kaginari?" The girl questioned the smaller boy. Honey optics gazed sincerely at the small male's form. Kaginari looked at her with a soft smile. "Th-thank you, Mika." He grinned a her. Soft laughter filled the air around the two.
((Also, I havea question. Is it okay if I use "Soul Reaper" to describe them every once in a while. I had to repeat Shinigami several times, and I was just wandering if it was alright to use the American term?Also, I'm quite sorry for being so lezy. My friend started screaming at me until I got this right.))
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:49 pm
That's much better already! Accepted~
Please PM me your profile so I can take a look at that too. However, I won't get a look at it until Monday 2nd August, because I'm away until then with no Internet. You can post in the OOC threads, but not in-character until your profile's accepted by me. Sorry -_-;
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Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:21 pm
Username: Pacisfista px-0 RPC Name: Urufu Senkou Zanpaktou's Element: Lightning and Darkness Sample Post: Quietly sitting in the cloudy spring as the wind takes the anger away. Senkou meditates for the time being. He was at ease and mostly peaceful at the time while the academy squad didn't need him for the moment. So he'd just relax until he heard a loud bang! Coming from the north, he just ignored it and kept his eyes clothes hoping that nothing could interrupt his peace.''....'' Nothing but silence yet again..Until suddenly a loud scream was heard.. What was it? The young shinigami in the making stood from his yoga position and opened his eyes slowly. Revealing a emerald glimmer from his eyes he carefully started to scrutinize the entire area surrounding his self.''....''
Senkou quickly placed a hand to the side of him next to his hip as if he were going to draw his blade yet they were posted on his back. He started to dash forward into the stormy day. Wind blowing as the water started flowing he knew something was up. Looking at the wind he predicted a bigger storm so he hurried for his now mission heading to the rukongai as fast as he could. Upon arrival Senkou looked and saw a body part more like a limb fall in front of him only to be picked up by the terrorizing spirit known to shinigami as a hollow.''....'' He just stood still and glared as the hollow would look his way and smile with a sinister appearance. Senkou didn't draw his blades like any other shinigami would but instead started to dance around in a way. The hollow just jumped down and landed hard making a small shake occur under him.'' Are you going to be able to handle me soul reaper?'' He asked in a evil jokingly manner. Though Senkou as usual didn't answer..
The Hollow that was terrorizing the place just laughed as if it weren't nothing until he would feel a sharp pain on its left shoulder. Senkou had speed and used it to throw needles at the hollow which pierced but had a little to almost no effect. The hollow just looked at it and smiled as it rained even more. Senkou would wait for it as it lunged towards him and tried to snap his arm with its mouth though not seeing it coming the hollow would eat into the earth not knowing what had just happened.''...'' He stayed silent as he would be over the hollow still flipping before he landed on its head and tapped it in a wake up sleepy head motion.'' Darn you soul reaper! Now I'm pis--!!!'' The hollow was cut off as Senkou gave it no time to react by impaling it with his twin zanpakuto's right in the scalp. The Hollow would collapse and start to scatter into many particles slowly saying only one thing as Senkou glared at it one more time as the storm passed by.'' Curse...you....''
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Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 2:32 pm
Accepted!
Please PM me with your profile so I can look over it~
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Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:09 pm
Username:Sergeant Bloodhound RPC Name:Katsu Saonaru Zanpaktou's Element:Lava Sample Post: Katsu slashed as another hollow disappeared. Thirty-seven hollows were exorcised by him at this time, which got him annoyed since fifty more came. "Erupt, Kamikazen" Katsu muttered as he touched the tip of his zanpacto to the ground. Flames burst and sank from the ground and lava spewed out. It surrounded his blade as he brought the sword over his head and slashed in the general area of the hollow. A cutting blade of lava came up when the blade went down and cut and burned its way through the hollow. A flying hollow dived as more ground hollow charged. Katsu charged at them while using lava to cover his rear and top from the bird hollow. Swiftly cutting the enemy with the magma layer on the blade. Ten left on the terrain now changed to rivers of lava. Katsu didn't waste time thinking as he touched the blade and spun around multiple times, creating a stream of ribbon-like blades of lava. These launched outward, cutting the remaining hollows to pieces as they disappeared.
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